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Chapter 68 - The message - journey ahead

The Echo of Ascension

Dust fell like ash through the cold air.

The final echo of Malzareth's unmaking still lingered, a fading pulse in the foundation of the divine tomb. What had once held a god now stood quiet, reverent—even the sealed murals along the walls dimmed, acknowledging the end.

And in the center of the broken arena—

Alter and Takayoshi stood panting, bodies trembling beneath the weight of what they had just accomplished.

Not a word passed between them.

Only the ragged rise and fall of lungs, the creak of stressed armor, and the quiet drip of sweat on fractured stone.

Then—

⟢ SYSTEM NOTIFICATION ⟣

You have slain a Divine-Class Entity: [Malzareth – Demon God of Broken Law]

+12,850,000,000 EXP

+9,000,000 bonus EXP (Sealed State Multiplier)

Level Up! … Level Up! … Level Up! …

[Alter] → LEVEL 510 → 511 → 512 → … → 538 → 539

Alter staggered slightly.

His head dipped forward. His arms hung loosely.

Then he opened his eyes—slowly.

They burned, not with power, but with clarity.

"What…"

The system window expanded before him—massive, sprawling.

🧾 SYSTEM REWARDS

• Title Gained: Godslayer – First Seal Broken

(You have defeated a god-class entity while under sealed conditions.)

• Skills Unlocked:

– Dimensional Slash

– Still World

– Phase Walk (Lv 1)

– Eidetic Combat Recall

• Creator Authority Increased → 19% (⚠️ Locked)

• Celestial Materials Obtained:

– Crystallized Heart of Malzareth (Mythic-Grade Essence Core)

– Voidsteel Filaments (Reality-Bound)

– Fragmented Sovereign Glyph

– Chains of Unyielding Will (Broken)

• Storage Allocation: Rewards preserved. Divine tribute bypassed due to realm-lock condition.

(All rewards are yours.)

Alter's fingers trembled as he scrolled the interface.

"Nineteen percent," he whispered, voice rough with disbelief.

He tapped it—

The display lit up briefly, but the progress bar shimmered grey.

[LOCKED]

"Still locked… but it rose," he muttered. "Even sealed… killing a god pushed it higher."

A moment of realization hit.

So I can still grow… even like this.

He looked down at his hands.

Then his eyes widened.

"Dimensional Slash…"

A soft breath left his lips.

"Still World…"

They were back.

Two of his most critical techniques—finally unsealed.

For the first time in so long, he felt it:

Not hope. Not vengeance.

But momentum.

The tide had turned.

He turned slightly.

Takayoshi was seated cross-legged a short distance away, recovering his breath, eyes closed, knuckles bruised beyond recognition. But he opened one eye as Alter approached.

"You're quiet," Takayoshi said. "That usually means something ridiculous just happened."

Alter stopped beside him, shadows falling across his face.

"Level five-thirty-nine."

Takayoshi blinked once.

"…Of course it is."

Alter glanced at the pile of divine ash where Malzareth had once stood.

The core materials shimmered faintly, humming with world-breaking energy. No priest. No god. No system voice came to demand tribute.

They were his.

All of it was his.

And he would forge with it.

He looked to the upper corner of his interface, the Creator Authority bar still grey, but now reading:

[19% – LOCKED]

Even if I can't use it…

I can still feed it.

And one day, when the lock shatters—

He would reclaim everything.

The Trial Beyond Godhood

The silence was deep. Sacred.

Dust still drifted, glowing faintly in the air like divine ash suspended in still time. The tomb's arena—cracked, bloodstained, but victorious—had grown quiet.

Alter exhaled slowly, rolling his shoulders, still feeling the faint tremble of power in his limbs. Takayoshi stood beside him, holding the edge of a broken pillar, surveying the damage.

"Let's move," Takayoshi said, voice hoarse. "Before this place decides to collapse with us in it."

Alter gave a brief nod.

The two made their way toward the shimmering light where the collapsed crystal ceiling had opened above—their only path back to the surface.

But as they reached the outer edge of the tomb—

A wall of light snapped into place.

BOOM—!

Takayoshi reeled backward, instinctively raising his arms as the translucent barrier erupted, sealing the chamber once more.

Alter stopped dead in his tracks.

"A trap?" Takayoshi muttered, bracing for impact.

But nothing struck.

Instead—

The runes on the dais reignited.

Then, the walls.

Then, the ancient mural.

And from deep within the tomb…

A voice.

It echoed not from the stone, but from the very marrow of the place.

"You who have slain divinity… step not as mortals."

"You have touched the threshold."

"You… are candidates."

Alter's brows furrowed.

Takayoshi turned sharply, ready to fight.

"Who's speaking?" Alter demanded.

The air thickened.

And before them, the central dais began to shift—unfolding like a puzzle of light and stone, revealing a hidden staircase descending into glowing abyss.

"This tomb is not just a prison for the fallen," the voice continued.

"It is also… a crucible."

"A trial prepared in eras before history. For mortals who rise. For those… who may one day ascend."

🌌 The True Trial of Divinity

Above the stairwell, ethereal symbols began to form midair.

[TRIAL OF ELYSIUM: HIDDEN ASCENSION PATHWAY]

Eligibility:

– Must have slain a divine-class entity

– Must possess divine resonance or fragment of godhood

– Must carry legacy beyond mortality

The glyphs spun faster—

Then focused on Alter.

"One among you has already touched godhood," the voice said, almost reverent.

"Bearer of Creator's Authority. Former Sovereign of the Unwritten Flame. You are no stranger to ascension."

Alter's breath caught.

Even sealed… even after everything… this place had recognized it.

It knows.

"You are a candidate."

"Will you descend the path?" the voice asked.

"The Trial grants no certainty. But success… leads to true godhood."

Takayoshi turned toward him slowly.

"You're not obligated," he said. "But you knew this was coming, didn't you?"

Alter looked at the staircase of radiant stone, glowing with otherworldly pressure.

"Not here. Not now. But yes… someday."

His hand rested over the hilt of Starsever.

He could feel his Creator Authority pulse beneath his skin—still sealed, still locked, but awake.

"This trial… it could unlock everything."

He stepped forward, until the first stair hummed beneath his boot.

"It could make it permanent."

The Anchor and the Ascent

The light of the staircase pulsed gently now—steady, rhythmic, like the beating heart of the world below them.

The rest of the divine tomb had fallen silent.

No tremors. No wind. No echoes of death or gods—just that glow beneath Alter's feet, calling him forward.

But he didn't move.

Not yet.

He turned to face Takayoshi, his eyes steady despite the exhaustion still burning in his limbs.

"Before I go… I need something from you."

Takayoshi straightened, eyes narrowing slightly. "Name it."

"Tell Selene."

His voice was quiet.

"Tell her about the trial. About what happened here."

"Tell the others I'll return—but tell her…"

A pause.

The edge of his voice frayed, just slightly.

"Tell her… she's the reason I come back."

His gaze didn't waver.

"She's my anchor. If I lose sight of that down there… it's over."

Takayoshi watched him for a moment, expression unreadable.

Then, slowly, he nodded.

"I'll tell her."

"Every word."

He stepped forward, clasping Alter's shoulder with one firm hand.

"Don't worry about things up here. I'll watch the others. I'll keep them moving."

"You go—finish what you started."

Alter gave a faint, rare smile.

But it faded as he turned toward the stairwell again.

"There's one more thing…"

Takayoshi raised a brow.

"Once I enter," Alter said, "the shared senses will likely be cut."

"No communication. No signal. No resurrection."

"If I die in there…"

He trailed off.

Takayoshi finished for him.

"I'll wait."

The monk folded his arms, firm as stone.

"You'll come back. Or I'll drag you out myself."

They stood there for one last moment.

Two warriors.

Two mortals who'd killed a god.

Then Alter stepped toward the stairwell.

The light intensified.

The glyphs floated upward, wrapping around him, scanning his presence, validating his soul.

One step.

Two.

The runes closed behind him as he descended.

🕳️ The Trial Begins

The stairwell vanished into light.

And just before it sealed—

A final whisper escaped his lips.

"Wait for me, Selene…"

Then—

He was gone.

And the tomb went silent once more.

The Message Delivered, the Flame Reignited

The divine tomb sealed itself behind him.

Its golden light faded into silence, swallowed by the wounded ruins of the Southern Veil.

Takayoshi stood alone, eyes locked on the cold, scarred earth around him. The sky above was once again visible—soft indigo bruised with stars.

"...He's gone," Takayoshi whispered to no one.

"For now."

He closed his eyes.

And vanished.

🏰 Fort Valeheart – Moments Later

A surge of wind cracked against the courtyard as Takayoshi appeared outside Fort Valeheart, cloaked in dust, blood, and silence.

Guards instinctively raised their weapons—only to freeze upon seeing his face.

Inside, the halls were alive with late-night planning. Maps strewn across tables. Magical projections flickering. The Twelve Commanders gathered around, Selene standing nearest the central crystal.

She was calm—until she saw Takayoshi enter.

His expression said enough.

📜 The Message

Selene stepped forward.

"Where is he?"

Her voice barely broke.

Takayoshi walked slowly into the center of the room. His shadow stretched across the floor like a wound.

"He's alive."

A gasp.

Then a pause.

"But he's gone."

The room held its breath.

"Alter entered a divine trial," Takayoshi continued. "A realm sealed beyond even the gods' reach. He was recognized as a candidate for ascension—true godhood."

"He… he asked me to tell you—"

His voice faltered.

Selene stepped closer.

Eyes wide. Hands trembling.

"What did he say?"

Takayoshi's lips tightened.

Then finally—softly:

"That you're his anchor. His reason for returning."

The moment broke her.

Selene's knees buckled, but her comrades caught her.

Tears streamed silently down her cheeks, her shoulders shaking.

She didn't sob.

She just cried.

Takayoshi clenched a fist at his side.

I should be holding her.

I should be the one—

But he didn't.

He turned slightly, stepping back into the shadows of the hall.

The Twelve Commanders gathered around Selene.

Ilyra wrapped her in divine light.

Darius put a hand on her shoulder.

Selene, through tears, whispered:

"I knew he wasn't done yet."

🌙 That Night

The firelight crackled in the war chamber.

Takayoshi stood before the Twelve, their faces now solemn and focused.

"There are others who need to know," he said. "Allies. Witnesses. People whose choices hinge on this moment."

"I'll go alone."

No one argued.

Selene, red-eyed but composed, stood tall again. The tears had dried.

But her resolve had crystallized.

"Then go," she said.

"But tell him this."

Takayoshi paused at the door.

Selene's voice rang out—firm, unwavering.

"When he returns… I won't be waiting behind."

"I'll fight beside him. No matter where. No matter what."

"Even if it's gods we stand against next."

Takayoshi smiled faintly.

And vanished into the night once more.

Steel in Her Silence – The Commander's Resolve

Dawn came with no color.

The sky above Fort Valeheart was muted in tone—washed with grays and pale gold. But beneath that cold sky, heat filled the training courtyard.

The clang of metal echoed before sunrise.

Selene Virellia was already training.

Her sword cleaved the air with precise, brutal rhythm. Her form was perfect. But her movements were faster. Sharper. Tighter.

She wasn't practicing.

She was forging something.

Again.

And again.

And again.

CLANG. CLANG. CLANG—

Sweat dripped from her chin. Her breath came hard through clenched teeth.

She didn't stop.

Not when her arms trembled.

Not when her legs burned.

Not when blood trickled from her callused palms.

One day…

I will reach him.

🔥 The Commanders Watch

One by one, the Twelve Commanders gathered along the outer wall of the courtyard.

No one spoke.

They just watched.

Darius, arms crossed, jaw tight.

Revyn, his normally unreadable face drawn serious.

Mira Snowveil, expression heavy with understanding.

Arinelle, her summoning staff trembling in her grip.

Thorne, silently muttering war chants under his breath.

Ilyra, hands glowing faintly with protective light, whispering a prayer.

Garran, Sorei, Veyna, Caelum—all present.

Even Cidros Vane, known for his biting sarcasm, remained solemn.

Selene pivoted sharply—

CLANG!

Her blade struck a training construct so hard it split in half, sparking with residual energy.

She exhaled.

Eyes closed.

Sweat falling like rain.

Then she noticed them.

All of them.

Watching.

Waiting.

⚔️ The Spark Spreads

She didn't speak.

She just turned to face them, panting—but unbowed.

"We're not ready," she finally said, her voice rough.

"If Alter hadn't fought alone back then… if we'd been strong enough…"

"Then maybe we could have stood beside him when it mattered most."

She looked down at her blade—not ashamed. Not broken. Just clear.

"So I'll train until that changes."

"And if you mean what you say—about Mythral Dawn being his legacy—"

Her eyes lifted again, golden hair clinging to sweat-slick skin.

"Then prove it."

No one hesitated.

Darius stepped forward first, unslinging his greatshield.

"Reset the field," he said. "I'm next."

Revyn vanished—only to reappear behind a target dummy and decapitate it in a blink.

Mira Snowveil raised both hands, summoning a swirling cyclone of frost.

"Then let the ice bite deeper today."

One by one, the commanders stepped into the courtyard.

Training began anew.

Harder.

Faster.

Unrelenting.

Selene moved through them—not above them—but with them.

Steel sang. Voices shouted. Magic lit the stone.

Twelve hearts burned with purpose.

They didn't just train for the war.

They trained for him.

For the day when Alter returned—

And they would stand at his side, not behind him.

The sky over Duskwatch Forest was a calm canvas of gold and green.

Somewhere deep beneath the canopy, two teens knelt at the river's edge, sweat on their brows, breath steady. Finn had just landed the final blow on a phantom beast mimic. Mira giggled as Blazebloom proudly trotted over carrying its still-smoldering tail.

"That's the last one," Finn muttered, wiping blood from his dagger.

"We're getting too good at this," Mira grinned. "We need something harder."

Grrauur—Blazebloom agreed with a throaty huff, tail igniting briefly before settling into warm embers again.

Then the wind shifted.

A familiar presence flickered at the edge of their senses.

They turned—instincts sharp.

And there, standing beneath a gnarled duskroot tree, was Takayoshi.

🕊️ The Message

He didn't speak right away.

Finn and Mira approached carefully—neither smiling.

They knew something had changed.

"Where's the Wolfmaster?" Mira asked first, voice too soft for her usual brightness.

Takayoshi's eyes softened.

"He's alive."

Relief bloomed in both teens—but it didn't last.

"But he's… gone for now," Takayoshi continued. "He entered a divine trial. One that tests those seeking godhood."

Silence.

Mira blinked quickly.

Finn's jaw clenched.

Even Blazebloom lowered its head.

"What are we supposed to do now?" Finn asked quietly.

⚔️ The Spark of Direction

Takayoshi stepped forward, placing a hand on each of their shoulders.

"You'll do what he raised you to do."

"Train. Explore. Learn. Fight."

"But more than that—venture beyond the maps. Go where others haven't. Discover what lies in the gray. Take on dungeons that haven't been cleared. Find ruins. Face unknown monsters."

Mira looked up with wide eyes.

"You mean… we get to chart new places?"

"You were never meant to stay caged," Takayoshi said. "He trained you to survive anywhere."

"Now prove it."

🌬️ Parting Words

Finn swallowed, then took a step forward.

"What about you? Where are you going?"

Takayoshi smiled faintly.

"North. Possibly beyond the Veil Mountains. There are paths only a monk walks alone."

Mira stepped closer.

"We want to go too."

He knelt down slightly, looking at the two of them with a rare softness in his eyes.

"A chick doesn't fly while still nestled in the feathers of its parent."

"It climbs the edge. Feels the wind. And when it's ready—it flies on its own."

They didn't understand it fully.

Not yet.

But they felt the truth of it.

He rose again.

And turned.

🎓 One Last Gesture

Before disappearing, Takayoshi paused.

He glanced back at them.

"One more thing."

"Congratulations."

Finn and Mira blinked in unison.

"You've both graduated."

A beat.

"Grade 12."

Their mouths dropped open.

"Wha—!?"

"You mean we've—"

But he was already gone.

The wind whispered in his place.

Only the sound of laughter echoed behind, not from Takayoshi's mouth…

…but from somewhere deep in their memories.

Wolves Without Chains

The sun hung high over the clearing—clear, warm, and alive.

Finn sat cross-legged by the firepit, a roughly sketched map spread across his lap. Ink smudged along his fingers. Several points were marked in red and green—some with question marks, others with small teeth or skull symbols.

Mira was upside down on a tree branch, arms crossed behind her head, swaying lightly as she stared at the clouds.

Blazebloom lay nearby, chewing casually on a piece of scorched bark like it was a delicacy.

"So…" Mira called down lazily. "What's the plan, cartographer?"

"I've narrowed it down to three options," Finn muttered, not looking up. "But none of them are safe."

"Oh good," she grinned. "I'd be disappointed if they were."

He gestured to the map.

"Option one: The Hollow Pines. East of Duskwatch, unmapped. Rumored to be haunted or cursed. Probably full of bone dogs or tree ghosts."

"Spooky." Mira gave a thumbs-up.

"Option two: The Cradle of Storms. Mountain range farther southeast. High winds. No confirmed settlements. A rogue guild supposedly got wiped out there five years ago."

"Dangerous and dramatic." She clicked her tongue. "Tempting."

"Option three…" He hesitated. "The Sunken Labyrinth. West coast. Recently surfaced during a mana tide. Nobody's cleared it. High artifact probability. High casualty rate."

Blazebloom growled low—clearly disapproving of that one.

"Yeah, buddy, I agree," Finn muttered. "That one's a last resort."

🧭 Choosing the Unknown

Mira flipped down from the tree branch and landed beside him, crouching next to the map.

"Hollow Pines," she said.

"You're sure?"

"It's creepy, shadowy, unclaimed by any guilds, and probably filled with the exact kind of stupid that Wolfmaster would throw at us if he were here."

She looked at him, eyes glinting.

"Feels like the right kind of wrong."

Finn stared at the map a moment longer.

Then smirked.

"Alright then."

He pulled out a red quill and circled the Hollow Pines twice.

"Hollow Pines it is."

🐾 The Pact Renewed

Blazebloom stood, stretching its massive ember-coated body with a yawn. Its flaming tail brushed a branch, setting it briefly alight before Mira casually patted it out.

"You ready, big guy?" Finn asked.

Blazebloom growled once—low and resolute.

Then nudged both their shoulders with its head.

Finn and Mira exchanged a grin.

"Then it's settled," Mira said, slinging her pack onto her back.

"New territory. New monsters. New dumb decisions."

"And no supervision," Finn added with mock dread.

They bumped fists.

Then turned west.

As they vanished into the trees, a gentle wind stirred the clearing.

The map lay folded in Finn's pack.

The road ahead was uncharted.

But their footsteps were steady.

Two wolves and one flaming bear… headed into the unknown.

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