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Scene 1 — Briefing at Headquarters
The morning light had just begun to thin the haze over the city when DSP Haroon stood before a large map pinned with red markers. The operations room at Lahore Police Headquarters smelled of strong tea and dusted paper—maps and duty rosters piled in careful disorder.
Inspector Haseeb reported, tapping the table: "Sir, our tracker followed the stolen SUV up through Mansehra. Local shepherds and two informants placed them near Balakot. They're trying to move into the mountain passes."
Haroon's jaw set. "They want the hills as a route to slip out. That was predictable. Assemble the Special Response Unit, contact the Rangers for aerial observation and coordinate with the local Levies. We'll move tonight — no, make it today. If they cross the ridge, we lose them forever."
Hands moved quickly: radios checked, jeeps fueled, and the names of covering teams called out. Haroon looked at the faces of his men. "This one is critical. These men killed a civilian who tried to stop them. We owe him justice."
A silence followed, weightier than any order. Then the team dispersed, each member locked into the sharp rhythm of a mission.
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Scene 2 — The Mountain Run
By midday the convoy threaded mountain roads where the air tasted of pine. Haroon rode in the lead jeep, Haseeb beside him; behind them were two tactical teams, paramedics, and a small aerial unit relaying occasional coordinates.
"Visibility's good, sir," reported the driver. "Radio link is stable."
"Keep it that way," Haroon answered. He scanned the tree line. "We split at Point Delta. Alpha goes west, Bravo north. Encircle. Take them alive if possible — but expect resistance."
Haseeb adjusted his rifle strap. "Sir, local informants said three suspects — all armed and desperate."
"Then expect desperation," Haroon said quietly. "We move with speed and care."
The countryside dropped away. Rocks and boulders stacked like old teeth along the pass. The convoy slowed, men disembarked, boots whispering on gravel as they formed into teams and crept toward the designated hide zone.
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Scene 3 — The Hideout and Tension
A squat, abandoned cabin crouched near a scrubby slope, half-hidden by boulders. Inside, the three men who had robbed the bank flinched at every twig-snap. Vijay paced with a rifle, Juginder cleaned a pistol, and Yashwant clutched a makeshift bandage at his shoulder.
"We can't stay long," Vijay snarled. "The police will be on us any minute."
Juginder was grim. "Our plan was good. Somewhere someone blabbed. We move at dusk, find a new route."
Yashwant's voice was thin with pain. "My shoulder is bad. I can't walk far."
Outside, a faint rustle moved through the undergrowth — a sound that was not wind. The men froze. Someone raised a finger to lips. Haroon's team, spread around the cabin, held their positions and signaled silence.
Haseeb's voice, almost inaudible on the radio: "Units in place. Wait for signal."
Haroon's lips barely formed the next word: "Go."
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Scene 4 — The First Shot
They thought they had the element of surprise. For a few long, breathless seconds it seemed it might work. Then a single shot cracked through the mountain air, violent and sudden. It hit a pine trunk nearby, splintering bark and sending a shower of needles.
"Ambush! Return fire!" Haseeb shouted.
The valley lit up with tracer lines. Police laid down suppressing fire, while the robbers fired back from the cabin's windows. A grenade lobbed from inside rolled into the underbrush and exploded with a deafening roar — a jeep rocked and slid, men were thrown to the ground.
"Medic! Two down by the flank!" someone yelled.
Through the chaos Haroon darted between rocks, barking orders. "Alpha, circle left! Bravo, pin them from the south! Cover the medics!"
Bullets tore into trees and ricocheted off stone. The mountain answered with its own thunder.
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Scene 5 — The Turning Point
Amid smoke and dust, Vijay attempted to bolt from the back of the cabin, rifle in hand. Haroon tracked him, shouting, "Stop! Drop the weapon!"
Vijay answered with a grin of rage and fired, but Haroon moved with the cold precision of a seasoned officer. A single return shot from Haroon's position struck Vijay in the chest. He crumpled instantly, the rifle slipping from numb fingers.
"Suspect down!" Haseeb called out over the radio. For a beat there was no cheering — only the hard, stunned quiet that follows a life ending.
Yashwant tried to crawl away clutching his shoulder; a bullet had torn through soft tissue, dropping him into a tangle of roots. Juginder, seeing any hope of escape gone, raised both hands and stumbled from the cabin with a look of raw defeat.
"I surrender!" he cried, voice breaking.
Officers moved in fast: clubbing doors and securing rooms. The wounded were bundled; medics worked on torn limbs under the urgent light of headlamps.
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Scene 6 — Haroon Hurt, but Standing
As they cleared the last room, a distant crack sounded — a sniper's delayed shot from deeper in the treeline. A searing pain tore into Haroon's upper arm. He tasted metal and his vision blurred at the edges. For a heartbeat he faltered.
"Sir!" Haseeb was at his side instantly, hands working to staunch the bleeding. Haroon's fingers dug into the dirt; his face set in a line of pain and resolve.
"I'm fine," he protested, gritting his teeth. "Finish the sweep."
"You're not walking, sir. Medvesic now," Haseeb ordered, though his voice had lost that evenness.
Haroon let them hoist him onto a stretcher. The bullet had grazed muscle and torn cloth; it would need surgery, but he was conscious — a fact that steadied everyone around him.
They loaded into the evacuation convoy as the mountain exhaled smoke and the night closed. Behind them lay an emptied cabin, one dead suspect, one wounded, and one in custody — a costly victory that had been hard-won.
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Scene 7 — Home, Calm, and the News
Back in Islamabad the evening was ordinary and quiet — people moving about their homes, lights in windows, dinner simmering. Maryam sat with her two boys, Ubaid and Irfan, in their modest living room. The two boys were giddy from their school rehearsals — Ubaid was recounting a line of his speech, Irfan humming the tune from the tablo.
"Ammi, today at school we practiced the flag dance again," Irfan said, spinning an imaginary scarf.
Maryam smiled and ruffled his hair. "SubhanAllah, you boys are working so hard. I'm proud of both of you."
They ate, did homework, and the normal rhythms of domestic life unfolded — laundry, tiffin packing for the next day, a small bedtime dua. Maryam's thoughts were only on her children's little faces. She had no idea how close danger had been for the city's peace officers that day.
Across town, at the Amana Superstore, Rimsha and Imran counted the day's earnings and joked about where to expand the next rack of clothing. Laughter and business mixed as they locked the door for the night.
A phone buzzed. The TV in the staff room, left on for late news, flashed an alert:
"Breaking: Police operation near Balakot — one suspect neutralized, two arrested/wounded. Senior officer injured in action."
Imran's hand froze over a ledger. "Haroon… injured?" he whispered.
Rimsha's face paled. "Haroon bhai? That cannot be. He was leading that raid."
Imran pulled out his phone and called the station line. On the other end the voice confirmed what the alert had said: Haroon was injured and being evacuated — condition stable but in hospital.
Rimsha's throat tightened. "May Allah protect him," she murmured, repeating a prayer as she closed the store for the night.
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Scene 8 — Evacuation and Aftermath
By the time the convoy reached a secure landing point, medics worked quickly. Haroon's arm was wrapped tightly, IV started. He was pale but conscious, eyes still bright with that iron will.
"You did well, sir," Haseeb said, exhaustion and pride mingling in his tone. "Juginder's in custody. Yashwant is critical; Vijay won't move again."
Haroon squeezed Haseeb's hand. "We got what mattered. The network behind them will unravel soon."
At the hospital, a stream of officers filed past Haroon's room — greetings, relief, congratulations, tired laughter. The operative had cost them: two injured officers, one fatality among the robbers, and a wound to their leader. The city would call it a victory; Haroon called it a price for protecting the innocent.
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Scene 9 — Night Prayers and Quiet Resolve
Late that night, in different corners of the city, people whispered prayers: Maryam tucked her sons into bed and prayed for the safety of those who kept the streets safe; Rimsha and Imran bowed their heads for Haroon's recovery; Haroon, wired to monitors, managed a weak smile as he promised his tired team, "Rest now. We will go further when I stand."
Outside the hospital light hummed, and the city settled for the night. The mountains at Balakot had accepted the thunder of a gunfight and returned silence. On the streets below, life continued — families, shops, and the quiet rhythms of morning preparation for a new day.
Yet in the offices and homes of those connected to the fight, a single thought lingered: justice demands courage, and courage sometimes costs blood. Haroon's wound would heal; the network they had touched would be hunted. For the men and women who kept the city breathing, there was no rest — only the next step forward.
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