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Chapter 24 - The Supreme God Asks

The pixels of the digital battlefield blurred as a horde of grotesque, moaning zombies swarmed towards the author's hastily constructed barricade. He slammed his mouse button, unleashing a volley of digital buckshot that tore through the undead ranks, sending limbs and pixelated gore flying.

"Need backup!" he yelled, his voice only slightly strained despite the virtual life-or-death situation.

Omnius, in the form of a hulking space marine clad in gleaming power armor, materialized beside him, unleashing a devastating barrage of plasma fire. The zombies evaporated in shimmering bursts of green energy. "As you wish, mortal author. Though I must confess, I find this…recreation…rather simplistic compared to the tapestry of realities I usually manipulate."

As the last of the zombies dissolved, Omnius turned, a mischievous glint in his digital eyes. "So, mortal author, when will you continue the official chapters? What about the MC, Marvin Rylan, and his girl Lilia? Are they doomed to wait forever?"

The author, whose real name was Elias Thorne, shrugged, his fingers still flying across the keyboard, already repairing the breached barricade. "Nah, we'll get to it… millions of years later. I'm lazy rn."

Omnius burst out laughing, a sound that resonated even through the game's audio, his supreme godly powers causing the digital zombies to momentarily freeze in confusion before despawning entirely. "Millions of years later? Ah, mortal author, you truly are a master of procrastination! The universe holds its breath for your next masterpiece, and you're content to blast digital zombies into oblivion."

Elias chuckled, feeling a bit sheepish. He knew he was neglecting his responsibilities. Readers were clamoring for the next installment of "Chronicles of the Ascended," the fantasy epic that had unexpectedly catapulted him into the literary spotlight. And Omnius, the story's enigmatic and impossibly powerful antagonist, was also apparently impatient.

"Hey, priorities, right? Zombie Uprising doesn't play itself," Elias retorted, attempting a lighthearted defense. Besides, he found the mindless repetition soothing, a welcome escape from the pressure of crafting intricate plotlines and compelling character arcs.

Omnius playfully nudged Elias's avatar with his own, sending the author's digital representation stumbling against the repaired barricade. "Well, I suppose I'll just have to wait patiently for the continuation of your story… whenever that may be. It's not as though a cosmic being has anything better to do than anticipate the whims of a creatively blocked author." There was a hint of amusement in the digital deity's voice, but also something else, something that sounded almost like… genuine interest.

Elias leaned back in his chair, a sigh escaping his lips. He knew Omnius's teasing was partly justified. He'd been staring at a blank document for weeks, the weight of expectation crushing his inspiration. "It's not easy, you know?" he finally admitted. "Bringing characters to life, weaving intricate plots, trying to create something… meaningful. Especially when a certain all-powerful being keeps popping up and questioning my creative choices."

Omnius's avatar tilted its head, the helmet obscuring any potential expression. "Meaningful? You seek to imbue mere words with meaning? A commendable, if ultimately futile, endeavor. But I digress. What, pray tell, is the source of this… creative paralysis?"

Elias hesitated. He rarely talked about his struggles, especially not to a being whose existence defied all logical explanation. "I don't know," he confessed. "It's like… like I've said everything I wanted to say. The story feels… stagnant. Marvin's arc is… predictable. Lilia's… I just don't know what to do with Lilia."

He'd poured a lot of himself into Lilia, the strong-willed, independent female lead who defied the typical fantasy damsel. But now she felt flat, lifeless. He didn't understand her motivations, her desires. He'd lost touch with the character he'd created.

Omnius remained silent for a moment, the digital hum of the game filling the void. Then, he spoke, his voice surprisingly gentle. "Perhaps… you are looking at it from the wrong perspective, mortal author. You are so focused on the grand narrative, the overarching plot, that you are neglecting the individual notes that make up the symphony. You are trying to control the characters, to dictate their destinies, instead of letting them… breathe."

Elias frowned. "Breathe? They're fictional characters, Omnius. They don't breathe."

"Metaphorically speaking, of course," Omnius replied dryly. "Consider Lilia. You created her with strength, with independence. But what are her vulnerabilities? What are her fears? What are the desires she keeps hidden, even from herself? Until you understand those things, she will remain a puppet, dancing to the strings of your predetermined plot."

Elias stared at the screen, his mind racing. Omnius's words resonated with a strange truth. He realized he had been so caught up in the external conflicts of the story, the epic battles and political intrigue, that he had forgotten the internal struggles of his characters.

"And Marvin?" he asked, his voice barely a whisper. "What about him?"

"Marvin is burdened by the weight of his destiny," Omnius said. "He believes he must be a hero, that he must sacrifice everything for the greater good. But what if he doesn't want to be a hero? What if he yearns for a simple life, for peace, for love? What if his true strength lies not in wielding a sword, but in making a difficult choice, a choice that defies expectations, a choice that… disappoints the masses?"

Elias felt a jolt of inspiration surge through him. He had been so focused on fulfilling the hero's journey archetype that he had forgotten to explore the human cost of that journey.

"So… you're saying I need to… let go?" he asked, his fingers twitching with the urge to write.

"Precisely," Omnius replied. "Allow your characters to surprise you. Allow them to make mistakes. Allow them to be… human. Only then will your story truly come alive."

The digital zombies began to respawn, their moans echoing through the virtual landscape. But Elias barely noticed. He was already lost in thought, envisioning Lilia's hidden vulnerabilities, Marvin's secret desires. The words were beginning to flow, the story was beginning to unfold.

"Thanks, Omnius," he said, his voice filled with newfound energy. "I think... I think I know what to do."

Omnius chuckled, a sound filled with something that sounded almost like pride. "Then I shall leave you to your work, mortal author. May your words be as captivating as they are long overdue. And perhaps… after you've completed the chapter, we can attempt a more challenging game. I hear there's a rather intriguing simulation of galactic conquest that requires a certain… omniscient touch."

And with that, Omnius vanished, leaving Elias alone in the digital wasteland, surrounded by a horde of respawning zombies. But this time, Elias didn't feel frustrated or overwhelmed. He felt invigorated, inspired. He knew he had a story to tell, a story that was waiting to be written. And he couldn't wait to get started. The zombies would have to wait. The world was waiting for Marvin and Lilia. His fingers flew across the keyboard, the words pouring out of him, a torrent of creativity unleashed by the unlikely wisdom of an all-powerful being and a lazy afternoon playing video games.

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