After this towering pressure descended on 'Duan Yu Han Fang', it felt like every part of his body will be crushed to pieces.
All the injuries on his body which has barely healed started to re-open and blood started to spread out.
"Kid this much is nothing. If you can survive this for about 10 minutes, you will be allowed to challenge heaven's or your path will end here itself and you will perish here." 'middle-aged man' without even lifting a finger snorted coldly.
*Gritt**Gritt*Gritt*
'Duan Yu Han Fang' was gritting his teeth with pain. He knew that this man was not even using his martial power. This is pure fighting intent. This man is obviously someone from top of the martial world.
As time passed by, it was becoming even more unbearable.His injuries were becoming even more intense.
This pressure is difficult Even difficult for someone in EssenceCondensation stage. Let, he who is an cripple
*haah*haah*
Halfway past the mark, as he was enduring it with difficult, the 'middle-aged man' who was watching silently, his eyes became slightly sharp.
*Whisshh*
"Ahh!!" A different kind of pressure fell on 'Duan Yu Han Fang'. Everything in his vision became pitch reddish-brown. Blood was splattered everywhere.
It was like purgatory in hell. Death like feeling surrounded him. If he hesitated even slightly, he will be killed instantly.
Suddenly, he was remembered of the hellish scene where his whole clan was slaughtered and his eyes became deep red. Due to which his blood was boiling and he somehow endured the hellish scene.
Just as 10 minutes got over, he could not endure it over and fainted.
Just before he was about to fall the ground, a ball of white light enveloped him and slowly placed him in the ground.
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After an unknown amount of time,
"Hmm??"
He slowly opened his eyes. Sun was at its peak.He could see that his injuries are healed to some extent.
As he turned around, a 'Handsome Middle Aged' man could be seen meditation near him.Low Energy fluctuations could be seen around him.
"This man is not simple!!" 'Duan Yu Han Fang'
Thr 'Middle Aged Man' slowly opened his eyes.
"Oh! You are awake"
"kid what's your name?" 'middle-aged man'
"'Duan Yu Han Fang'" 'Duan Yu Han Fang' calmly spoke.
"okay 'Fang' Kid" do you really want to go against the will of heaven's and not afraid of death??" 'middle aged person' asked.
"yes !!" 'Duan Yu Han Fang' spoke confidently.
"good! Kid 'Fang' would like to come with me??" 'middle-aged man'
"EHH?" 'Duan Yu Han Fang' is confused.
"what?" 'Duan Yu Han Fang' is startled. He did not understand what the mysterious want to say.
"boy are you deaf or a idiot?"" I want you as my apprentice.'middle-aged man' snorted.
"ohh!""? apprentice?" 'Duan Yu Han Fang' exclaimed but instantly startled
"yes"" Haha ! boy don't you know the word apprentice" 'middle-aged man'
"yes! I know but why me?" 'Duan Yu Han Fang' was happy by hearing the word apprentice by him but he is a cripple abd no future for martial path for him. So why did he want to take him ?
"why you?"" I am entranced by tenacity" 'middle-aged man'
"ohh!!" 'Duan Yu Han Fang' exclaimed.
"so what's your answer??" 'middle-aged man'
"that!!? I am cripple ? so why me? I can't understand?? Can it be cured??" 'Duan Yu Han Fang' asked with confusion.
"I know your condition—your crippled body. But the very reason I've chosen you is your unwavering defiance against the will of the heavens." He paused, eyes narrowing as he regarded the figure before him. "As for your dantian, I cannot say with certainty if it can be healed. Once it's crippled, it's said to be beyond remedy. However…" His voice trailed off, a flicker of something unreadable passing across his features.
"but..?" 'Duan Yu Han Fang' asked.
"I can't say for certain if you'll truly be able to defy the heavens. But in the martial world, surprises are not as rare as one might think." The middle-aged man's gaze sharpened, his voice taking on a more commanding tone. "So, what is your answer?" 'middle-aged man'
"this!! are you sure you want me as your apprentice??" 'Duan Yu Han Fang' asked with last remaining doubt.
ログイン無料でサインアップあなた:"I know you are a cripple. The reason "" I chose you is I your firmness on going against the will of the heaven's"" is that ok?"" as for your dantian I can't be sure if it can be cured as once dantian is crippled it cannot be cured. But.." 'middle aged person'ChatGPT:
It sounds like you're referencing a specific dialogue, possibly from a martial arts novel or a similar fantasy genre, where someone is speaking to a character who has suffered a serious injury, in this case, a "crippled dantian" (a key concept in many xianxia or cultivation novels). The tone feels cold, calculating, but there's an underlying curiosity and possibly a touch of skepticism about whether the injury can be healed.
If you'd like, I can help refine or expand on this dialogue. Do you want to keep it in the same tone or adjust it to something more emotional, or perhaps have the speaker come across differently (e.g., more sympathetic, or more menacing)? Let me know the vibe you're going for!
あなた:Polish itChatGPT:
Here's a polished version of the dialogue, giving it a more refined and impactful tone:
"I know your condition—your crippled body. But the very reason I've chosen you is your unwavering defiance against the will of the heavens." He paused, eyes narrowing as he regarded the figure before him. "As for your dantian, I cannot say with certainty if it can be healed. Once it's crippled, it's said to be beyond remedy. However…" His voice trailed off, a flicker of something unreadable passing across his features.
This version keeps the same core elements but adds a bit more weight and mystery, making the speaker seem both calculating and intrigued. Does this capture the vibe you were looking for?
あなた:"I can't be sure if you can really defy the heaven's but all kinds of surprises exist in martial world. so your answer??" 'middle aged person:ChatGPT:
Here's a more polished and nuanced version of that line:
"I can't say for certain if you'll truly be able to defy the heavens. But in the martial world, surprises are not as rare as one might think." The middle-aged man's gaze sharpened, his voice taking on a more commanding tone. "So, what is your answer?"
The middle-aged man's expression hardened, a slight edge creeping into his voice. "Boy! Do you have any idea how many have sought to become my apprentice? Not a single one has dared ask as many questions as you." His gaze was sharp, his patience clearly thinning. "You're the only one who's been so... inquisitive."
'Duan Yu Han Fang's eyes flickered with a mix of determination and respect. He sank into a deep bow, his voice firm but filled with reverence. "Oh! I accept, Master." The 'Duan Yu Han Fang', muttered these words with utmost respect as he bowed even lower, showing his commitment.
"master what's your name??" 'Duan Yu Han Fang' asked. He never knew who he was.
" My name ha!? It is 'Sword God Shen" 'middle-aged man' Shen Spoke with arrogance.
The middle-aged man straightened, his demeanor shifting to one of undeniable pride. His voice rang out with a sharp, arrogant clarity. "My name?!" He scoffed, as if the question itself was beneath him. "It is Sword God Shen." The words were spoken with a cold arrogance, as though the very mention of his name should command reverence.
"kid 'Fang' don't ask what should not be asked. There was little diffrence in his tone. 'Duan Yu Han Fang' was little disappointed by hearing this.
"kid don't be disheartened. Now is not the time. when the time comes I will naturally tell you…ok?" 'Shen' spoke.
"ok master". 'Duan Yu Han Fang' spoke. He has just met this person. He knows that this person is very strong and stand's at the top of the martial world. He will naturally know when he can become stronger.
"master where is this place exactly ??" 'Duan Yu Han Fang' asked
"boy don't you know??" 'Shen' was surprised How can there be someone who does not know where they are and specially this place...
"yes master." "Actually something happened so…" 'Duan Yu Han Fang' spoke hesitantly.
"ohh ! ok" 'Shen' became calm. He knows that everyone as their own secret's . "this is external abandoned regions of the Southern part of the continent" 'Shen' told.
"southe..rn part?" 'Duan Yu Han Fang' was shocked. He was from the northern part which is very far.
"boy where are you from??" 'Shen' asked
"Nothern.." 'Duan Yu Han Fang' spoke. "what??" 'Shen' was shocked. How can a cripple came from so far from northern part. They are polar opposites.
"yes master!"" master do you know about the 'Black Demon Fores.." 'Duan Yu Han Fang' asked hesitantly. He really wanted to know the situation. Although he has heard from the 'Black Hood' Person who took his sister away, he still wanted to confirm with a glimmer of hope.
"ohh?" " that region in northern part right??"" that does no exist on this continent anymore " 'Shen' spoke.
Tears started to flow from 'Duan Yu Han Fang''s eyes. "Boy what happened??" 'Shen' asked.
'Duan Yu Han Fang' quickly wiped away the tears that had welled in his eyes, his expression shifting from sorrow to one of respectful attentiveness. "Nothing, Master…" His voice softened, but then curiosity got the better of him. "Master, why are you here?"
'Shen' is a very experienced person and his apprentice does not want to talk about it so he didn't want to dwell on it more.
"ohh! That.. I came here for a mysterious elixir but on my way I saw you so.." 'Shen Spoke'
"ohh! ? master I don't about this mysterious elixir but I know there is a rare medicinal plant" 'Duan Yu Han Fang' spoke. He has been in this forest for quite some time, so he nature know the in and out of this forest. He naturally wanted to consume the medical plant but he lacked strength to obtain it.
"really boy??" 'Shen' spoke.
"but.. master there are many powerful beasts" 'Duan Yu Han Fang' spoke hesitantly.
"baah! What has this master has not seen. I will take care of it." "wait my apprentice you are my first apprentice so here is my.." so he took out the broken sword from his back and gave it to 'Duan Yu Han Fang'.
"master this.." 'Duan Yu Han Fang' was micro happy. But thinking in his heart , "cheapskate".
"except it boy . this is your master's most treasured thing. I am giving it you. " 'Shen' snorted ❄️. He could clearly tell what this ungrateful appreciate was thinking.
"yes master" and 'Duan Yu Han Fang' accepted seemingly embarrassed his thoughts were read.
"let's go" 'Shen' shouted.
"yes master" and both of them vanished.
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From this moment onward, the meeting between the martial cripple—one with no future in the world of cultivation—and the mysterious, powerful figure would either give birth to a legend that would shake the very foundation of the continent, forever altering the course of martial history…
Or, this boy, destined for nothing but obscurity, would vanish into the dust, forgotten by time.
But one thing was certain: a great turmoil was brewing. A storm would rise, shaking the balance of the continent to its core. And history… history would be rewritten.
*boom*boom*boom*
This is the "Martial Journey of the Crippled Genius".
End of prologue. Stay Stuned for Vol 02.....