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LOVE'S QUITE ECHO

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Madison has always believed in quiet love steady, patient, unspoken. But when she crosses paths with Ethan,a man haunted by his own past and afraid to let anyone in, everything she’s ever known is tested. As their worlds collide in stolen glances and half-spoken confessions, both must face the truth: sometimes, silence holds the loudest echoes. Love’s Quiet Echo is a story about holding on, letting go, and finding the courage to say the words that matter most.
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Chapter 1 - CHAPTER ONE: QUITE BEGINNINGS

The Charleston air was always thick with salt and memory.

Madison Clarke unlocked the doors of The Quiet Page café just as the first blush of dawn broke over the cobblestone streets. Her fingers were steady. Her heart was not.

For Madison, The Quiet Page was more than just a business it was a legacy. Her grandmother had left it to her three years ago, and every corner of the café still felt like her grandmother's quiet embrace. Books lined every wall, soft jazz played from a hidden speaker, and regulars knew to speak in hushed tones. Charleston might bustle outside, but inside, Madison held onto quiet like it was the last thing tethering her to the earth.

Her mornings followed the same rhythm. Unlock the front door. Flip the wooden sign to 'Open'. Brew the first pot of coffee. Organize the pastries. Make sure each table had a candle and a book left behind from the night before.

She found peace in that rhythm. Or she thought she did.

It wasn't until the fourth customer of the morning walked in a man she didn't recognize that something shifted.

Tall. Dark-haired. Grey eyes sharp as storm clouds. He wore a black wool coat, despite the mild chill, and his step was quiet but sure.

Madison's gaze followed him automatically. Charleston was a city of familiar faces, especially in this neighborhood. Strangers stood out.

The man stepped up to the counter. His voice was low, rough like he hadn't spoken much lately.

"Coffee, black."

Madison poured it carefully, pretending her hands didn't tremble just a little. "Sure."

Their hands brushed as she passed him the cup. There was a jolt not dramatic like in movies, but enough to make her pulse skip.

He didn't say thank you. He just nodded once and retreated to a back corner table, near the window.

Madison wiped her hands on a towel she didn't really need, glancing toward Willow, her friend and part-time help. Willow raised an eyebrow but said nothing.

The man didn't pull out a phone. Didn't take a book from the shelf. He just sat, drinking coffee slowly, watching the street outside as if waiting for something or someone.

An hour passed. Customers came and went. But Madison felt her attention drifting back to him again and again.

Once, as she restocked the sugar packets near his table, she noticed how he watched the rain starting to fall outside. His gaze was intense, thoughtful. She wondered what weighed so heavily on a stranger's mind.

By the time he left, an hour later, Madison realized she'd been aware of him the entire time. His quiet presence had unsettled her rhythm, like a single wrong note in her morning song.

When he walked out the door, the bell above it jingled softly, leaving behind silence heavier than before.

Later, as she closed up, Madison caught herself standing by the same window where the stranger had sat, her fingers pressed against the cool glass. Wondering.

The next morning came like all mornings. But as Madison prepared the café, she caught herself glancing at the door more often than usual.

Around ten o'clock, the stranger returned. Same coat. Same quiet eyes.

This time, Madison was ready. "Coffee, black?" she asked with a smile.

He gave a small nod. "Please."

Their hands brushed again as she passed him the cup. This time, Madison didn't look away.

"You always drink it plain?" she asked.

"Always."

She watched him settle into the same seat as before. And for the first time in a long while, Madison felt her world shift just slightly, but enough to notice.

Enough to wonder what story this man carried with him.