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Chapter 4 - Locked Out

PAGE 1 – NIGHT AFTER THE MATCH

Panel 1:

Riku walks out of the gym under the moonlight, towel over his neck, a light smile on his face.

System UI (floating faintly):

> System Cooldown Active — 19h 13m Remaining

No copying available during cooldown.

Panel 2:

Riku (thinking):

> "Zone Efficiency… this is what it feels like to see the game as a genius."

"But now… I'm locked out."

Panel 3:

Cut to the next morning. Gym bulletin board shows:

> Match Schedule – Day 2

Team C vs Team E

Notable Player: Kaito Ishima (National U16 Starting Guard)

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PAGE 2 – THE NEXT THREAT

Panel 1:

Riku reads the board and sees Kaito Ishima's name circled in red marker.

Panel 2:

Flashback panels of Kaito on TV:

Hitting buzzer-beaters

Breaking double-teams

Dunking over defenders

Voice-over (Coach's TV Interview):

> "Kaito's talent lies in his ability to break formations. He's chaos with a ball."

Panel 3:

Riku cracks his neck and smiles.

Riku (thinking):

> "He might have something like 'Formation Breaker – S'… but I can't copy anything for 19 hours."

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PAGE 3 – BEFORE THE MATCH

Panel 1:

Kaito walks past Riku, chewing gum, bouncing a ball lazily.

Kaito:

> "Heard about you. That game yesterday? Fluke."

"Today you're up against a real point guard."

Panel 2:

Riku just smiles, unfazed.

Riku:

> "Good. I needed someone to test this against."

Panel 3:

System Ping:

> Target Detected: Kaito Ishima

Talent: "Flow Disruption – A+"

Cooldown active. Copy unavailable.

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PAGE 4 – GAME STARTS: PRESSURE

Panel 1:

Tip-off. Kaito's team immediately plays high-pressure full-court defense.

Panel 2:

Riku gets the inbound pass. Kaito is in his face instantly.

Kaito (taunting):

> "Come on, hotshot. You got moves without your magic?"

Panel 3:

Riku uses "Street Handle King – A" and weaves through but loses his rhythm mid-drive. The pass gets tipped.

Panel 4:

Turnover. Kaito laughs, leading a fast break and scoring with a flashy layup.

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PAGE 5 – STAYING COMPOSED

Panel 1:

Coach on Riku's bench yells, "Stop hesitating! Play your game!"

Panel 2:

Riku breathes in deeply.

Riku (thinking):

> "I can't rely on new power right now."

"So I'll use what I already have better than ever."

System UI (recap display):

Street Handle King – A

Defensive Instinct – A

Zone Efficiency – S (active)

Panel 3:

The camera angle shifts — Zone Efficiency kicks in again. He anticipates a screen play from the enemy.

Panel 4:

He cuts off Kaito's drive mid-crossover, strips the ball clean.

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PAGE 6 – STRATEGIC BATTLE

Panel 1:

Riku slows the game down, starts reading all defensive formations.

Panel 2:

He uses smart fakes, passes, and screens to bait Kaito into fouls and gaps.

Panel 3:

Coach on sideline smirks.

Coach (thinking):

> "He's not the fastest… but he sees things seconds ahead."

Panel 4:

Another assist by Riku. Game tied 42–42, 2 minutes left.

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PAGE 7 – KAITO GOES WILD

Panel 1:

Kaito gets angry. His eyes sharpen. He yells, "Clear out!"

Panel 2:

1-on-1 isolation play. Kaito drives aggressively, slips past defenders, scores with a reverse layup.

Panel 3:

System UI (Riku's vision):

> Analyzing…

Flow Disruption Activated: Breaking rhythm of enemy defense.

Panel 4:

Riku grits his teeth.

Riku (thinking):

> "That's an A+ skill... Damn. If only I wasn't in cooldown."

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PAGE 8 – FINAL PLAY

Panel 1:

Riku's team down by 1 point, 12 seconds left.

Coach:

> "Takeda! Run the floor!"

Panel 2:

Riku dribbles past half-court. Kaito blocks his path.

Kaito (grinning):

> "You're not getting through me."

Panel 3:

Riku hesitates, steps back…

> Zone Efficiency kicks in.

He sees a flash of a backdoor cut opportunity. A teammate slips free.

Panel 4:

No-look bounce pass. Teammate catches it under the rim—scores.

Panel 5:

Buzzer sounds. Riku's team wins 66–65.

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PAGE 9 – POST-GAME

Panel 1:

Kaito throws his towel down.

Kaito (frustrated):

> "How the hell did I lose to you?! You're not even explosive!"

Panel 2:

Riku, panting but composed.

Riku:

> "You've got a great talent. But I've got more time."

Panel 3:

System UI:

> Cooldown Complete. Copy function reactivated.

Riku (thinking):

> "Back online."

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✅ End of Chapter 4

> Next Time: Chapter 5 – "The Talent of the Phantom"

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