General POV~
In the chamber of Queen Frigga of Asgard, a very special moment is happening the birth of two new aesir gods are being born the heir to the throne of Asgard and a new high god of Asgard.
The world tree yggdrasil announces their birth across the realm of Asgard. The people hear
The first born son of Odin Fylgja odinson the god that presides over Soul's, magic, and judgment. He who will become the judge of all who pass
And the first born daughter of the godking Odin Hela odindóttir goddess of death and warfare.
As this massage resonated across the rel. Of the aesir celebration erupted as many celebrated the birth of two heirs and gods to Asgard.
~ Frigga POV~
I lay still after giving birth to my new son and daughter tired after the ordeal. My husband Odin walks in only giving me a quick nod before turning to our children his gaze scrutinizeing as if judging their potential.
Frigga- "Odin they are strong I am sure they will grow to your expectations" I say worried that he will see them unfit.
Odin- " yes they are both strong with high divinity's, they willake for great warriors for the coming battles" Odin responds with a slightly warm but distant tone. " are you well Frigga"
He asks me turning his attention away from the new borns
Frigga- " yes I am well just a bit tired" I respond back.
He then gives a slight nod and walks away likely going back to his duty's. I then take my children in my arms and begin to feed them their first meals.
~Fylgja POV~
I look on as my new mother takes me into her arms and prepares to feed me. Thinking of my current situation and my plans for the future.
Fylgja mind-"this is a predicament, I'm currently a baby and can't really do much as of right now except think, seeing as I'm the child of Odin and Frigga and was born with Hela, I'm going to assume that Asgard is more so aligned with the MCU but with comic aspects" I think trying to gauge my current status " I should have wished for a system or something" as I say that I hear something in my mind.
ROB- "hello I wanted to tell you since I think it will be entertaining I'll give you a system to your choosing, also this will be the last time we communicate"
Fylgja- " thank you very much" I say thankful for their consideration "Can I have a system that allows me to see status and helps guide me like a game system"
ROB- " Granted"
They exclaimed before vanishing from my mind. With that I call apon my status.
Name: Fylgja odinson
Age:0
Race: aesir god
Abilities: Super human strength, agility, speed, stamina, and reflexes, all speak(the ability to communicate with anyone), soul magic, Fylgja force(similar to Odin force).
Domain: Soul's (allows individual to communicate with interact with and destroy or manipulate all forms of spirits or spirit energy)
Magic ( allows for easier use and natural ability in all forms of magic depending on main domainsl you get more control in one type of magic over others)
Judgment ( allows user to see the karma of individual understand their personality and control their actions depending on amount of negative karma they have)
Main domain is souls
Strength: 100 (average strength of member of species of age group is 50)
Stamina: 100(average stamina member of species in age group is 50)
Speed: 50(average speed of member of species in age group is 10)
Agility: 50 (average agility of member of species in age group is 10)
Health: 100/100
Wisdom: 100 (average wisdom is 90)
Intellect:120(average intellect is 90)
Vitatality(ability to heal): 100 (average vitality of member of species in age group is 50).
Looking at it was a surprise seeing how much ahead of my species I was. Anyway these abilities are good not overpowered but good.
I can already tell that it will take a lot of time for me to train these abilities.
With thatade out I can think of the future now. I know that I was born as hela's older twin so that means this is around the time that Odin was being a conquerer so I can expect to be sent out to fight for him when I reach a significant age. I also know that Hela was born around the same time as the Mesopotamian civilization was first starting so around 5000 bc or 7000 years before the main story starts. This gives me a lot of time to think about my future and what I'll do.
I already decided what I'm going to do Im going to stay with Odin and attempt to stop what happened in the original timeline from happening and strengthten my position. I'll probably go and do some stuff on earth or midgard to get some followers their so that I can keep up with events like the eternals or the mutants and stuff.
But that's for later for now I'm going to enjoy being a baby and think of contingency plans.
ChatGPT said:
You're very welcome! I'm glad the first chapter revision hit the mark for you — and your second chapter already has great structure, solid worldbuilding, and clear momentum. It just needs polish for clarity, grammar, pacing, and narrative consistency. Below is your refined Chapter Two, now tightly connected to the tone and style of Chapter One.
Chapter Two: A God is Born
General POV
In the sacred birthing chambers of Queen Frigga in Asgard, a moment of divine significance unfolds. Two new Aesir gods have entered the world — the first heirs of the Allfather, Odin.
As the cries of newborns echo through the golden halls, the World Tree, Yggdrasil, shudders with cosmic awareness, sending a message across the Nine Realms — a divine proclamation:
"Rejoice, for the firstborn son of Odin, Fylgja Odinson, god of Souls, Magic, and Judgment, has arrived. He who shall stand as Judge of the Dead, Arbiter of Fate.
And with him, the firstborn daughter of the Allfather, Hela Odindóttir, goddess of Death and War, brings with her the shadow of endings and glory of conquest."
Across Asgard, the Aesir erupt in celebration. Two gods — born in power, heralds of destiny, and pillars of the future.
Frigga's POV
I lay back, breathless and weary, cradling the weight of what I've brought into the world — my twins.
Two divine lights born of my body.
Odin enters quietly, gaze sharp as ever. He spares me only a nod before striding over to our children, eyes assessing them with the scrutiny of a war-hardened king.
"They are strong," I say softly, afraid he might already deem them unworthy. "I'm sure they'll grow to meet your expectations."
He hums, his tone unreadable. "Yes… both possess high divinity. They will make fine warriors for the battles ahead."
A faint warmth flickers in his voice, but it is distant — restrained, as always.
"Are you well, Frigga?" he asks, finally turning his attention to me.
"Tired," I admit with a weak smile, "but I'll be fine."
He gives a nod, turns, and walks out — likely back to the throne room or the vaults. Duty calls, even now.
I turn back to my children, lifting them gently into my arms. They are so small… and yet, I feel the weight of fate in their presence.
I begin to feed them, savoring the first quiet moment of motherhood.
Fylgja's POV
Warm arms surround me, and I feel the embrace of the woman who gave me this second life — Frigga, Queen of Asgard.
My new mother.
Inside, my thoughts race. I'm a baby again — helpless, fragile. But not for long.
"Okay… new life, godhood, twin sister is Hela — and I'm the son of Odin. That confirms this version of Asgard leans more toward the MCU… with heavy comic influences."
The realization sets in. I have time — centuries, maybe — to prepare. But right now, I can't even move on my own.
"I really should've wished for a system…"
Suddenly, a familiar voice echoes in my mind.
ROB – "Hello again. Since I find this amusing, I'll give you a system of your choosing. This will be our last contact."
"Thank you!" I say quickly, mentally bowing. "Could I get a status and guidance system — like something out of an RPG?"
ROB – "Granted."
And with that, the voice vanished forever.
A soft chime rang in my mind.
Status Menu: Open
🜲 Name: Fylgja Odinson
🜲 Age: 0
🜲 Race: Aesir God
🜲 Domain: Souls (Primary), Magic, Judgment
🜲 Abilities:
Superhuman Strength, Speed, Stamina, Reflexes
Allspeak (Universal Language Comprehension)
Soul Magic
Fylgja Force (Unique power source, akin to Odinforce)
🜲 Domain Effects:
Souls: Communicate with, manipulate, or destroy spirits and soul-based entities.
Magic: Natural mastery of magical arts, especially soul and judgment-related spells.
Judgment: Perceive karmic alignment, personality, and influence actions based on negative karma.
🜲 Stats:
Strength: 100 (Avg: 50)
Stamina: 100 (Avg: 50)
Speed: 50 (Avg: 10)
Agility: 50 (Avg: 10)
Health: 100/100
Wisdom: 100 (Avg: 90)
Intellect: 120 (Avg: 90)
Vitality (Healing Rate): 100 (Avg: 50)
"These stats… definitely above average, even for a godling. Not overpowered, but a strong foundation. I've got time — I just need to train, learn, and prepare."
With nothing else to do in this tiny form, I begin to plan.
"If I'm truly Hela's twin, then this is during Odin's conquest era — the time when Asgard was an empire expanding across realms. That means I'll likely be sent to battle once I come of age."
I recall that Hela was born around the emergence of early Mesopotamian civilization — roughly 5000 BC. That gives me seven millennia before the modern timeline begins.
"Plenty of time to prepare. I'll start with loyalty — I'll stay close to Odin and earn his trust. If I can keep him from turning against me like he did Hela, I might change the course of history."
Midgard will be my long-term investment. I can make appearances, guide civilizations, gain followers, and keep a close eye on events like the rise of the Eternals, the birth of mutants, and early magical orders.
"But all that's for later. For now… I'm going to enjoy being a baby and think of backup plans."
And with that, I close my eyes and drift off, wrapped in Frigga's arms — a child of gods, a soul reborn, a judge in the making.