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Chapter 3 - Chapter 3: Something's watching me.

There's a type of fear that doesn't spike. Doesn't scream. Doesn't even feel like fear at first.

It's quiet. Slow. Creeping.

Like realizing too late that the door was unlocked all night.

That was the feeling now.

This wasn't a dream. Not some sleep-paralysis hallucination. My bare feet were cold on the concrete. The wind was real. Too real—crisp and dry, like the city had been frozen mid-breath. My hands were shaking, not from cold, but because I didn't understand how I got here.

One second I was in my room.

The next, I was standing on the roof of the opposite building.

And the girl—she was just staring at me.

Small, maybe 10 or 11. Dark hair. Pale skin that almost looked powdered. Her black notebook looked too heavy for her hands. The gold in her eyes wasn't just color—it glowed like backlit pixels. She wasn't breathing. Or blinking.

Just watching.

"You finished the story," she said. "You opened the last seal."

My throat felt dry. "What… What are you talking about?"

"The Archive. It's awake now. You brought it back."

I took a step back, instinctively. "Who are you?"

She tilted her head.

"That's not the question you should be asking."

Her voice was so calm. Too calm. Like she'd said this hundreds of times before.

I glanced behind me. The rooftop was maybe seven stories up. Same apartment district. Same cracked satellite dishes. But the sky above? It had gone purple-blue, like a bruise. No stars. Just the reversed clock ticking away—hours, minutes, seconds.

[Time Until First Rewrite Complete: 167:42:31]

"I didn't open anything," I said. "I just read something that—someone else wrote."

She nodded, gently. "That's the second lie."

I felt it then. Like something tightening inside me. My ribs didn't move the same. Breathing felt sharp.

[Penalty: Cognitive Discrepancy – 2% Resonance Desync][Please refrain from resisting the narrative.]

What the hell was that?

"Wait—why am I being punished?"

"You're not," she said, still watching. "The story is correcting you."

I stared at her.

"This is insane. I didn't sign up for this. I was just reading."

"You weren't just reading," she replied. "You were the only one reading."

She held up the notebook.

And something in my chest pulled forward—like it recognized it. I couldn't explain it. Like muscle memory. Like the way your hand remembers how to type your password without thinking.

"I don't want this," I muttered.

"You don't get to want. The Archive chose you."

She opened the notebook.

And I saw it.

The words on the page were written in my handwriting.

And not just sentences. Not just notes.

Thoughts.

Private ones.

"If I disappeared tomorrow, nobody would really notice."

"I wonder how many people feel like background extras in their own lives."

"I only feel alive when I'm reading something no one else has."

My stomach flipped.

"How… how did you get this?"

She didn't answer.

Instead, she turned the page.

A new line had appeared at the bottom:

"Aren Yeo looks at his own thoughts, not knowing how they were written."

The words formed as I read them.

She closed the notebook. "It's starting."

"What is?"

Her golden eyes didn't blink. "The first Rewrite. The world you knew is being overwritten."

And then—

The building shook.

A low, guttural vibration rumbled under our feet. Sirens echoed in the distance. But no lights. No screams. Just the sound of concrete groaning under some unseen weight.

The girl backed away.

"You need to go."

"Go where?!"

"Somewhere you weren't supposed to be."

[Objective Received: Escape the Scripted Path][Warning: Observation Level Increasing]

Before I could ask more, the girl vanished. No smoke. No flash. Just… blinked out, like a cursor turning off.

And I was alone.

Except—I wasn't.

I felt it before I saw it.

Something watching me from below.

From the alley between the buildings.

At first it looked like a shadow. But it moved wrong. Too tall. Too thin. And its head… was tilted the same way mine had been when I looked in the mirror.

[Hostile Entity Detected: Echo of the Observer][Narrative Instability: 6% and rising]

My body moved before my brain did. I bolted for the stairwell door.

Shoved it open. Nearly tripped down the first step. No lights inside—just pitch-black concrete stairs spiraling downward. But anything was better than staying up there.

My footsteps echoed as I sprinted down the stairwell. Five floors. Four. Three.

Something behind me was moving.

Not chasing. Not stomping.

Just… rewriting the space around it.

I could feel it. Words forming in the walls. In the air. Like the world wasn't made of brick anymore—but of sentences. Sentences that were trying to catch me.

"Aren didn't make it to the first floor.""Aren tripped.""Aren broke his neck."

I gritted my teeth. "No."

And that's when the sentences broke.

The walls glitched.

The text glitched.

[Override Detected: Catalyst Authority 1%][Narrative Denial Successful]

I reached the first floor.

I threw the door open and stumbled into the hallway.

Everything was quiet again.

But the air felt wrong. Heavy. Like it had been rewritten mid-breath.

I didn't know where I was anymore.

It looked like my apartment building.

But it didn't feel like it.

The doors looked stretched. The hallway went too long. The EXIT signs were blank. And in the distance, down the impossible corridor…

A second version of me was walking away.

Same hair. Same clothes. Same posture.

I froze.

"The Archive remembers all versions of you, Aren."

And from behind me, I heard the notebook girl's voice echo one last time:

"Only the real one gets to keep existing."

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