Max woke up and thought about jelin. Even though it has been years that they have broken up. He couldn't particularly get her out of his head that time. He remembered the great tune they had before they got seperated.
"Man, if only I was a little stronger...Jelin would've been head over heels for me right now. Yet here I am wasting my time while being in debt." Max says as her face flashes through his mind." I wonder how she is doi-"
Suddenly a knock comes from the door.
"Who the fuck is knocking at my door right now." Max says as he reaches to grab the door knob. Suddenly the door breaks and max gets hurled into the floor. "Hey mate, when's the loan gonna get payed back? Don't think that we've forgotten already." The loan collecter says.
"What the fuck bro?For fuck sake i was about to open the damn door. Now I got a fucking broken door because I 'couldn't pay my college debt'. " Max says in irritation. "Now I have to get another damn loan just to fix this!"
"Ay! Not our problem. You've got bills to pay mate. Just cause you're a nobody with no stable career in this city doesn't mean we'll ignore the loan you have taken from us" the loan collecter says as he looks at the mess he made. " Bloody hell this door needed a replacement. No wonder I broke it so easily. Welp if you need a loan for that too I got you covered, just pay the $114,993 you own to the gold bank, you bloody can't."
"FUCK YOU" Screams max in anger. "Atleast fix the damn door with your damn money. You're working on the only profitable facility in this darn city."
"For crying out loud, listen here max. Noone told you to take a damn loan from our bank and noone told you to be a dickhead." Says the loan manager as he sighs. " I know getting a job in this city is like becoming a celebrity, it's goddamn impossible mate. I suggest joining a gang mate."
"Fuck you" says max as he stood up in anger. He wanted to break every bone of the loan collecter but he knew that his dumbass getting in a fight will certainly end in a loss.
"Well fuck you too mate, I'm off to collect another customer's loan. I don't know how he got away with loaning a million dollars considering he looks homeless." Says the loan collecter while slowly turning his body to leave. Before he left he turned back towards max and showed a middle finger at him. Max could do nothing but bowed down his head with anger. "That's what I fucking thought" said the loan collecter as he left.
"Man the day hasn't even started completely and this mother fucker broke my door. Now I got to ask the other bank to fic this piece of shit." Max says to himself as he suddenly remebers jelin. " Why the fuck am i remembering her in a situation like this?" Max says to himself as he remembered the time jelin and he were holding hands in the graduation.
"Man I gotta go find her" says max as he reaches for his phone. He tries to call jelin desperately but she didn't pick up. "Huh?! What the fuck?! She usually picked up just to say fuck you. Did she actually leave my dumbass?" Max says as panick starts to kick in. He was never this stressed before. He didn't know what to do. He tried remembering what happened the last time she called and it all started to click.
"Holy shit, she must have moved on from me! Oh fuck!" Max says as he wonders what in the fuck he's gonna do after knowing that information.
" Hmm.. maybe I should go check up on her" says max as he gets ready to meet jelin...
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In the night-time
Max jumps on the fence, looks at the scenery and wonders why the hell he is doing all this just to see a girl that betrayed him.
"Fuck it"
He ducked down and touched the grass below, he saw all of the lights in her room dead. 'Alright' he whispered. He crouched and walked slowly as possible to not make a single noise. ' It's weird how she's sleeping at this particular time ' he thought. He rushed infront of the door and was shocked to see the door opened.
"Well that's new" Max says as he slowly opens the door like he was a murderer." This feels wrong, but she will kick my ass after all this anyways"
Max slowly gets in the house. He wonders around silently but was shocked. The house was empty. "What the fuck " he says as he tries to find jelin. Max wonders where jelin could be at this moment.
"Oh! I expected you to come but not this early! Guess you really liked her"
Max turned as fast as he could but suddenly he felt a hand on his chest. He flew across the room, breaking tye wall in the process while he bleeds from his right nostril. He coughed in pain as he wonders what just happened as he felt all of it in light speed
" Let's see who you truly are max. I've heard alot about you. Let's see what you're truly capable of."
Max looks at his hand and as he is trying to process what the hell just happened. He could barely hear or see. He looked straight and saw someone he had never seen. A man with long hair and a full grown mustache and beard. He looked anonymous as he was wearing a big crimson coat and pants with a tie as black as a tar. He looked as he wanted something from max.
"Let's cut the bullshit and start the action" the man says while slowly fixing his tie and coat.
Max tries to speak but the man's fist was already touching his face. A second later max was found on the ground bleeding non-stop from his mouth. He couldn't fathom what just occurred and was unable to stand. He saw the man's shoes and knew he was gonna get beaten to death. The man looked at max with pity on his face and wondered why he was so excited to fight him.
He fixes his tie and coat so he could look good while beating the living crap out of this poor boy, suddenly it started raining.
He looked up as every drop missed him and hit max. He sighs as he kicks max's face with his shoes.
"Pathetic" He says as he looks at max with dissapointment in his face. " I thought you were stronger than this."
He stopped kicking max and leaned on the front door of jelin's home. He took a cigarette and a lighter from his pocket and started smoking as he looked at max trying his best to stand up. He thought about killing him after the smoke break.
" So I got lied to again huh? Welp i guess another dead body won't matter in this city." He says as he gets up and throws the cigarette onto the lawn.
But when he looked at the place where max was lying, He wasn't there. He looked confused as he knew he had just beaten up a random civilian. "Where the fuck did this retard go?" He asked himself.
He didn't know what to do so he went inside of jelin's home and as he looked suddenly there was nothing. He was in a place where there was nothing, just a void of air.
He started to think how to get out of this situation but then he suddenly heard a whisper, he wasn't alone. He turned and saw max standing in a deformed form. It was like he was seeing a different person.
Max's face was deformed as he looked like he was a blackhole consuming everything in his way. His whole body was deformed into a form as of a predator getting ready to kill lf his prey. He didn't even look like a person anymore, He looked more like an entity.
" I guess now you wanna be 'serious' " the guy says as he charges in front of max with his fist ready to attack. But suddenly max was behind of him and swished his left arm. The man dodges max. He felt as if he would've been killed if he didn't dodge in time.
"What a time" he says.
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To be continued