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Chapter 5 - Chapter 3.5: Voices

Chapter 3.5: Voices

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I don't think I have a smooth way to introduce this part of the story without throwing you off with the change in tone. I've been telling the story in third person —or at least I believe I have.

Still, I think I can give you a glimpse into how a character's mindset was formed or changed. But if the tone doesn't work for you, feel free to skip it.

Until now, you've seen my characters from a distant, third-person perspective. But this chapter is... a little broken, and a bit strange.

So... good luck.

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( Point of View - Damien )

I cannot do it anymore. Why do I feel like a failure? I do what I think is the best decision at the moment. But I feel my God observes me like a mistake, a wrong take from this world.

There is whispering around everyone; some days louder, and some days so soft that you have to interpret it yourself. I know every misstep, every wasted hour, every moment I should've done more — and didn't.

I want to scream at my future. Tell him I'm trying. I don't want to hurt anyone, disappoint, or be this thing that always breaks everything it touches...

I'm tired.

But it doesn't matter, because I did not try my best.

I am trying to move forward, even if I drag my shame with me; waking up with the same weight, knowing I'll mess up again. And still, it is all I had.

My best isn't clean, graceful, or something anyone would praise. In the future, someone will remember my tries and...

They will think that I am a failure and that I did not try my best. I hope someday they believe I did. I would like to believe it.

Not for what I should have been.

Just for what I was.

And for now, that's the closest thing I have to peace.

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-- Pray for a really bad day, by Damien, before the time travel. --

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