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Chapter 44 - Chapter 44: The Forbidden Temple

The mountain rose like a cracked tooth from the world's jaw—jagged, black, and sharp enough to tear the sky.

Its slopes were dry and crumbling, split by long ridges that hissed with slow, whispering winds. No plant grew here. No bird flew near it. The forest behind them had ended in silence, and the land ahead was dust and stone and age.

Torian stared up at it with narrowed eyes.

"It's not just a mountain," he said quietly.

"It's been shaped."

Skarn grunted low, wings tight to his sides, eyes scanning the ridge above.

They were both already sweating. The air wasn't hot—it was heavy. Not from pressure, but from something older. Like memory soaked into rock.

They began the climb at midday.

There was no trail. Only broken ledges and steep drops, each one etched with long-forgotten symbols buried in the stone. The deeper they climbed, the stranger the rock became—black at first, then gray, then deep indigo flecked with green mineral veins that pulsed faintly when touched.

Torian ran his fingers across one of the ridges.

The stone throbbed.

A sound—not quite a voice, not quite a vibration—echoed faintly in his mind.

"Return."

He stepped back quickly.

Skarn growled at the stone, ready to smash it, but Torian shook his head.

"It's not alive," he whispered. "Just… remembering."

By nightfall, they reached the upper plateau.

Here, the wind stopped entirely. The air was dead still. The stars blinked overhead, but dim—like even starlight hesitated to linger here.

And there it stood.

Half-buried in the cracked skin of the mountain:

A temple.

Sunken.

Silent.

Massive.

It wasn't built with human hands.

The architecture was all wrong—angled spirals carved from a single slab of stone, with no seams, no mortar. The surface shimmered faintly with a sheen that reminded Torian of molten rock cooled in fire. But this had no heat. No warmth.

It was cold as a forgotten tomb.

He stepped forward, brushing dust from a nearby wall.

Carvings stretched across the surface—hundreds of them, layered in descending spirals that seemed to move if you looked too long.

Skarn sniffed the temple's threshold and flinched back.

Not in pain.

In warning.

"You feel it too," Torian murmured.

He stepped into the shadows.

Skarn followed, reluctantly.

The moment they crossed the threshold, the wind returned—rushing inward behind them like the breath of a dying world.

The doors—if they could be called that—sealed behind them in silence.

And the dark welcomed them in.

The Temple Within

Their footsteps echoed strangely—delayed, warped, as if the walls were remembering them in real time.

The interior was vast.

Not wide. Not tall.

Deep.

A spiral descent, winding downward like the tunnel of a great seashell, every wall etched in carvings and murals, most too eroded to read.

But some remained.

And what they showed made Torian's stomach turn.

He paused halfway down one hall and stared.

The mural before him was massive—etched in layers, with deep ridges and colorless dyes that had faded to pale stone.

At its center was a spiral-bearer.

Wreathed in flame.

He stood tall, alone, arms outstretched, surrounded by villagers who bowed or fled.

But in the next panel, the same flame-bearer was surrounded by other tribes—one wielding wind, one water, one earth. Together, they cast spears and magic upon him, striking him down.

The final panel?

A flame spiral—broken in half.

Beneath it, a single sentence in a language Torian should not have understood.

But he did.

"He burned too brightly. So they ended the light."

Torian stepped back.

"They killed their own kind."

"Just to bury the fire."

Skarn growled low.

They moved on.

As they descended, more murals showed the same.

Flame-bearers standing alone, whole cities bowing before them.

Then armies rising.

Traps laid.

Flame-bearers betrayed, surrounded, murdered.

Always by the others.

Wind. Water. Stone.

Until finally, no more flame images appeared.

The last mural showed only three spirals.

The fourth had been scraped away.

Carved out.

Gone.

They reached the final chamber just before dawn.

The air had grown thick with dust and history. Torian coughed lightly, waving it away, and entered a wide, round room with no ceiling—just an open sky, black and swirling with mist.

At the room's center stood a single black altar, carved from the same seamless stone.

And behind it—

A massive sealed door.

No handles.

No hinges.

Just a smooth face etched with three shallow spiral indentations.

Atop the altar sat three keys—each shaped from raw elemental stone.

One glowed faintly red.

It pulsed.

In time with Torian's spiral.

"Fire," he whispered.

"It's mine."

He stepped forward.

But Skarn let out a sharp grunt—deep and urgent.

He planted himself between Torian and the altar.

Torian frowned.

"What is it?"

Skarn shook his head. Growled again.

He looked at the altar.

Sniffed the air.

Then looked at the walls.

The carvings…

They'd changed.

Torian turned and looked.

The murals now showed a man identical to him.

Down to the scar on his chest.

Down to the sword at his back.

Surrounded by flame.

And beneath the carving—

An image of the man reaching for the key…

And being torn apart by stone guardians that burst from the walls.

Torian turned slowly.

Skarn growled again, backing away.

"It's a trap," Torian muttered.

"They don't want me to take it."

He stared at the glowing key.

It pulsed harder now.

His spiral answered—louder.

Stronger.

Calling him forward.

"Then again," he said.

"Maybe that means I'm supposed to."

He reached forward—

Gripped the key—

And the mountain began to scream.

The moment Torian's fingers closed around the fire-shaped key, the room came alive.

Not in pieces.

All at once.

The altar pulsed red-hot beneath his hands. The walls shook with an ear-splitting groan—like a beast exhaling after a thousand years of silence. Cracks spidered across the murals. Dust cascaded from above. The carvings around them, once still and lifeless, moved.

Skarn roared as the floor beneath him split.

A hidden seam erupted open, and from it rose a massive stone figure—eight feet tall, humanoid in shape, but built of tightly fitted plates of rock, each one inscribed with the same three unbroken spirals: water, wind, and stone.

No fire.

Never fire.

The guardian's chest glowed faintly with blue light as it raised one massive hand and slammed its fist into the ground.

The shockwave threw Torian backwards.

He hit the far wall hard, the key still clutched in his hand.

Skarn charged the guardian without hesitation, slamming his shoulder into it and knocking it sideways, but a second guardian burst from the other side of the chamber.

Then a third.

Then a fourth.

Each one was carved from different stone—granite, marble, obsidian—but all shared the same markings. Same absence of flame.

Same directive.

Eliminate the intruder.

Torian rolled to his feet, blood running from his temple.

He summoned flame—

Nothing.

He clenched his teeth.

Of course.

The temple was still suppressing it.

But his body was still his weapon.

He sprinted toward the nearest guardian as it moved to crush Skarn under its foot. He leapt, catching the back of its stone neck, and drove the key he had just claimed into the guardian's glowing spiral.

The stone groaned.

Cracked.

And exploded inward—imploding into a thousand shards of glowing dust.

"One down!" Torian shouted.

Another guardian lunged, swinging its massive arm like a hammer.

Torian ducked just in time as the stone fist shattered the altar behind him.

Skarn howled in fury and launched into the side of the creature, ripping away an entire arm with his jaws before backflipping into the air and crashing down with all his weight, shattering the creature's chest.

Another one turned to Torian—its spiral glowing.

He moved first.

Slid under its legs, kicked off the wall, and smashed the key into its back spiral from behind.

A roar—like metal tearing through bone—filled the chamber as it collapsed.

But the ceiling had started falling.

Massive cracks snaked through the dome overhead.

Chunks of rock dropped around them.

The air was thick with dust, pulsing with ancient magic and fury.

Torian looked to the sealed door—still shut tight.

"The other keys," he muttered.

But there was no time.

"Skarn! Find the path!"

Skarn growled and sprinted toward the side passage—the only section of wall not carved with spirals.

He slammed into it—

And it caved in, revealing a descending tunnel of stairs and shadows.

Torian ran after him, gripping the key tightly.

The walls groaned behind them.

Another guardian tried to rise, pulling itself from shattered stone, but Skarn's tail whipped around and cracked its face in two, sending it flying into the collapsing altar.

They ran.

The Catacombs Beneath

The staircase spiraled downward faster than any descent before. It was steep, uneven, and ancient—walls barely wide enough for Skarn to squeeze through.

There were no carvings down here.

No murals.

Just blank stone.

Raw and angry.

The deeper they went, the hotter the air became.

And not with fire.

With pressure.

Like the whole mountain was compressing around them.

After minutes of running, they entered a massive circular chamber. This one was different—clean, carved smoothly, with a perfect glass-like floor.

Torian skidded to a halt in the center.

Something wasn't right.

"Why is this here?" he muttered. "This isn't a way out."

Skarn sniffed the air.

Snarled.

Torian turned slowly—sword half drawn.

That's when the real guardian appeared.

From the far end of the chamber, the wall cracked—and from it stepped a being twice the size of the others.

Not made of stone.

Made of metal and bone.

Its face was covered in an iron mask. The spirals etched across its chest weren't shallow—they were branded, glowing with elemental light. Its body was partially burned, partially rusted, and it held in its hands a massive blade carved from petrified crystal.

It said nothing.

But it moved with purpose.

Torian stepped forward, body aching.

"You're not like the others."

"You were built to end flame."

The creature raised its blade.

Accepted the challenge.

The Final Duel

Torian struck first—fast, low, brutal.

He ducked under the guardian's slash and landed three heavy punches into its ribs. Stone cracked.

It retaliated instantly, bringing its blade down like a guillotine.

Torian rolled and kicked the inside of its leg, disrupting balance, then leapt to grab the exposed shoulder and drive the key into its upper back.

The key sparked—trying to burn.

But it didn't break the guardian.

The creature backhanded Torian across the room.

He hit the wall hard, gasping.

Blood on his lip.

Skarn charged—

But the guardian caught him mid-pounce and slammed him into the floor with a boom that shook the room.

Torian got to his feet.

Sword out now.

No fire.

Just rage.

Just fists and blade.

He ran.

Climbed Skarn's back while the beast grappled with the guardian.

Jumped.

Brought the sword down with all his weight into the masked face of the creature—

It cracked.

Then shattered.

The body trembled—

And collapsed into smoke and dust.

Silence.

The air shifted.

Above them, a ceiling panel slid open, revealing a tunnel of light.

The mountain was letting them go.

Escape

They didn't speak.

They just moved.

Climbing.

Bleeding.

Broken.

But alive.

The tunnel rose at a steep angle, breaking into daylight at the edge of the outer cliffs.

The moment Torian pulled himself into the open air, he collapsed to his knees.

Behind him, Skarn emerged—limping, burned, but still strong.

They looked back at the mountain.

Smoke drifted from its seams.

The temple had sealed itself once more.

But Torian still held the fire key in his hand.

The only one who ever had.

The wind was sharp at the summit.

It wasn't loud—just constant. A thin, cold blade that slid along the exposed ridges of stone and bone, as if the mountain itself had exhaled for the first time in an age.

Torian sat on the edge of the cracked cliff, legs dangling over the side.

The key glowed faintly in his palm.

A spiral of flame, carved from obsidian and streaked with red veins of glass-like mineral. It had no blade, no obvious power, but it vibrated against his skin like a tuning fork struck by memory.

"They buried it," he said quietly.

Skarn laid beside him, licking a wound on his shoulder. Blood stained his dark fur, but the worst of the burns were already fading.

"They didn't just banish flame… They hunted it. Stamped it out. Then built monuments to forget."

Torian turned the key over.

Each etched groove still warm.

The mountain temple had fallen silent again, swallowed by clouds that curled along its ridges like smoke returning to the earth.

Behind them lay a path of ruin—stone guardians reduced to dust, murals collapsed, traps triggered and spent. But the temple hadn't been destroyed. It had simply reacted. Not just to his presence… but to his identity.

And the mural—the one that showed a man who looked exactly like him, down to the scar on his chest—still carved itself into his mind.

"How did they know?" he whispered.

"Was I always meant to come here?"

Skarn grunted.

Torian sighed and leaned back, letting the cold wind wash over him.

"No," he said. "That's not right."

"I made myself. Flame didn't choose me. I chose not to die."

"I chose to get stronger. Chose to walk forward."

He closed his eyes.

Let the silence settle.

"But still… They remembered me."

The Key's Memory

Later that night, they made camp in a shallow crater along the edge of the cliffs. Torian dug a pit and placed the key on a flat stone. He lit a fire beside it—not with power, but with flint and spark.

It took longer.

It burned smaller.

But it burned.

The key pulsed brighter in the flame's glow.

Torian stared at it for a long time.

He didn't try to use it. Didn't try to unlock anything.

He just watched.

And for a moment, he swore he saw images in the flicker—echoes of the temple, flame-bearers walking through fire, carrying cities on their backs, leaving behind scorched sky and devastated plains.

And then… betrayal.

All of them, brought low.

The flame dimmed.

The key cooled.

Torian pulled it from the stone and placed it into his belt pouch, sealing it tight.

"One down," he muttered.

"Two to go."

He looked up at the stars.

And for the first time in weeks, the sky was clear.

The Road Ahead

By dawn, they were ready to leave the mountain.

Torian checked Skarn's wounds—half healed, though still stiff. They moved slow at first, following the ridgeline south.

In the distance, far beyond the shattered valley, a faint purple glow shimmered at the horizon. The trees there rose like towers—dark silhouettes pulsing with strange inner light.

"That's it," Torian said.

"The birthplace of magic."

"The last forest."

Skarn grunted and flared his wings, testing their strength.

They exchanged a look.

And then launched into the air.

As they flew, the wind behind them grew warmer.

Torian turned once—just briefly—to look back at the mountain that had nearly claimed them.

He couldn't see the temple anymore.

Just mist.

Stone.

Silence.

But the scar it left—on his hands, his thoughts, his fire—remained.

And so did the key.

The fire still lived.

And now the world would remember.

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