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Chapter 20 - Control and Cracks

Veronica didn't knock.

She never did.

She simply appeared on Evelyn's porch just past nine, dressed like she'd come from a funeral: sleek black slacks, silk blouse, no smile.

Evelyn opened the door before she could ring the bell.

"You're early," Evelyn said coolly.

"You're watching too much," Veronica replied, stepping past her.

Inside, Evelyn's home was precise — not warm, but exact. Hardwood gleamed. Books stood upright. The scent of lemon oil clung to every corner.

"I heard you were sharp," Evelyn said, offering nothing to drink. "But rude isn't the same as clever."

"I don't do polite," Veronica murmured, scanning the walls. "And I don't like threats I didn't design."

Evelyn laughed, once. "Then don't provoke me."

Their eyes locked. For a second, nothing moved.

Then Veronica's smile returned, thin and deliberate. "You're ex-military."

Evelyn didn't deny it.

"Dishonorable discharge?" Veronica added. "Or just too many questions about your wife's bruises?"

Evelyn's jaw tightened. "Watch yourself."

"Oh, I'm watching everything now."

Upstairs, Marla sat on the bed, knees tucked to chest.

She could hear their voices downstairs — calm, deadly. She knew this rhythm. Evelyn made you feel safe, until she didn't.

A single phrase echoed in her head:

"It's not them I'm watching."

But who was Evelyn watching?

Back across the lane, Claire couldn't sleep.

Nina dozed gently beside her, arm curled over her stomach, hair loose and wild across the pillow. She looked peaceful. Untouched by the dark undercurrents that ran beneath their street.

Claire slid out from under the sheets and went downstairs barefoot.

The kitchen light buzzed softly. She poured wine but didn't drink it. Her eyes flicked toward Veronica's house.

Why does she still pull me?

Because Veronica saw her — in ways that scared her, in ways Nina's soft affection never touched.

Nina loved her. But Veronica possessed her, without even touching.

Claire hated that part of herself. And still… part of her ached to be dominated. Controlled. Seen as something to be taken.

Veronica returned home after midnight.

Gloria waited.

"Well?" she asked, rising from the couch.

"She's dangerous," Veronica said, removing her coat.

Gloria tilted her head. "So are you."

Veronica lit a cigarette and walked to the window. "She doesn't want the street. She wants leverage."

"Over what?"

"Over me." A beat. "And Claire."

Gloria said nothing for a while. Then: "You're slipping."

Veronica turned sharply. "Am I?"

Gloria nodded. "You're getting emotional."

Veronica stepped closer. "You think I can't play her and break Evelyn at the same time?"

"I think Claire's changing."

Veronica's voice dropped. "Then I'll remind her what it feels like to kneel."

The next morning, Claire found an envelope at her doorstep.

No name. Just her address in clean, all-caps lettering.

Inside — a single photo.

Her.

Naked. Straddling Nina.

Shot from outside the window.

A chill ran down Claire's spine.

On the back of the photo, two words in fine handwriting:

"You're seen."

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