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Chapter 13 - Chapter 13: The Net Tightens

The quiet hum of appreciation for his chocolate bar review was a fragile comfort, but it couldn't drown out the persistent thrum of anxiety in Leo's chest. He knew Valeria was out there, a phantom menace, meticulously searching for the ghost of "PalatePilot." He just hadn't realized how meticulous.

His heightened paranoia meant he noticed things. A familiar-looking sedan parked a little too often down his street. A new face at his local convenience store, lingering by the magazine rack a beat too long. He dismissed them as figments of his imagination, then berated himself for being so naïve.

Miles away, Valeria's office whiteboard was a masterpiece of deduction. Lines connected Umi's Noodle Bar to Morning Dew Bakery, to other spots PalatePilot had championed. She had compiled timelines, noted the unique phrasing in PalatePilot's reviews, even analyzed the times of day reviews were typically posted. Her current theory: PalatePilot frequented independent, non-chain establishments, often reviewing them before they became widely popular, and generally seemed to operate within a specific quadrant of the city.

She had a team. A quiet, unobtrusive freelance photographer, and a researcher who excelled at cross-referencing public records and online data. "Operation: Unmask the Palate" was in full swing, turning the digital breadcrumbs Leo left behind into a very real trail.

One crisp afternoon, Leo decided to revisit a small, obscure coffee shop he'd reviewed months ago – one so tiny, he thought, it would surely be safe. He sat in his usual corner booth, feeling a rare moment of ease as he sipped his coffee. The shop was almost empty.

Suddenly, a woman entered. She wasn't flashy like Valeria, but her eyes, framed by dark hair, scanned the room with a focused intensity that made Leo instinctively flinch. She ordered a simple black coffee and took a seat where she had a clear view of everyone, including Leo. He recognized her. She was a regular contributor to Valeria's blog, always tagged in her professional photoshoots. One of Valeria's lieutenants.

Leo's heart hammered against his ribs. He immediately pulled out his phone, pretending to be engrossed in a game. He could feel her gaze, subtle but persistent. She wasn't looking at the coffee; she was looking at him. His careful notes in his mental map of safe places crumbled. This was no random fan. This was a targeted hunt.

He chugged his coffee, burning his tongue, and fumbled for his wallet. His hand trembled slightly as he left money on the table, trying to appear nonchalant. As he stood to leave, the woman's phone, resting on her table, vibrated. The screen briefly lit up with a notification: a photo thumbnail of a young man with dark hair, wearing a similar jacket to his own. The text snippet below read: "Potential Match – Flavor Bloom Cafe Footage."

Leo didn't wait. He bolted. He practically ran out of the coffee shop, the cold afternoon air doing little to cool his flushed face. He felt like a deer caught in headlights. He didn't stop until he was a block away, leaning against a rough brick wall, gasping for breath.

He immediately called Sam.

Leo: (Voice tight with panic) "Sam! She's here. Valeria's... she's got people! I just saw one of them, and she had... she had a picture of me, Sam! Or someone who looks like me from Flavor Bloom!"

Sam: (Sounding grim) "Slow down, Leo. A picture? From Flavor Bloom? That 'Taste Test Tuesday' stunt... I told you it was a bad idea. Okay, just... go straight home. Don't go anywhere else. This is getting serious."

Leo clutched his phone, his knuckles white. The joy of "PalatePilot," the quiet satisfaction of his reviews, had been completely swallowed by this suffocating fear. He was being hunted. And the net was tightening. The question wasn't if he'd be found, but when.

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