The journey eastward was slow, deliberate. Three days after leaving the smoking ruins of Jinshan, Mei Lin and her companions followed a narrow path that threaded through whispering pine forests. The trees stood impossibly tall, their ancient boughs unmoving, as if listening to secrets carried on the wind. Mist, thick and clinging, curled around their ankles like ghostly hands, chilling them to the bone.
Tian, ever aloof, padded silently ahead, his six tails swaying with a rhythmic grace. "We're close," he murmured, his voice a low rumble. "The Spirit Valley lies just beyond the Songlin Ridge."
Mei Lin craned her neck, gazing up at the mountains looming in the distance—twin peaks that cleaved the sky like ancient spears. Between them, a shimmering, pulsating veil of pale green fog obscured the world beyond.
"Is it… protected?" she asked, her voice barely a whisper against the vast silence of the woods.
"More than you know," Tian responded, not bothering to turn. "No evil may pass without being torn apart by the Valley's wards. But we must be invited in."
"And how exactly do we get invited?" Jin asked, his hand instinctively resting on the hilt of his now-trusted blade, his gaze wary of the glowing mist.
As if in response, the fog ahead began to part, not dissipating, but opening. A figure emerged—tall, impossibly serene, robed in pale green silk that seemed to absorb the mist itself. She moved barefoot on the mossy trail, her movements as fluid as water. Her face was ageless, framed by long, silver hair secured with intricately carved jade cords.
"I am Lian of the Spirit Valley," she said, her voice like the soft rustle of wind through bamboo leaves. "I have been expecting you, Mei Lin of the Heaven-Sealed Lineage."
Mei Lin's breath hitched in her throat, a jolt of shock and recognition seizing her. "You… you know me?"
Lian offered a faint, knowing smile. "Not yet fully. But the stars sang of your coming. The seal you carry, awakened by the recent turmoil, resonated with the wardstones of our valley. Come, the sages await."
As they stepped through the parting mist, it fell behind them like a closing, shimmering gate.
Inside, it was another world entirely. Trees pulsed with soft, internal Qi, their branches laden with glowing flora. Floating lanterns drifted lazily among serene lotus ponds, their light reflecting on the still water. Spirit deer, ethereal and graceful, grazed peacefully beneath the spray of crystalline waterfalls. The very air shimmered with an invisible energy, a soft hum that vibrated against Mei Lin's skin, a sensation both alien and strangely familiar.
Jin breathed, awe etched on his face, "It's like stepping into a dream."
"No," Lian said softly, her voice carrying a profound wisdom. "This is the real world. The realms beyond the veil—what mortals call magic—is merely what they have forgotten."
They followed Lian along a winding, moss-covered path that led to a towering jade spire, its surface intricately carved and ringed with ancient, floating runes. Monks in simple robes, wise-eyed sages, and gentle spirit beasts moved in quiet harmony around them. At its peak, the spire culminated in the Hall of Echoes—the sacred repository where all the Valley's deepest secrets were kept.
Inside the vast hall, they knelt before a silent circle of elders. Their faces were ancient, serene, their eyes glowing faintly with a deep, contained power that hinted at untold centuries of knowledge.
Lian stepped forward, her voice respectful but firm. "I present to you Mei Lin, chosen bearer of the First Seal."
A profound silence followed, thick and humming with latent energy. It felt less like an absence of sound and more like the entire world holding its breath.
One of the elders, a figure with eyes like polished obsidian, finally spoke, his voice like grinding stone, old and resonant. "Then the time has come. The War of Heavens shall rise again."
Mei Lin's fists clenched, the weight of the words pressing down on her. A wave of dread washed over her, mixed with a desperate need for answers. "Please… tell me everything."
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