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Chapter 17 - Feedback and Fire

The day after leaving my prototype at the gym, I couldn't sit still.

Every hour felt like a full rotation of the earth.

My mind kept spinning with questions I couldn't shut off:

Would anyone try it? Would they laugh at it? Would they tear it apart and say it's a joke?

Even with the system in my corner, doubt had a way of sliding between the cracks.

So I trained. Hard. Until my arms burned and my breath felt like smoke.

It didn't silence the doubt. But it reminded me that I was real.

The message came the next morning.

[Text from: Ken - IronForge Gym]

One of our guys tried your harness. He wants to talk. Come by.

I stared at the message. Then reread it.

Three times.

Then I got dressed and ran.

Not jogged. Ran.

The gym was louder today.

Even at 9 AM, sweat hit the air like steam, and iron clanged in rhythm like a factory floor.

Ken was at the counter, arms crossed. He nodded when he saw me.

"Back already?"

"You told me to come."

He smirked. "That I did."

He pointed to the mats.

A man stood there, maybe mid-thirties. Rough hands. Stocky build. Back brace. Sweat on his forehead.

The harness was on.

He looked up as I approached.

"You made this?"

I nodded. "Yeah."

He didn't smile. Didn't nod. Just said:

"Hurts like hell. In a good way."

Then he did something I didn't expect.

He held out his hand.

"Name's Daigo. Been doing rehab since a back injury took me off full weights. Your strap lets me do resistance rows without aggravating the disc. That's rare."

I shook his hand. Firm. Honest.

"How much you selling it for?"

I blinked.

"It's not mass-produced yet. I'm still refining."

"Let me know when you do. I want the first upgraded version."

Then he did smile.

A short, rough thing. But it felt like a sunrise.

[System Notification: First External Endorsement Acquired]

User has received genuine feedback and market interest.

+2 Confidence+1 CharismaTrait Progress: Entrepreneurial Spirit – 35%Unlock: Passive Buff "Word of Mouth" – 5% increased chance of referral sales.

I didn't realize I was smiling until I left the gym.

Not because I made a sale. Not even because someone liked my work.

But because it helped.

Something I built with my hands helped someone move again. Train again.

That's worth more than money.

That's a legacy.

Back home, I opened a notebook.

Title: Version 2 Concepts

• Wider shoulder support • Removable anchor head • Custom resistance band options • QR code instructions • Safety warning print

I worked until my hand cramped. Not because I had to.

Because I couldn't stop.

By evening, I received another text.

[Ken]

Another client wants to meet you.

The fire wasn't dying down.

It was spreading.

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