Alright. So here's the plan.
I've been thinking about this a lot lately. Now that my writing's gotten better, I've decided to go back to the start of the story and finally give those early chapters the time and attention they always deserved.
I'm not just fixing typos or tweaking little things here and there. I'm talking full expansions. I'm adding new scenes, rewriting old ones, building up the atmosphere, deepening the pacing. All the stuff I skipped over when I was just trying to get to the action — I'm going back for it.
Because let's be honest. Hitler came into power way too fast in the beginning. I didn't let that rise feel earned. It just sort of.... happened. Like one chapter he was nobody, and the next he was leading armies. And I've been sitting on that for a while, knowing deep down that I needed to go back and build it properly.
So now I'm slowing things down in the best way possible. Giving the story room to breathe. Adding more political tension.... Showing the cracks in the world before it breaks. Making the reader feel the weight of every shift, every betrayal, every little step toward something bigger.
I'm also adding way more lore. Like actual world-building — culture, history, little background moments that make the whole thing feel real. Because yeah, I got the detail part down. I've always been about the details. But looking back, I realized I was all detail and not enough depth in the beginning. Not enough context. Not enough world beneath the surface. That's changing now.
And yeah — while I'm at it, I'm done with the old formatting stuff too. Dashes, random breaks, weird lines that made the page look chopped up. I used to think it added drama. But now it just makes the chapters feel messy. And this story deserves better than that. Clean structure. Real flow. No distractions.
Now if you're someone who's been reading since early on — if you've stuck with this story through all its ups and downs — I need you to know something.
You do not have to go back and reread those old chapters. Seriously. Even with the new scenes and added moments, the main storyline hasn't changed. The characters still end up in the same places. The plot still moves forward the same way. All I'm doing is adding weight to it. Filling in the gaps that were always meant to be there.
If you're the kind of reader who loves deeper storytelling, slow burns, expanded tension, and lore that ties it all together, then yeah — you might enjoy going back through. But if you're just here to follow the main story as it moves forward, you're totally fine. You won't be lost. You won't be missing anything major. I promise.
That said, I'm putting a pause on brand new chapters for a little while. Not because I'm done. Not even close. But because these early scenes have been in my head for so long, and I want to finally write them the way they should have been written from the start.
I know this sounds like a lot. I know it might even sound overambitious. But yeah — one day, I do want this to be an anime. Or a manhwa. Or something big and real. That's been the dream for a long time now.
I'm just a college student right now. Not broke-broke, but definitely living in that middle space. You know the feeling. You've got enough to survive, but not enough to fund some big animated production. Still, the vision is there. The blueprint is there. And every time I sit down to write, I'm building toward that.
That's the goal. I'm not stopping.
And if you're still reading this right now —If you made it through all this rambling, this honest yapping, this unfiltered breakdown of where I'm at and where I'm going —
Then I love you for real. Because you didn't have to. You didn't have to sit here and listen to a guy talk about fixing his own story and chasing some crazy dream. But you did.
That kind of support means more than I can explain. You are literally the reason this story is still alive.
Thank you for being here. Thank you for reading. Thank you for sticking with me.
I'll be back soon with the updated chapters. Until then — take care of yourselves. And if you're a creator too, never let go of your story. Even when it's hard. Even when you feel like no one's watching. Keep going.
See you when it's ready.
P.S This is the last chapters with dashes i'm okay if its chopped lol.