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Chapter 45 - Chapter 45 – A Cloaked Offer

📌 Previously in Chapter 44:

Zayd uncovered the truth behind the rival carriage shop — it was backed by an old noble faction marked with a golden lion sigil, the same one seen in Mosul. Rather than confront them directly, Zayd began working on a new, advanced winter carriage model. Meanwhile, Faheem and Rayhan handled the shop as Aftab guarded the operations.

📍 Scene: Zayd's Office – Afternoon

The door creaked open. Qadir poked his head in, looking unusually serious.

QADIR:

"Zayd… there's a guest. He says he's from Isfahan. Carries no weapons, but speaks like a man with weight."

Zayd closed his ledger.

ZAYD:

"Show him in. And keep Nimr close."

Qadir nodded, and moments later, a man in an ivory cloak and dark green turban entered. His beard was trimmed short, his eyes sharp, observant.

STRANGER (bowing slightly):

"Zayd ibn Suleiman. A name already on merchant tongues in three cities."

ZAYD (gesturing to the seat):

"Names travel faster than truth. Sit, and speak yours."

The man sat, placing a leather case on the table.

STRANGER:

"I am Ishaq al-Zarhani, envoy of a trading guild based in Isfahan… and a quiet observer of innovation."

Zayd said nothing but narrowed his eyes.

ISHAQ:

"We saw your carriage. Sleek. Comfortable. Efficient. Something even noblemen would ride in."

Zayd smiled faintly.

ZAYD:

"You came to praise or purchase?"

ISHAQ (smiling):

"Neither. I came to partner. The Silver Stallion you've seen... It's just the first of many attacks. They'll steal, undercut, and if that fails—bribe or burn. What you need… is a shield."

Zayd leaned back.

ZAYD:

"And what would such a shield cost me?"

Ishaq leaned forward.

ISHAQ:

"A modest percentage of every expansion route. Five percent. We handle taxes, border bribes, merchant rumors. You focus on creation. We protect it."

Zayd studied him.

ZAYD:

"And if I refuse?"

ISHAQ (shrugging):

"Then others may come. Louder, and less polite."

📍 Scene Change: Tea Garden – Evening

Later that day, Zayd sat with Qadir, Faheem, and Layla beneath a fig tree. Nimr perched above, feathers catching the setting sun.

QADIR (grinning):

"So… mysterious noblemen, secret guilds, stolen designs… What's next? A princess with a flying carpet?"

LAYLA (smiling):

"You joke, but this is the world you asked for, Zayd. Fame comes with thorns."

ZAYD (calmly):

"Then I'll learn to walk barefoot."

He looked at the leather case Ishaq had left — unopened, lying on the table. A contract was inside.

ZAYD (to Layla):

"If you were me, would you accept his offer?"

Layla raised an eyebrow.

LAYLA:

"I'd read every line, ask who his enemies are… then write a better contract myself."

They all laughed, and Qadir added:

QADIR:

"Or just marry him and get it for free!"

Everyone groaned.

📌 Closing Narration:

The web around Zayd grew tighter. Friends became advisors, rivals grew in the shadows, and opportunity came cloaked in compliments. But he remained calm — not because the road was easy, but because he had already died once.

And a man who has died once… doesn't fear the next storm.

End of Chapter 45

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