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Chapter 7 - A night to remember

Lori's Date with John

The warm evening sun filtered softly through the curtains as Lori stood in front of the mirror, her hair still damp from the quick shower she'd taken. She hadn't planned on going out. In fact, she hadn't planned on doing anything today except maybe watch an old movie and quietly avoid the ache that never seemed to leave her chest.

But then John had called.

His voice had stirred something inside her—something she'd tried to bury long ago: the flutter of possibility. He had asked her out. Gently, playfully. And before she could overthink it, she had said yes.

Now, dressed in a simple, elegant navy dress that Thomas once loved on her, Lori stared at herself in the mirror. It felt strange to get ready for someone else—to want to look beautiful again. Her fingers lingered on her necklace, and for a moment, she closed her eyes, whispering, "Forgive me, Thomas. I need to live again."

The knock at the door came at exactly 10:00.

She opened it to find John standing there, holding a single white rose.

"For you," he said with that familiar crooked smile, the kind that made her heart shift in ways she wasn't prepared for.

Lori smiled despite herself. "You're really leaning into the romance, aren't you?"

"I figured you deserved it," he replied, his eyes soft. "You look… breathtaking."

Lori looked away, blushing. "You're not so bad yourself."

They walked side by side to the small, cozy restaurant just a few blocks away. It wasn't extravagant, but it was perfect. Candlelight flickered across the table, and soft jazz played in the background. Conversation came easy. John asked about her day, about Ava, about the books she'd been reading. And he listened—truly listened—in a way that made Lori feel seen.

As the night wore on, laughter began to replace the tension in her chest. Her guard slowly fell, and for the first time in what felt like years, she allowed herself to feel joy. Real, unforced joy.

Over dessert, John leaned in slightly, his tone more vulnerable. "I know I can never replace what you lost. I'd never try. But I want to be someone who brings you peace… who reminds you that there's still beauty in this life, even after the pain."

Lori's eyes welled with tears—not of sorrow, but of gratitude.

"I don't know where this will lead, John," she said softly. "I'm still trying to find myself again. But I'm here. And I'm willing to try."

He reached across the table and took her hand gently. "That's all I've ever wanted."

And in that quiet moment, with hearts slowly mending in each other's company, Lori allowed herself to believe that maybe—just maybe—she could start again.

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Next Chapter Preview: Ava and Tom – A New Kind of Friendship

While Lori begins to open her heart to healing, Ava finds herself drawn to an unlikely ally. Tom, the boy who stood up for her, begins to show up in ways that no one else ever has. For the first time, Ava starts to feel like she's not invisible.

But high school is still cruel, and rumors spread fast. With Bena licking her wounds and plotting revenge, and Ava navigating her own insecurities, this new connection with Tom might be more complicated—and more powerful—than she expected.

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Night That Changed Everything

Lori and John

The evening breeze carried with it the gentle scent of jasmine as Lori stepped out into the night, the soft click of her heels against the sidewalk breaking the stillness. The streetlamps cast golden halos over the pavement, and every now and then, a passing car hummed quietly in the distance. She held the white rose John had given her close to her chest as if it were a delicate promise.

John walked beside her, his hands tucked casually into the pockets of his dark blazer, a quiet confidence radiating from him. There was something about his presence—unassuming yet steady—that made Lori's steps feel lighter than they had in years.

They had spent the last two hours in the dimly lit restaurant tucked away at the end of Brookview Street, a hidden gem neither had visited before. The place had old-world charm: wooden beams on the ceiling, red velvet booths, and a jazz trio playing soft, melancholic tunes in the corner. The candle on their table flickered between them like a heartbeat, alive with possibility.

Lori had laughed more than she expected—full, real laughter that had startled her with its freedom. With every smile from John, every gentle question he asked about her life, every moment he looked at her without flinching away from her pain, she felt something shift inside her.

After dessert—lemon tart and espresso—they walked along the water's edge. The town's small lake shimmered under the moonlight, and the world felt temporarily paused in serenity.

John looked over at her. "You're quieter now. What's on your mind?"

Lori smiled faintly, the wind playing with a loose strand of her hair. "I was just… remembering what it felt like to be seen. You're making me remember."

He stopped walking then and gently turned her to face him. "You've never stopped being someone worth seeing."

She looked away, overwhelmed.

"I know there's still so much pain," John continued, his voice soft. "And I'm not asking you to run from it. I'm just… asking you to let someone walk beside you while you carry it."

Lori's eyes glistened under the moon. She nodded, unable to find words. A moment later, John leaned in and kissed her softly on the forehead. It was tender, reverent—like a whisper of affection placed upon a sacred wound.

They spent the rest of the night not talking much, but being. Watching the stars. Eating ice cream at the 24-hour diner. Driving through the quiet streets of their small town with the windows down and an old song playing on the radio. It felt like youth and healing wrapped in one surreal night.

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Homecoming and the Unraveling

It was past 8:00 PM when Lori glanced at her wristwatch. A small gasp escaped her lips. "Oh my God… Ava. I told her I'd be home."

John glanced at her, concerned. "You want me to drive you back?"

"Please," she said, quickly gathering her purse. "She'll worry."

They pulled up to her driveway. The porch light cast long shadows across the lawn. Lori hesitated before opening the car door, her heart still full from the night.

As she turned to thank John, he surprised her with a gentle kiss on the lips—short, hesitant, but undeniably full of emotion. It took her breath away. She didn't pull away. She didn't want to.

When she finally stepped out of the car, she kept touching her lips as if trying to understand what had just happened. Her heart raced—not in fear, but in something dangerously close to hope.

She opened the front door quietly, half expecting Ava to be asleep.

But not long after, she heard the sound of the front door shutting loudly. Ava had just returned. Her expression was sharp, angry. She brushed past Lori without a word, her backpack slung carelessly over one shoulder.

"Ava," Lori called, following her up the stairs. "Ava, come back here."

Ava didn't answer. She paused halfway up the stairs but didn't turn around.

"Mum, how was your date?" she asked coolly, her back still to Lori.

The words were laced with something bitter. Lori froze at the bottom of the steps.

"What's going on with you?" she asked, her voice low. "Ava, I've been noticing this for days. You're not talking to me. You come home upset. And tonight, you're acting like—"

"Like what?" Ava snapped, spinning around. "Like someone who's been forgotten?"

Lori blinked. "Ava…"

"You didn't answer my texts. Or my calls. I was trying to talk to you all day," Ava said, her voice rising. "I needed you."

"I'm sorry, sweetheart, I was out with—"

"John. Yeah, I figured," Ava said, folding her arms. "Glad to know your date was more important."

Lori stepped up the stairs slowly, her expression softening. "That's not fair, Ava."

"Neither is pretending like everything's okay just because you've found someone new."

Those words struck deep. Lori felt them like a blow. She stopped halfway up.

"I'm not pretending," she said quietly. "And I haven't found someone to replace your father. That's impossible. But I'm trying… to live again. For me. And for you."

Ava's eyes filled with tears, but she turned away.

"I'm fine, Mum," she said. "I just want to go to bed."

"No," Lori said, her voice trembling. "You're not fine. And you don't have to be. But don't push me away because you're afraid to be honest. Talk to me. Please."

For a long moment, the hallway was silent except for their breathing.

Then Ava broke. Her shoulders sagged, and the tears spilled over.

"I was bullied at the party," she whispered. "Bena called me a nerd, dragged my hair. And my friends… they left me. They made me go in the first place, and then they just left."

Lori felt her knees weaken. She rushed up the remaining stairs and wrapped her arms around her daughter, holding her tightly.

"Oh my God, Ava… why didn't you tell me?"

"I didn't want to ruin your night," Ava sobbed. "I just wanted you to be happy. And I didn't want you to feel like you couldn't have someone… like John."

Lori's heart shattered and healed at the same time.

"You're more important than any date," she whispered. "But I'm proud of you. You've been so strong. And I'm so, so sorry I wasn't there tonight."

They stayed like that for a long time—mother and daughter holding onto each other like lifelines in a storm.

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Part 3: A New Chapter – Ava and Tom

Later that night, after Lori tucked her in, Ava stared at her phone. There was a text waiting from an unknown number.

"Hey. It's Tom. Just checking if you're okay. I meant what I said—call me anytime."

A small smile tugged at the corner of Ava's lips.

She texted back:

"Thank you. I really needed someone today. You showed up when no one else did."

And somewhere across town, a boy smiled too.

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