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Chapter 5 - CHAPTER FIVE: BROKEN DEALS, SHATTERED GIRLS( THE PRICE OF OBEDIENCE)

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MATURE READERS ONLY (18+)

Morning light crept weakly through the thin dorm curtains, painting pale stripes across Anissa's unmade bed. Nelly had slipped out twenty minutes earlier for her 7 a.m. class, leaving the room in heavy silence broken only by the faint, relentless tick of the wall clock.

Anissa stood before the full-length mirror on the closet door, phone clutched in trembling fingers. Hair loose and tangled from another sleepless night, eyes hollow and shadowed. She looked like a stranger—someone already half gone.

Steven's 3 a.m. message still glowed on the screen:

"Wake up pretty for me, princess. First pic by 8. Don't make me ask twice."

She peeled off her oversized sleep shirt slowly, as if delaying could change anything. Then the shorts. Bra. Panties. Until she stood completely naked, skin prickling under the chill.

Anissa angled the phone, forcing her body into the pose he favored—hips tilted forward, one arm barely covering her breasts, the other hand low on her stomach, lips parted in a smile that never reached her dead eyes.

Click.

The image stared back: provocative, submissive, soul-crushing.

SEND TO: STEVEN🔥 (VIEW ONCE)

The second it delivered, she yanked a thick sweater over her head, grabbed her bag, and fled the room like the walls were closing in.

By afternoon, she sat on a secluded campus bench, finally daring to check her phone.

25 MISSED CALLS — STEVEN🔥

Her stomach dropped like stone.

A new message appeared instantly:

STEVEN🔥:

Stop playing dumb. Those ain't the pics I asked for. You wanna test me, princess? Keep it up. Let's see who watches you beg after your tape hits the streets.

Attached: a ten-second clip—her on her knees that first night, lips stretched around him, eyes watering as he guided her head.

Anissa's hand shook so badly the phone nearly slipped. A group of students laughed nearby, the sound bright and careless—so alien to the darkness swallowing her. The world blurred into haze: voices fading, footsteps echoing, trees swaying like threats.

Later, in the lecture hall, something small shifted inside her.

For the first time in weeks, Anissa raised her hand. The question was complex—neurotransmitter pathways. Her answer came out clear, almost sharp.

The lecturer paused, surprised. "Well, Miss Wallenstein… look who's awake."

Scattered awkward claps rippled through the room. Heads turned.

Anissa forced a tight smile, heat flooding her face. Inside, she regretted it instantly. Attention felt like danger now.

Evening bruised the campus grounds in purples and golds. Nelly jogged up the path, catching Anissa near the library steps.

"Anissa… wait." Nelly's voice trembled with guilt. "About your phone—I saw the messages. I didn't mean to snoop, I was worried—"

Anissa froze. Then the dam broke. Tears spilled hot and fast.

"You think I sleep at night?" she whispered fiercely. "You think I can look at myself without hating what I see?"

Nelly's eyes filled. "I'm so sorry—"

"I'm drowning, Nel. And nobody sees it."

Nelly stepped closer. "I thought it was one night. Quick money. If I'd known he'd trap you like this—if I'd had any clue—I'd never have suggested it. You were desperate… and I pushed you straight into hell. That's on me."

Anissa shook her head, tears still falling. "I didn't ask for this…"

"You're not alone anymore," Nelly said fiercely. "I don't care how deep it goes—I'm diving in with you."

They stood in silence as dusk settled, the weight of truth hanging heavy between them.

Across the city, in Steven's penthouse, Tanya padded across marble in a silk robe, wine glass in hand. Steven lounged shirtless on the sectional, watching muted sports highlights.

Tanya stopped behind him, tracing fresh scratch marks down his back with one nail.

"What the hell is this?"

Steven smirked at her reflection. "Relax, baby. Just stress relief. Ain't love. It's business."

"Business that could ruin you."

He turned, eyes cold. "Clout keeps me rich. And you ain't leaving either, Tanya. Women like you don't walk from men like me."

Her voice cracked. "You don't know everything about me, Steven."

He leaned in close, voice low and lethal. "I know enough. I know what you can't give me. And I stay quiet because I'm merciful." His thumb brushed her cheek. "Finish your drink. Or get out."

Tanya flinched, eyes watering, but she stayed.

That night in the dorm, Anissa's phone rang—Kavya's name lighting the screen.

She answered, forcing warmth. "Hey, baby girl."

Kavya's small voice was hesitant. "Anissa… school fees are due tomorrow. Mom's asking. Rent's overdue—the landlord threatened to cut water by Friday. And… there's no food left. Mom's skipping meals so Granny and I can eat."

Anissa's throat closed. The bank app showed millions—blood money from every degrading night.

"I'll handle it," she said softly. "All of it."

"You always say that," Kavya whispered. "Are you okay? You sound… different."

"I'm fine. Focus on school. I love you."

She ended the call and sent the transfer—enough for fees, rent, groceries, extra for emergencies.

The confirmation pinged. She stared until the screen dimmed, tears blurring the numbers.

The next five days dragged Anissa through a suffocating cycle she couldn't escape.

On the first night, the dorm bathroom light glared harsh overhead. Nelly was out studying late. Anissa propped her phone against a rolled towel on the sink, timer set. She stripped, skin goosebumping in the cold air. His latest demand echoed in her mind: "Tease yourself first. Show me you're thinking about me."

Her fingers trailed down her stomach, slipping between her thighs. She circled slowly, forcing the touch, forcing the response her body now gave too easily. Breath hitching with shame, she snapped multiple angles until one looked "good enough." Sent it.

Steven's reply came fast: "Not bad. Tomorrow, make yourself come. I want proof."

A new transfer hit her account. She sent half home without thinking.

The following morning, in the crowded library study group, Anissa forced herself to focus. Highlighter moving across pages, she answered a peer's question correctly—the first time in weeks. They smiled. "You're back!" But the praise felt hollow, sliding off her like rain.

That night, Nelly asleep across the room, Anissa stayed under the covers with only the phone glow. She spread her legs, fingers working faster, biting her lip to stay silent. The climax came quick and empty, tears mixing with sweat. She recorded the shudder, whispering his name because he'd demanded it. Sent the video.

Steven: "That's my good girl. Wet for me even when you hate it."

On the third day, the cafeteria buzzed around her. Anissa pushed food around her plate, appetite gone. Nelly watched from across the table, guilt twisting her face. "You barely ate anything." Anissa shrugged—"Not hungry." Her phone vibrated relentlessly under the table. She excused herself early.

That same night, back at the mirror, she sank to her knees—fully naked, mouth open, tongue out, mimicking exactly what he loved. Then on the bed: legs wide, pulling a hidden toy from her drawer (bought in secret shame). She slid it in and out slowly, recording every thrust, every forced moan. The pleasure built against her will. She sent the video, hating how conditioned her body had become.

Steven: "Fuck yes. Save that energy—round three gon' be rough."

Day four brought small victories in class—Anissa participated twice, earning an approving nod from Ms. Rockell. Peers whispered, "She's killing it again." But the numbness spread deeper, like ice under her skin.

That night, on the cold bathroom floor, phone propped on the counter, she followed his cruelest instruction yet: "Edge for 20 minutes first. Then come hard screaming my name." She brought herself to the brink three times, denying release until her body shook with need. When it finally crashed over her, the orgasm wrecked her—sobs following immediately after. Video sent.

Steven: "Perfect. That face when you break—my favorite."

On the final night before his return, Anissa stood in the shower, scalding water trying to wash away the day. But the phone waited outside. One last demand: full-body mirror, legs hooked over the sink edge, fingers deep inside her. She performed like a machine—efficient, detached, eyes locked on the lens. The climax was mechanical, tears silent.

Sent.

Steven's reply came hours later, his plane freshly landed: "Landed. Be ready tomorrow night. Wear red. Round three starts at 8."

Throughout the days, bank notifications pinged relentlessly—massive deposits after every act of obedience. Anissa transferred most home without hesitation: Kavya sent photos in her new school uniform, Mom's grateful texts the only flicker of light in the dark.

Nelly watched helplessly as Anissa withdrew further—conversations shorter, smiles faker, eyes emptier.

Anissa curled into bed each night, body spent, mind fractured. Hatred for Steven burned hotter with every demand, but so did the fear—and the terrifying ease of surrender.

Obedience had become reflex.

But deep beneath the numbness, a spark of rage flickered—quiet, patient, waiting.

The next evening loomed.

Steven was back.

 A round awaited.

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