Hi so i wanted to try writing for fun english is not my native language but i had a lot of fun trying things out and these 2 chapters were made probably made around a month ago
When i decided to try experimenting with writing i wrote this at first with no planning at all the only thing i had in mind was i wanted something with the vibes of lord of the mysteries along with a few other novels i liked i forgot to mention this but im also really busy with school and all of that stuff so i barely had time for writing so i used most of my time trying to plan out the world building but with what i was planning it felt too big and grand for me to write so i decided to not continue who knows maybe i'll continue this novel in the future but i think im gonna write a short novel first
Alright now time for some of my regrets and what i could of done better
I should of showed more of the mc's life before he transmigrated i should of probably added more inner monologues right after he wakes up in the room should of showed more of his relationship with his freinds and family i also should of planned probably but since im an idiot i just went for it and now im too attached because i decided to plan it after chapter 1 so i might just rewrite it for later but idk