To make this as short as possible I'll be redoing the first chapter make it way better than it currently is because let's be honest it feels very wonky, and heavily rushed. I know I can do better than it's current state so I'll be taking it down, and completely reworking if not completely rewriting it from scratch. The only thing I'll be keeping is the powers I may even change Ophia's design unsure on that front, but that's all bye!
Update:
Sorry forgot to say I'll also be rewriting ch3, and doing so edits to chapter 2 that's all bye for real