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Chapter 9 - The Scene That Broke Me

It was supposed to be simple.

A reshoot.

A single scene where their characters say goodbye.

Where Ren lets Luna Evelyn

It was scripted. Calculated. Brief.

But no one expected what happened when the cameras rolled.

They hadn't spoken more than three words to each other that morning. Call time was at 7 a.m. Sharp. Makeup done. Wardrobe crisp. The set was quiet.

The director walked them through the scene again.

Ren, standing by the window.

Evelyn, holding back tears.

He says, "It's better if we don't keep pretending."

She says, "But what if I wasn't pretending?"

Then silence.

Then the walk away.

Camera. Rolling.

Slate down.

Action.

Andres stood by the window, the light catching the side of his face just right. His hands trembled slightly, but he masked it well. He turned around slowly as Ashtine entered the scene.

She didn't look like she was acting.

Her eyes were already glassy.

Her mouth slightly parted, like she'd been holding something in for months.

She walked closer.

He spoke the line.

"It's better if we don't keep pretending."

And she snapped.

It wasn't in the script.

She took a sharp breath. "You don't get to say that like you weren't pretending, too."

The crew froze.

But the director didn't yell cut.

Andres stared at her, startled.

Her eyes were wild. Wet.

"I was there," she whispered. "Even when you started slipping away, I stayed. And you—what did you do? You looked away."

The line wasn't from the script.

It was from something real.

Something they never said out loud.

Andres opened his mouth—but nothing came out.

His throat was tight. His heart was louder than the silence.

"You let everyone believe we were fine," she said. Her voice was trembling. "But I knew. I knew the second you stopped replying, the second you stopped reaching back."

Tears streamed down her face.

And Andres? He was crying too.

Not fake. Not forced. Real.

He stepped forward—but she flinched.

The camera kept rolling.

She shook her head and walked past him.

She walked off set.

The director finally yelled cut.

The silence that followed was unbearable.

The crew didn't clap.

No one moved.

The air was thick with something unspoken, something too raw to name.

Andres stood in the center of the room, breath shaking, eyes still searching for her.

But she was gone.

Again.

That scene was never released in the final cut.

It was too real.

Too vulnerable.

Too painful to watch.

But the few who witnessed it knew:

That wasn't acting.

That was heartbreak.

That was six months of silence unraveling on camera.

That was the scene that broke them.

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