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Chapter 9 - You’ll Never Be A Choice - I Loved You First

Scene 1: Ainur's House – Late Night, After the Proposal

Ainur sits alone in her room, staring at her reflection. Her hair is down. Her cheeks are flushed—not from embarrassment, but from a war inside her heart.

She whispers to herself:

"Why does it feel wrong… when it's supposed to be right?"

She opens her old journal again and sees Arman's note.

"You were always the one I read. I just didn't know how to write myself beside you."

She hugs the journal to her chest.

Scene 2: Village Orchard – Early Morning

Ainur walks to the orchard. It's peaceful, golden light shining through the leaves. She sees something tied to a tree branch.

A red chapan (Kazakh coat). She steps closer. A note is pinned to it:

"You always got cold in the orchard."

She turns—and he's standing there.

Not close. Not far.

ARMAN (quietly):

"I heard about the proposal. I won't ask what you said."

(Pause)

"I just need to tell you one thing… before I lose the right."

She watches him. Her eyes are soft now, but still guarded.

ARMAN (deep breath):

"You weren't a maybe. You were my always.

Even when I left… you were the only home I missed."

Scene 3: Arman's Grandfather's Barn — That Afternoon

He invites her to help with his grandfather's old barn, which he's restoring. Inside, she finds a wall filled with sketches—of her.

Small things:

• Her laughing under a tree

• Her tying her braid

• Her crying the day he left

She turns to him in shock.

ARMAN:

"I couldn't talk to you… so I drew everything I never said."

Ainur steps closer.

AINUR (tears in her eyes):

"You hurt me, Arman."

ARMAN:

"I know. And I will spend every day proving I never should have."

A long silence.

Then—she touches his hand.

Scene 4: The Hilltop – Sunset

They sit together at the highest hill. She rests her head on his shoulder.

AINUR:

"I didn't say yes to Yerzhan."

ARMAN (barely breathing):

"You didn't?"

AINUR (smiling):

"How could I, when the one who broke me is the only one who knows how to put me back together?"

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