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Chapter 4 - The Dress Incident

It all began on just another summer day — the kind that seemed to stretch on forever, all golden and endless. The sun hung lazily in the sky, bathing everything in a warm glow. Birds chirped from the trees, and the smell of grilled burgers and lemonade wafted through the air.

Nathan had gathered his closest friends for a day at the lake — burgers, music, and laughter echoing over the water. Of course, Daniel was there, sporting sunglasses and chuckling at something Nathan had said. His easy smile and laid-back confidence drew everyone in, even when he wasn't even trying.

Sophia was nearby, pretending to scroll through her phone but really just keeping an eye on him.

She wore a new dress that day — something a bit nicer than usual, a soft blue with thin straps. It was simple, nothing out of the ordinary, but it made her feel older, prettier. More confident.

For once, she didn't just feel like Sophia. She felt like someone worth looking at.

But that confidence came crashing down when she snagged her sleeve on a low-hanging branch while walking near the picnic area.

The tear wasn't loud, but it felt like everyone noticed.

Looking down, she saw the jagged rip stretching from her shoulder to her waist, and heat rushed to her face.

Daniel turned right toward her. "You okay?"

She couldn't bring herself to look at him. "I'm fine."

But she wasn't.

Mumbling something about needing to fix it, she hurried toward the nearest restroom, her eyes stinging with embarrassment.

Inside, she faced herself in the mirror — red-faced and disheveled, wishing she could vanish. Her reflection looked a mess. One side of her dress clung to her body, while the other hung uselessly, a sad reminder of how quickly things could go wrong.

She wondered what Daniel would say if he saw her looking like this.

Would he laugh? Tease her? Pretend he didn't see how hard this was for her?

Probably all of the above.

She closed her eyes and inhaled deeply.

This wasn't how the day was meant to go.

She shouldn't be crying over a torn dress.

She was supposed to seem cool, mature, maybe even a bit noticeable.

But here she was, hiding in the bathroom like a kid.

A knock came at the door.

"Soph?" Daniel's voice was soft, concerned.

She swallowed hard. "Yeah. Just… give me a minute."

A pause followed, then she heard a rustling sound. A plastic bag slipped under the stall door.

"I got you something," he said gently. "Just try it on. We'll figure it out."

Sophia stared at the bag for a moment before carefully pulling out a simple white sundress — nothing fancy, but clean, soft, and thoughtful.

He'd gone to a store. For her.

Her hands trembled slightly as she changed. When she stepped out, Daniel was still leaning casually against the wall, as if nothing had happened.

"You good?" he asked, not meeting her eyes.

She nodded, her voice barely a whisper. "Thanks."

Finally, he looked at her — and for the first time, there was something different in his gaze. Not teasing. Not brotherly. Just… gentle.

"You don't have to hide," he said quietly. "Not from me."

Her heart skipped a beat.

There was so much she wanted to say — that she wasn't hiding anymore, that she wished he'd see her in a different light, that she hated feeling invisible to him.

Instead, she just nodded again and walked past him, trying to ignore the ache in her chest.

He didn't know.

He still didn't see her the way she longed for him to.

But for the first time… maybe he was starting to realize she was there.

Later that evening, as everyone was packing up to go home, Sophia found herself sitting by the edge of the lake, watching the sunset dip into the water like fire melting into the sea.

Lena plopped down beside her, nudging her lightly with her elbow.

"You okay?" she asked.

Sophia shrugged. "I guess."

Lena shot her a knowing look. "It's the dress thing, isn't it?"

"It's not just the dress," Sophia admitted, staring at the horizon. "It's everything."

Lena tilted her head. "Explain."

Sophia hesitated, then whispered, "He noticed. He saw I was upset and did something about it. That's more than anyone else would've done."

Lena smirked. "So now we're analyzing every little thing he does?"

Sophia rolled her eyes. "You make it sound bad."

"I make it sound real," Lena shot back. "Because you're reading too much into every gesture like he just proposed to you."

Sophia groaned. "It wasn't that big of a deal."

"No?" Lena raised an eyebrow. "He left the group, bought you a dress, and waited outside the bathroom like some awkward romantic hero."

Sophia blushed. "He probably just felt sorry for me."

"And yet…" Lena leaned in. "You're still thinking about it."

Sophia bit her lip, glancing back where Daniel was loading the car with Nathan and their friends. He looked relaxed, happy — completely unaware of the turmoil inside her.

She sighed. "It's not fair."

"What isn't?"

"That he can do something sweet like that and not even know what it means."

Lena studied her carefully. "Then maybe you should stop letting him get away with it."

Sophia frowned. "What do you mean?"

"Stop acting like it's normal when he notices you," Lena said. "Stop pretending like it doesn't matter."

Sophia looked away. "I don't think I can."

"Why not?"

"Because if I let myself believe he sees me… even just a little… I'll start hoping for more."

"And what's wrong with that?"

Sophia smiled sadly. "Because hope hurts."

Lena shook her head. "You're never going to move on if you keep treating him like he's untouchable."

"I don't want to move on," Sophia murmured.

Lena blinked. "You what?"

"I don't want to forget him," Sophia said louder this time. "I know it's stupid. I know it's pointless. But I just… I want him to see me. Even once."

Lena exhaled slowly. "You are so gone."

Sophia didn't argue.

Because she was.

She was so gone.

Back at the house later that night, Sophia stood in front of her mirror, holding the white sundress in her hands.

She ran her fingers over the soft material, tracing the hem with her thumb.

He hadn't picked anything flashy or expensive. No lace. No frills. Just something clean. Something kind.

Something thoughtful.

And somehow, that meant more than any grand gesture ever could.

She folded it carefully and tucked it into the back of her drawer — not because she planned to wear it again, but because it felt sacred.

Like proof.

Proof that he noticed her, even if only in small ways.

Proof that maybe — just maybe — he wasn't completely oblivious to her presence.

The next morning, she woke up to find Daniel already in the kitchen, pouring himself a glass of orange juice.

He looked up as she walked in.

"You're up early," he said.

"So are you," she replied, taking a seat across from him.

He grinned. "Coffee addiction. It's a curse."

She smiled faintly, grabbing a muffin from the counter.

They sat in silence for a few moments — not awkward, not forced, just peaceful.

Then he glanced at her and said, "You looked good yesterday, by the way."

Sophia nearly choked on her muffin.

"What?" she coughed.

He chuckled. "The dress. You looked nice in it."

Heat flooded her cheeks. "Oh. Thanks."

He sipped his coffee. "It suited you."

Sophia stared at him. "Are you actually giving me a compliment?"

He laughed. "Is that so surprising?"

"Yes," she admitted. "You usually call me 'hopeless' or 'weird.'"

He smirked. "Well, you are both."

She playfully swatted his arm, and he caught her wrist easily, grinning.

"Hey," he said, still holding her hand lightly. "You good now?"

She blinked. "Huh?"

"The dress thing," he clarified. "You were upset earlier."

"Oh." She cleared her throat. "Yeah. I'm fine."

He nodded, letting go of her hand and leaning back in his chair. "Good."

Sophia tried really hard not to focus on where his fingers had just been.

As the week went by, Sophia found herself replaying their conversation in her head — not just the part where he said she looked nice, but the way he seemed to genuinely care.

It wasn't a confession.

It wasn't a proclamation of love.

But it was something.

And for now, something was enough.

Still, she couldn't shake the feeling that she was teetering on the edge of something scary.

She wasn't sure which part frightened her more — the thought that he might never see her the way she wished he would…

Or the terrifying thought that he might.

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