"It's better to die than to not be friends with me! Why do you want to be friends with me so much?" Ace shouted, eyes wide with emotion as he looked at Luffy.
"Because..." Little Luffy lowered his head, his hair casting a shadow over his eyes.
"I've made you suffer so much already, but you still came here with me."
"Because... because I have no one else. I don't know anyone here, and I can't find the way back! If I didn't chase after you, I'd be alone. Being alone hurts more than anything!" Luffy yelled with tears in his eyes.
"Where's your family?" Ace asked, his voice quieter.
"I only have one brother." Luffy looked up, meeting Ace's gaze with trembling eyes.
"Would you be sad if I were gone?" Ace murmured, looking
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"It's better to die than to not be friends with me! Why do you want to be friends with me so much?" Ace shouted, eyes wide, unable to understand Luffy's persistence.
"Because..." Little Luffy lowered his head, his hair shadowing his eyes.
"I've made you suffer so much already, but you still came here with me."
"Because... because I have no one else. I don't know anyone here, and I can't find the way back! If I didn't chase you... I'd be all alone. Being alone hurts more than getting hit!" Luffy cried out.
"Where is your family?"
"I only have one brother," Luffy replied, staring at Ace with teary eyes.
Ace looked down. "Would you be sad if I wasn't around?" he asked softly.
"Yeah."
"Would it bother you if I disappeared?"
"Yeah." Luffy nodded without hesitation.
...
At a bar not far from the terminal, voices carried through the smoky room.
"What if Roger had a kid? Hahaha! It'd be a nightmare if someone like that was running around!" a drunken man laughed.
"That child wouldn't deserve to live. The blood of the devil doesn't belong in this world," said another man coldly, flicking the brim of his hat.
Outside, a younger Ace stood silently, haunted by the words he had just overheard.
Later, Ace whispered to Luffy, "Do you want me to live?"
"Of course!" Luffy shouted.
"Really?" Ace muttered under his breath.
Then he turned suddenly. "But I hate people like you who act like spoiled babies!" he yelled, scratching his head, trying to hide his feelings.
"I'm not spoiled! I'm strong!" Luffy jumped off a rock and glared.
"Strong? You're a man who just cries all the time!"
"Have you ever been hit before?! I'm only five! If I were your age, I'd never cry!"
"I never cried when I was five! Idiot! Don't compare yourself to me!"
"I'll become stronger than anyone else! I'll become a great pirate!" Luffy declared with a roar.
"A pirate? You?"
"That's right!"
"Is that even possible?"
"Of course!"
Ace and Luffy pushed their foreheads against each other, neither willing to back down.
"Okay, that's enough." Sabo stepped in, frowning as he separated them.
"Now, I have a question."
"Question?" Luffy blinked, curious.
"Since today, all three of us are being hunted by Bluejam and his men," Sabo said seriously.
"Yeah," Ace nodded.
"What if they attack us while we sleep?" Sabo continued.
"He would die," Ace said quietly.
"Yes. He would definitely die," Luffy echoed, unusually solemn.
"So I want to talk to you two. Come closer." Sabo gestured them in, whispering something.
"Ace! Sabo!"
"Huh?" Both turned toward the voice. Lucias was running toward them, visibly panicked.
"Are you okay? I heard Bluejam's men were searching for you at the Waste Terminal. What happened?" Lucias asked.
"Brother!"
Luffy rushed at Lucias, knocking him over.
"Brother?" Ace and Sabo looked stunned.
"Ow, Luffy! Don't tackle me like that!" Lucias groaned, rubbing his head.
"Hehehe." Luffy gave an innocent grin.
"Wait—Luffy? What are you doing here? And why are you covered in bandages?" Lucias sat up, alarmed.
"I'm fine now," Luffy grinned, brushing off Lucias's hands.
"Hey, brother, I made two new friends! This is Ace and this is Sabo!" Luffy said excitedly, pulling the two boys forward.
"We're not your friends!" Ace snapped, baring his teeth.
"Hehe." Luffy grinned even wider.
Sabo simply smiled beside him.
Lucias sighed and tried to make sense of it. "Ace, Sabo—what's going on? Why was Bluejam looking for you?"
He turned to Luffy: "And you! Don't wander off alone again, especially in the forest! You could've been eaten!"
"But I just got lost..." Luffy pouted and hid behind Sabo.
"You—!" Lucias started to scold him, but Sabo raised a hand.
"Let it go," he said calmly. Ace also silently moved a little closer to Luffy.
"So what exactly happened?"
Sabo and Ace explained everything.
"So... what now?" Lucias asked.
"Bluejam's men are all over the terminal looking for you."
"The forest I live in is closest to their base," Sabo said. "We've decided to stay at the bandits' hideout with Ace's guardian for now."
"That's smart," Lucias nodded. "But stay away from the terminal and the town."
"But what about our pirate fund?" Ace growled. "We can avoid them."
"Lucias is right," Sabo said. "It's not safe for now."
"We'll pause the fund collection. Instead, let's hunt and collect furs. We can sell them later," Lucias suggested.
"Fine." Ace folded his arms and leaned on his pipe.
The Next Morning…
A loud scream echoed from the bandits' residence.
"Boss! Boss! It's bad!"
"What's all this noise so early in the morning?!" shouted a large orange-haired woman.
Bandits burst into the main hall and stopped, stunned.
"What the hell?! Who are these kids?!" one shouted, looking at the four children fast asleep on the floor, covered in bandages.
"Why are they so beat up? Especially the tiny one—he doesn't even look five!"
"ACE!! Who are these extra little monsters?!" the orange-haired woman roared.
Lucias sat up groggily, took one look, then flopped back down.
"Too early..."
"So noisy..." Ace mumbled and rolled over, still half-asleep.
"Who the hell are you three?! Why are you in our hideout?!"