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Chapter 5 - 3.INCISIONS

Nora Keane didn't sleep. She prepared.

While Westbridge drifted into its shallow, sanitized version of rest, between 3 and 5 a.m., she sat upright in her apartment, surrounded by files and silence. Her table was littered with surgical notes, incomplete charts, and lab results nobody else had noticed yet. Her coffee had gone cold hours ago. She hadn't touched it.

Outside, the world was starting to stir sirens, distant horns, the buzz of streetlights giving way to traffic but inside, time stood still. The apartment wasn't a home. It was a bunker. A lab. A war room.

The patient she had saved the night before young, pale, almost dead was alive now. His vitals stable. The monitors quiet. The surgical team had called it a miracle. Elias had nodded once in her direction. Nurses had whispered her name.

But for Nora, it wasn't victory.

It was a warning.

People only survived when someone was willing to see what others refused to. The boy from Room 304 had almost died because someone didn't read the signs. Someone got lazy. Someone got tired. Someone had let comfort win.

Just like they had with Lily.

Her fingers paused on a printed name, hovering just above the edge of a page. Her breath didn't falter. Her pulse didn't shift. But something inside her stilled completely.

Arthur L. Brenner.

General surgery. Consultant rotation. Temporary assignment. Effective immediately.

She read it twice.

Then a third time.

It wasn't a mistake. It wasn't coincidence. It was him.

The man who had missed everything. The man who had smiled while signing her sister's chart with careless notes and condescending certainty.

The man who had let Lily die.

She didn't tremble. Didn't blink. She simply set the paper aside and reached for her coat. Her movements were quiet, mechanical, but something in her spine had changed. A subtle shift. A coil tightening.

He wouldn't recognize her. Not now. Not like this. Too many years had passed. Too many versions of herself had come and gone. She had buried the girl who once sat beside a hospital bed clutching her sister's hand. The girl who had begged for someone to look again. To care.

Dr. Keane was all that remained.

And Dr.Keane didn't ask. She acted.

In the early light, Westbridge glowed like it always had clean, calm, polished. A cathedral of false hope and measured compassion. Nora walked through its doors like a surgeon entering an old battlefield. The routine had already begun: nurses charting vitals, residents huddling over clipboards, early rounds shifting into gear.

No one noticed the change in her expression.

Except her.

She headed for the staff lounge. Not because she needed caffeine, but because she needed to see him. Confirm it. Feel the weight of it.

The room was half-full. The smell of over-roasted beans clung to the air. Someone had left the news on mute, a looping headline about malpractice in a Boston trauma center. Fitting.

Then the door opened.

Arthur Brenner walked in like he still owned the air around him.

He looked older, yes. Slightly rounder. His hair graying at the temples. But his posture was the same. His voice the same. He greeted another attending with the confidence of someone who had spent a lifetime unchallenged.

Nora stood near the back wall, coffee cup untouched in her hand, her gaze fixed on him. He didn't see her. Why would he? She was just another coat. Another face. Another body in a system designed to erase the past.

But for her, this moment was a knife unsheathed.

She watched as he poured coffee, laughed at something no one else found funny, and dropped his briefcase on the central table like it was a throne.

Then she moved.

Three steps. Just enough to be noticed. Just enough to strike.

"Dr. Brenner," she said, voice low, neutral, sharp.

He turned, mug in hand, half-interested. "Yes?"

"Your notes on patient Collins are incomplete. Vitals were trending down for twelve hours. Delayed intervention almost cost him stability. We don't do delay here."

His eyes narrowed. Not defensive. Curious. Calculating.

"And you are?" he asked, lips twitching toward amusement.

"Someone who reads the full chart."

There was silence. Measured. Intentional. She could feel the air tighten. He didn't know her. Not yet. But something in his eyes shifted just slightly. That subtle tension of being challenged.

He gave a smile. Thin. Patronizing. "I'll make a note of it."

"You should," she said.

Then she walked away, leaving the taste of her silence in the room like blood.

The hallway beyond the lounge was colder than usual. Or maybe it was her. Nora's pace didn't change, but inside, something had begun to fracture. A pressure long buried was starting to shift, pressing up against the walls she had spent years reinforcing.

She found herself outside Exam Room 2.

Empty.

Quiet.

She stepped in, let the door close behind her, and leaned back against it.

The silence pressed in.

For a moment, she wasn't here.

She was fourteen again. Standing in Room 6B with a stuffed animal in her arms and her heart pounding because something was wrong she could feel it, could see it, even if the doctors refused to.

Lily lay in the bed, thin and gray, her smile dim but still trying. She had asked for water. No one brought it. She had whispered that her ribs hurt. No one listened. She had cried, once, softly, when she thought Nora was asleep beside her.

And then came Brenner.

Dismissive. Busy. Overconfident.

He read her chart like it was beneath him. Jotted down a note. Didn't look twice.

"She's young," he had said. "Probably stress. Kids are resilient."

He left without touching her. Without hearing her.

Nora never forgot the sound of that door closing.

Never forgave it.

Now, standing alone in Exam Room 2, she exhaled through her nose and pressed a hand against her chest, as if to steady something.

Then she turned, walked to the pre-op bay, and pulled the curtain aside.

The tray of instruments waited in silence.

Metal gleamed under fluorescent light. Everything perfectly aligned, sterile and prepared. The air was sharp with alcohol and cold metal.

She reached for a scalpel.

Lifted it slowly.

Her fingers didn't shake.

The weight in her hand was familiar. A memory. A vow.

She stared at the reflection on its surface her face, sharp and unreadable.

This wasn't a weapon.

It was a promise.

She wasn't here to kill.

She wasn't here to scream.

She was here to cut.

Clean. Deep. Precise.

Arthur Brenner had walked back into her life without a scar to show for what he'd done.

But now the scar would be his to carry.

Because this time, Nora was the one holding the blade.

And this time, she wouldn't miss.

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