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Chapter 7 - Chapter 7: “Beneath the Deep, the Gods Tremble”

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[Panel 1]

Wide shot of the open sea. A small sailboat cuts across the still waters. The sky is quiet.

Narration: "A day since Wraithcall Atoll... two lost souls drifted toward destiny."

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[Panel 2]

Kael sits at the front of the boat, arms resting on his knees, eyes fixed on the horizon. His face shows guilt.

Kael (thinking): "How many… did I hurt?"

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[Panel 3]

Behind him, Maelis is adjusting the boat's course. His new dual-form trident rests nearby — part normal, part blackened Sea Prism alloy, bound together by forged chain-links.

Maelis (calling out): "Don't sink into it, Kael. You're still here."

Kael: "Barely."

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[Panel 4]

Close-up of the trident. Its center crack reveals a twist-lock — when turned, it separates into two connected weapons.

Narration: "Forged from Wraithcall iron and a salvaged Sea Prism blade… the Tidebreaker Chain was born."

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[Panel 5]

Maelis eyes the trident, a flicker of memory rising —

[Flashback Panel — sepia tone]

Maelis and the village blacksmith over the forge.

Maelis: "If he loses control again… I need to stop him. No matter what it takes."

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[Panel 6]

Kael leans back, staring into the clouds. Kuro's voice echoes from within.

Kuro (internal, mocking): "Aww… regret now? Where was this sensitivity when you gutted that farmer?"

Kael (gritting teeth): "Shut up."

Kuro: "Make me."

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[Panel 7]

Kael lowers his head. Shadows creep across his face.

Kael: "You're still in there…"

Kuro (low, venomous): "And he's still watching. Your precious Maelis. With that stupid trident. Waiting."

Kael: "He saved me."

Kuro: "He pities you."

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[Panel 8]

Maelis sits beside him.

Maelis: "Heard that."

Kael (tense): "Didn't mean you to."

Maelis (calm): "Then talk louder next time. I hate whisper-fights."

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[Panel 9]

Suddenly —

SFX: RUMMMMMMBLE…

The sea shifts. A deep vibration rises from below.

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[Panel 10]

A dark shape begins to emerge in the ocean below them.

Kael (narrowing eyes): "...Something's under us."

Maelis: "No wind. No waves. This isn't natural."

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[Panel 11]

Full-page reveal

From the depths, a massive eye the size of their boat opens — glowing faint teal. Tentacle-like fins unfold. Scars run across its ancient face.

Narration: "The Abyssal Crown. A Sea King whispered of in nightmares — seen only five times in recorded history."

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[Panel 12]

Kael stares, frozen. The eye reflects in his own — he flashes back—

[Flashback Insert]

— a noble with a flaming symbol on their coat. Chains. Screams. The dart carved into Kael's skin.

Kuro (roaring from inside): "CELESTIAL FILTH!! I'LL RIP THEIR THRONES TO SPLINTERS!!"

Kael: "Stop—NOT NOW—"

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[Panel 13]

The Sea King sinks slowly into the depths again. Its eye lingers on Kael for a moment longer… then vanishes.

SFX: Fwoooooosh…

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[Panel 14]

Silence returns.

Maelis: "...What the hell was that?"

Kael: "A reminder."

Maelis: "Of?"

Kael (quiet): "That even gods can drown."

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[Panel 15]

The island comes into view — lush but quiet. Trees sway under an eerie wind.

Narration: "An island untouched by charted maps… where something small would shift something great."

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[Panel 16]

Village alley on the island

A group of thugs corner a child in an explorer's coat — Riven. He's clutching a compass, trembling.

Thug 1: "Hand it over, brat. That compass'll fetch millions."

Riven (crying, shaking): "N-No! Take anything else! Not this — it's my mother's!!"

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[Panel 17 – Cliffhanger Panel]

A thug raises a gun to Riven's face.

Thug 2: "Last warning."

Riven: "Please don't…"

BANG.

CUT TO BLACK.

Narration: "Next: The Compass Child."

TO BE CONTINUED.

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