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Chapter 1 - The Wait that Defined Time

>" Andharu entho prayathnisthunnaru....

Kaani ee prananiki velugu raavadam ledu."

--- His mother, every day on those heavy days.

[" Everyone right there are trying so hard.

But this life is not finding any light"

--- His mother, every day on those heavy days. ]

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The world measures birth in due dates.

9 months.

A countdown to joy.

But for his mother… it wasn't that simple.

It wasn't a countdown.

It was a fight against time itself.

Every passing week after the 9th month felt like a betrayal of hope.

Doctors furrowed their brows.

Relatives whispered prayers behind trembling lips.

But only she knew what it meant to wait with pain wrapped in faith.

> "Endhuku ledu… inka endhuku raaledu?"

>[" Why?... Why isn't he came outside till now... "]

She'd whisper to her stomach, feeling the silent kicks… hoping he was still there.

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The Silent Storm — 10 Months, 27 Days.

It was a dark dawn when the pain finally came.

Not the usual labor pain… this was different.

Her body screamed, but her soul stayed still — because this was the moment she feared… and hoped for.

The hospital lights were cold.

Her pulse — faster than the monitor.

The nurses rushed.

The doctors hesitated.

And then…

He was born.

But… there was no cry.

No soft wail.

Just silence.

> "Baby…" she whispered, weakly.

"Chustunnaraa? Vaadu… vaadu edavatledu…"

[" See there! He isn't... He isn't crying... "]

The doctor turned slowly.

Face pale. Voice heavy.

> "We tried… but we can only save the mother."

Amidst the panic… one voice rose.

> "Kaadhu doctor… vaadini kuda kaapadandi.

Okavela babu ledu ante… ee ammayi ki jeevithame ledu."

 — Grandma.

[" "No, doctor… please save him too.

If the baby doesn't survive… this girl has no life left."]

The mother's pulse was falling.

But her hands… they folded in prayer.

Not to live — but to let her child live.

After a pause of 2 to 3 hours of his birth...

And then… a flicker.

A twitch.

A breath.

One single breath.

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Life After Death

It wasn't treatment.

It was war.

Doctors tried everything.

Oxygen, CPR, heart shocks — the room echoed with alarms and chants.

And finally…

He cried.

A loud, late, broken cry.

Not of a newborn… but of a soul that had already seen the other side.

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Born with a Threat

But fate wasn't done.

The doctors found something —

A rare, silent condition.

If untreated…

If left unchecked…

He wouldn't survive beyond a few months.

His mother — still recovering — refused to rest.

His Grandmaa — holding him day and night — never let him go.

And

She tried and tried to cure him from that.

Finally their prayers and hardwork came true...

He was cured...

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And so began his true birth…

Not the one that doctors recorded.

But the one where he learned to fight…

Before he could even open his eyes.

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But, this is life

The problems can't take the backstep by seeing you in a good position.

 ----- To be Continued -----

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