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Chapter 3 - Chapter 3: The General and the Unwelcome Prompt

The heavy, rhythmic footsteps from the passageway weren't the scuttling of more imps. This was the measured tread of power, the sound of armored boots striking obsidian with deliberate, echoing authority. Each step vibrated through the floor, resonating in Donarstraza's newly dense bones. The air itself seemed to thicken, crackling with an oppressive, metallic energy that tasted like ozone and old blood.

Panic, cold and sharp, momentarily froze her mid-lunge towards the obsidian claw-armrest. Not imps. Definitely not imps. The sheer weight of the presence approaching sucked the air out of the vast chamber. Her earlier, frantic energy evaporated, replaced by the instinctive terror of prey sensing an apex predator. She straightened slowly, wings flaring slightly in a defensive posture she didn't consciously command, turning to face the shadowed archway.

He emerged from the gloom like a wrathful statue given life.

Tall. Impossibly tall, even compared to her goddess-form, easily clearing seven feet. His skin was the colour of volcanic ash, smooth and unblemished, stretched taut over dense muscle visible even beneath the intricately crafted, dark metal armor that encased his torso and limbs. It wasn't bulky plate; it was sleek, functional, etched with subtle, predatory runes that seemed to drink the dim light. Two obsidian horns, thicker and more brutally curved than her own, swept back from his temples, framing a face of stark, harsh beauty. High cheekbones, a strong jawline that looked carved from stone, and eyes… eyes like pools of molten lava, glowing with intense crimson pupils that fixed on her with unnerving focus.

No wings marred the powerful line of his back. Instead, a long, thick tail, scaled like obsidian and ending in a wicked, spade-like tip, swayed slowly behind him with the controlled menace of a scorpion. He carried no visible weapon, yet the air around him hummed with lethal potential. Power radiated from him in palpable waves, a crushing aura of dominance and ancient, brutal strength that made the lingering fear-stink of the imps seem like cheap perfume. This was no minor demon. This was… authority.

He stopped a respectful distance away, near the spot where the unfortunate imp lay dead. His molten gaze flicked down to the small corpse for a fraction of a second, then back to her, unreadable. Then, with a movement that was both fluid and shockingly precise for his size, he dropped to one knee. The heavy armor clanked softly against the stone. He bowed his head, the obsidian horns pointing forward like blades.

"My Liege," his voice rumbled, deeper than the abyss she'd emerged from, resonant and layered with an ancient timbre. It wasn't loud, yet it filled the cavernous throne room effortlessly. "Karnazul, Lord of the Nine Blades, Keeper of the Shattered Spire, greets your return. The Realms tremble anew at your awakening, Donarstraza."

Karnazul. Lord of the Nine Blades. The titles resonated with fragments of memory – visions of flashing blades, mountains of sundered armor, a loyal shadow standing beside a throne wreathed in lightning. Her right hand. A wave of intense, conflicting emotions crashed over Donarstraza. Relief warred with terror. Here was someone powerful, loyal (according to the hazy memories), who could help her, protect her from the impending orcish doom… and who also looked like he could snap her Level 1 goddess spine like a twig without breaking a sweat.

His sheer presence was overwhelming. The ash-grey skin, the sculpted power beneath the armor, the intense crimson eyes holding a terrifying mixture of reverence and latent, controlled ferocity… Elina's dormant teenage hormones, already amplified a hundredfold by her new demonic physiology, roared back to life with a vengeance. The constant, low-level thrum of physical awareness she'd felt since waking flared into a sudden, intense heat pooling low in her belly. He was magnificent. Primally, devastatingly attractive in a way that bypassed rational thought and spoke directly to the ancient, predatory core of her new being. Scheiße, he's… Her internal monologue short-circuited.

She forced herself to stand straighter, to channel the imposing aura everyone seemed to expect. Her golden eyes met his crimson ones, trying to project ancient power she absolutely did not possess. "Karnazul," she managed, her voice thankfully still holding that resonant, commanding echo, though it felt thin to her own ears. "Rise." The single word felt inadequate.

He rose smoothly, the movement a testament to controlled power. His gaze swept over her – the shimmering purple-red skin, the flowing lava-silk hair, the obsidian horns and vast wings. A flicker of something unreadable passed through his molten eyes. Approval? Assessment? Hunger? Donarstraza couldn't tell, but it sent another treacherous wave of heat through her.

"The Realms have awaited your return with… trepidation, My Liege," Karnazul stated, his voice still respectful, yet carrying an undercurrent of something else. Caution? "Your power signature blazed across the abyssal layers like a newborn star. Yet…" His crimson eyes narrowed slightly, sharpening. "Your manifestation feels… contained. Deliberate restraint?"

Contained? Donarstraza's internal panic spiked. He can tell I'm weak! She scrambled for an explanation, anything that sounded suitably goddess-like and not 'I just got here and blew a third of my mana scaring imps.' Before she could formulate a suitably cryptic lie, the familiar, unwelcome blue rectangles flickered violently into her vision, overlaying the imposing figure of Karnazul.

[SYSTEM ALERT: Unique Interaction Detected!]

[Target: Karnazul, Lord of the Nine Blades]

[Compatibility: EXTREME (Physiological/Power Resonance)]

[New Skill Unlocked: Primal Seduction (Passive Lv.1)]

[Description: Your inherent demonic allure and status exert a potent, instinctive draw on compatible beings. Amplifies natural attraction, lowers inhibitions, and enhances pheromonal signals. Effect scales with Charisma, Target Compatibility, and Proximity.]

[Skill Activated! Karnazul susceptibility increased.]

[QUEST UPDATED: Strengthen the Bond]

[Description: Forge a deeper connection with your loyal General, Karnazul. Intimacy can unlock shared power potential, bolster loyalty, and provide significant experience. Physical and emotional resonance are key.]

[Objective: Initiate and consummate intimacy with Karnazul.]

[Reward: 500 XP, +1 to All Attributes, Skill Evolution: Primal Seduction (Lv.2), ???]

[Warning: Rejection may incur significant Charisma penalty and damage relationship.]

Donarstraza's mind blanked. The words burned into her retinas: Initiate and consummate intimacy. Her gaze snapped back to Karnazul, who was watching her with that intense, unreadable expression. Did his crimson pupils seem… dilated? Was he standing just a fraction closer? The air suddenly felt thicker, warmer, charged with an electric tension that had nothing to do with her lightning affinity. The scent of ozone and ash seemed sharper, more intoxicating. The low thrum in her veins became a demanding pulse, echoing the sudden, frantic beat of her heart.

No. No no no! Elina's internal shriek was pure panic. I can't! He's terrifying! And ancient! And… and… Her eyes traced the line of his ash-grey jaw, the powerful column of his throat above the armor's gorget, the way his obsidian tail now lay perfectly still, a coiled spring. The Primal Seduction skill wasn't just affecting him; it was amplifying her own already overwhelming attraction, twisting it into a desperate, physical need. The system's cold logic – shared power, experience, loyalty – warred with sheer, hormonal terror and the absurdity of the demand.

Karnazul took a single, deliberate step forward. The distance between them halved. His molten gaze held hers, and this time, she saw it clearly – a flicker of heat that mirrored her own, a predatory interest that went beyond mere loyalty. The passive skill was working. The extreme compatibility the system detected was manifesting, pulled to the surface by her unlocked allure and his own demonic nature.

"My Liege?" His voice was lower now, a deep vibration that resonated in her chest. "You seem… unsettled. The transition is taxing?" He took another step. Close enough now that she could feel the heat radiating from his body, smell the subtle, spicy scent beneath the ozone and metal. His crimson eyes dropped briefly to her lips, then back to her eyes, the intensity searing. "Allow me to offer my strength. As I always have."

His words, meant perhaps as reassurance, sounded like a promise. A dangerous, intoxicating promise. The quest reward glowed accusingly in her peripheral vision: 500 XP. +1 to All Attributes. Enough to jumpstart her power. Enough to maybe survive the next encounter. The Primal Seduction skill hummed, a constant pressure, lowering her inhibitions, heightening every sensation. The fear was still there, a cold knot in her stomach, but it was being drowned out by the roaring heat, the magnetic pull towards his power and presence, and the system's relentless prompting.

Donarstraza found her voice, but it came out huskier than she intended, laced with the tension thrumming through her. "Strength, Karnazul…" She met his gaze, her golden eyes wide, reflecting the hellish light and her own chaotic emotions. The broken throne room seemed to shrink, containing only the two of them – the newly reborn, vulnerable goddess and the ancient, powerful warrior sworn to her. The air crackled, thick with unspoken intent and the system's insidious directive. "Yes… perhaps… your strength is precisely what is needed."

She took an involuntary half-step towards him, drawn by the potent cocktail of her own amplified desire, his undeniable presence, and the glowing blue demand of the quest panel. Her hand, seemingly of its own volition, began to lift from her side. The distance between them was now mere inches. Karnazul's crimson eyes burned, fixed on hers, his expression a mask of fierce devotion and awakening hunger. His own hand twitched, as if to reach out.

The vast, ruined chamber held its breath. The only sounds were the frantic drumming of Donarstraza's heart in her ears and the low, almost subsonic hum of Karnazul's power. The path forward was terrifyingly clear, charged with peril and promise, dictated by a system that saw intimacy as just another path to power. The moment hung, poised on the razor's edge between command and capitulation, between goddess and girl, between terror and desperate, primal need.

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