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Chapter 2 - Chapter 2 — Hunters in the Fog

🜃 Previously…

Ash awakened in the Sanctum, his memories erased, a cursed seal on his hand. Now a war council watches him closely — some seeking redemption, others fearing disaster. As ancient enemies stir in the shadows, Ash must reclaim his past to survive the future.

☰ CENDRALIS — Outskirts of the Hallowed Peaks, 7 Days Before the Eclipse

The wind screamed like a dying god.

Ash pulled his cloak tighter, the fabric still wet from the mountain rain. His boots squelched through moss and mud as the fog thickened around him. Beside him walked Ira, her steps noiseless, her blade resting in the crook of her shoulder like an afterthought.

"This place feels wrong." Ash muttered.

Ira nodded. "That's because it is. The Veil here is thinning."

"The Veil?"

"The barrier between thought and form. Between now and… before."

They moved deeper into the mist. Behind them, a Sanctum scout team advanced in a wide formation. The peaks above loomed like shattered teeth, and the ruins of an old monastic tower rose ahead — their destination.

"This is where your first memory was sealed." Ira said.

"The Sanctum mapped the site after your disappearance. No one's returned since."

"Why not?"

"Because the last team who tried started burning from the inside."

The tower stood black against the sky, half-swallowed by vines and fog. Its stone was cracked, but glyphs still pulsed faintly across the archway — not Sanctum work. Older. Wilder.

Ash stepped through first.

His foot landed on cold marble — unbroken, pristine, wrong.

Inside the ruin was not ruin at all.

It was intact.

"It's reacting to you." Ira whispered.

"Why do I feel like I've been here before?"

"Because you have. You just don't remember what you buried."

A high-pitched chime echoed through the halls. The door behind them slammed shut. The air grew dense. Every wall shimmered with a faint, mirrored gleam.

Ash's seal flared.

The floor beneath him glowed — not stone but memory.

And from the light rose a second Ash.

He was identical — same face, same clothes — but older in stance. Eyes like weapons. Voice like ruin.

"Welcome back, coward."

☰ MEMORY SHARD: YEARS AGO

Ash stumbled back. The apparition mirrored none of his movements.

The phantom spoke:

"You've sealed me because I knew too much. Because I remembered what we did to Cendralis. But now you crawl back, half a soul and broken spine, hoping to pick at scraps."

Ira whispered, "That's not a memory. It's a mirror echo."

"How do I kill it?" Ash asked.

"You don't." she replied.

"You let it judge you."

The mirror-Ash raised a blade made of glass and blood.

"Trial accepted."

The chamber blurred. Time fractured.

Ash stood on a battlefield — corpses stretched to the horizon. Fires danced across a sky of screaming stars. Above him, a floating citadel wept chains of light.

"You left this behind." the mirror said.

"Let's see if your heart still breaks for it."

From the ruins rose a woman in black — her body cracked with shadowfire, her eyes burning with pain.

Ash dropped to his knees.

He didn't know her name. But his heart did.

"Who is she?"

"The one you chose to forget."

She screamed.

The ground split.

Ash collapsed.

And remembered.

☰ PRESENT TIME — TOWER HEART

He woke to Ira slapping his face.

"You were gone for too long. The seal spiked. You nearly bled from your eyes."

Ash looked down. The mark on his palm was now laced with gold, not just black.

"I saw her," he said, trembling.

"I knew her. I killed her."

Ira didn't ask questions.

She helped him stand.

"This is just the first. We have five more sealed sites before the eclipse."

"That many?"

"You tried very hard to forget who you were."

As they left the tower, mist parted ahead.

A figure waited.

Tall. Pale. Wearing a mask shaped like a moth's skull.

It spoke without moving its lips.

"The Ashborn awakens. The Slumber ends. The Eidolons shall fall again."

Ira's blade was up instantly.

Ash's hand burned.

The masked figure raised its staff — and shattered into ash.

From the cliffs above, arrows rained down.

Sanctum scouts screamed.

"Ambush!"

Fog wolves tore through the flanks. Hounds with hollow eyes and gnarled bone-spines.

Ash surged forward — instinct over logic — dodging a fang, slamming his palm against the wolf's skull.

Light exploded.

The creature froze. Then imploded into crystal dust.

Ira stared at him.

"You just used Eidolon magic."

"I don't know how."

"Then start remembering. Because we're outnumbered."

The battle was chaos.

Ash moved like a weapon guided by a ghost — each movement borrowed from a man he used to be. The wolves fell. Then came the cloaked hunters — faces covered, blades glowing blue.

One struck him in the chest.

Pain, but not death.

His seal absorbed the blow — and pulsed back.

The assassin screamed, seized, and began laughing uncontrollably before collapsing in silence.

Ash stumbled away, breathing hard.

"What's happening to me?"

Ira shouted, "You're unsealing, piece by piece."

"What if I don't want to know what's inside?"

"Then you better pray you never face yourself again."

When it ended, only four Sanctum scouts remained.

The rest were lost.

Varos' voice crackled through a runestone communicator.

"We sensed the spike. You survived?"

Ash answered.

"Barely. But the Eidolon magic inside me is growing."

"Good. You'll need it."

"Your next target is worse."

"Where?"

Varos paused.

"The city of Miraeth. The capital. It fell twelve years ago. You were last seen there — burning the king alive."

Ash felt ice creep through his chest.

"And why would I do that?"

"That's what we all want to know."

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☰ Twilight — Base Camp Below the Tower

The aftermath was thick with the scent of iron and frost.

Ash sat by the shattered fire pit, hands trembling as he stared into the flames. The others busied themselves with the wounded, repairing wards, salvaging what they could. Four Sanctum scouts dead. Three too wounded to move.

Ira returned from the ridge, her silhouette limned in moonlight.

"They came from the Hollow Order," she said quietly, kneeling beside him.

"The Moth-Masked One… He left behind a glyph."

She unfurled a scroll.

A symbol burned into the hide — two rings, interlocked, one black, one bleeding.

Ash stared at it, nausea clawing up his throat.

"I've seen that before."

"Where?"

"In fire. In… her eyes."

Ira tilted her head.

"The woman from the echo memory?"

He nodded.

"She wore that mark on her chest. But it was broken. Like someone had torn it out."

☰ Cendralis Lore Fragment: The Hollow Order

Long before the Eidolons fractured, a cult formed from those who gazed too long into the deep magic of the Void. Calling themselves the Hollow Order, they believed memories were curses and selfhood a prison.

They burned identities, erased names, and bound their fates to the forgotten god known only as "The Moth of Silence." Their magic draws from Oblivion — not just destruction, but erasure.

Few survive encounters with them. Fewer still remember.

☰ Midnight Watch

Ash couldn't sleep.

Every time he closed his eyes, her scream returned — not rage, but grief, a wail that bent time.

"You've sealed me because I knew too much."

He stood up and walked past the edge of the fire's glow. The mist had thinned, revealing more of the Hallowed Peaks — spines of stone like ribs jutting from the earth. The stars blinked above, disinterested.

Footsteps.

Ira joined him.

"You should rest. We march at dawn."

"I don't sleep well. Not since I woke up."

She studied him carefully.

"Then let's talk. About what you're becoming."

☰ Character Lore: Ira Valen

Once a blade-priestess of the Ashen Sanctum, Ira Valen was known for her loyalty, her silence, and her execution record.

Assigned to watch Ash after his resurrection, she is both guardian and interrogator — tasked with aiding his memory retrieval while ensuring containment should he turn rogue.

Her magic is swordbound — echo-infused steel that resonates with emotion and memory.

Ash asked, "How long ago did I disappear?"

"Twelve years. You fell during the Siege of Miraeth. Your body was never found."

"And now I just… return. With no memory. A cursed seal. Voices in the walls. And a cult trying to erase me before I remember what I am."

She smirked. "Sounds about right."

He turned to her.

"I saw myself kill someone. In the mirror trial. Someone important. She called me Ashenborn."

Ira's expression darkened.

"You were. Once. The first to bear the Seal and survive. But you weren't the only one."

Ash's pulse quickened.

"There are more like me?"

"Were. Five others. The other Ashborn. Only one might still live. And she has every reason to hate you."

☰ Dawn — The Descent from the Tower

At sunrise, the fog retreated. The team packed their dead for sky-rite burning, per Sanctum law. Ash stood silently as the flames devoured the bodies — no mourning rites, only a low humming from Ira and the scouts.

The seal on his palm pulsed once — as if sensing closure.

He turned to the ruins.

From within, something shimmered — a shape in the light. Briefly, impossibly, he saw the woman again. The one from the memory.

She smiled. Then bled away like ink in water.

☰ Side Scene — The Other Ashborn

Far away, in the forgotten desert known as The Grey Expanse, a woman awoke.

Her eyes glowed with fractured gold.

Her blade was etched with ash-runes.

She opened a scroll sealed in wax.

The symbol of the two rings. The Hollow Order.

Inside, just six words:

"Ash lives. Time to finish it."

She stood, alone in a ruined temple where names had no meaning.

"You promised you'd stay dead, brother."

☰ The Journey to Miraeth — Three Days Later

Ash and Ira traveled with only one scout — Tellen, a mute boy with star-sight who charted leyline distortions. They rode on rune-beasts, four-legged creatures bred for silence and mountain terrain.

Miraeth's spires rose on the horizon like the bones of a fallen god. Once the capital of the human dominion, now abandoned — its gates fused shut by ancient fire.

Ash whispered, "This place knows me."

Tellen signed, "Then it probably hates you too."

They passed beneath a broken arch. Every stone was engraved with names — citizens, warriors, or victims. One name repeated every hundred steps.

ASHEN. ASHEN. ASHEN.

Graffiti from the survivors?

A warning?

Or worship?

☰ Cliffhanger Ending

As night fell, Ash camped outside the city walls.

Dreams came.

He stood on Miraeth's throne.

The king lay before him, skin melting in arcs of unholy fire.

Ash was laughing.

Behind him, the five other Ashborn knelt in chains — bleeding from their eyes.

And from the shadows, a voice whispered:

"You burned the world to forget her. What will you destroy to remember?"

Ash woke, gasping, and looked down at his hand.

The seal now had a second ring forming around the first.

The mirror trial had changed it.

The seal was no longer sleeping.

❖ END OF CHAPTER 2 — "Hunters in the Fog"

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