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Chapter 17 - Chapter 17: The Editor’s War

There was no dawn.

Only a blank sky—gray, without light, soundless and suffocating. A canvas yet to be painted. Not because the sun had failed to rise, but because it had been deleted.

Somewhere far from Konoha, beyond even the realms touched by the Shinobi Wars, a vast, floating monolith hovered. White as paper. Silent as a grave. It pulsed with a rhythm not of chakra, but of syntax. Code structured like scripture—lines floating midair, rewriting themselves over and over in real time.

And inside, sat the Editors.

Seven figures in cloaks made of typographic errors. They had no faces, only flickering placeholders: {NARRATOR_01}, {CANON_GUARD}, {REDACTED}, {ARC_HANDLER}...

One of them slammed a quill down.

"The Subject has reclaimed Narrative Control."

Another shifted. "Impossible. We locked the Origin Room. The Observer confirmed Naruto's memories were sealed."

"Someone helped him. There was interference from inside the recursive frame."

A third Editor gestured, and a sphere of translucent world-data blinked into existence above them, glowing with shifting characters.

At its center: [UZUMAKI NARUTO - STATUS: EDITOR IN ASCENT]

That shouldn't have been possible.

He was meant to be a pawn. A tragic hero. A fixable variable.

Now he was something outside the structure.

"He's activating versions," muttered the Editor tagged {CANON_GUARD}, observing the multiverse threads. "Ones we buried long ago. Arcs we never released."

"Unauthorized branches," another hissed. "He's infecting the Prime Draft."

The first Editor stood. "Initiate CODE: OBLIVION. Deploy Beta Readers."

A ripple went through the monolith.

Below it, across fractured timelines and corrupted storylines, shadowy figures emerged—Beta Readers: failed protagonists, alternate villains, corrupted Hokages. Ghosts of abandoned plotlines given new life, made only to destroy.

Their directive was simple:

Eliminate the Glitch. Reclaim the Script.

Back beneath Konoha, the room trembled.

Naruto's fingers twitched, still gripping the chakra-quill. His breathing was heavy. Sweat poured down his brow as he continued to write—not with words, but resistance. Every stroke of the quill bent reality. Altered law.

Kai knelt behind him, her eyes blazing. "They're coming. Beta Readers. Dozens."

Sakura stood before the sealed entrance, her blade drawn. "Then we hold them."

Kai summoned a handful of scrolls. "I'll rewrite the boundary. Temporarily."

Naruto's eyes narrowed. "Let them come."

One by one, reality began to corrode—shimmering errors tearing open in the stone around them. And from the void, they emerged.

The first was a Sasuke—Version 8.13. One who had never returned to the village. No redemption. No bonds. Just rage and eyes full of deletion-code.

The second was a Kushina—glitched and hollow-eyed, mother rewritten to become a jailer, not a savior.

The third was a merged Obito-Madara from an abandoned war arc, where they'd successfully fused into a god-tier entity known as Obidara.

Kai stared at them. "That's not fair."

Sakura readied her stance. "Fair died a long time ago."

They launched.

Sakura clashed with the rogue Sasuke, blades meeting with a sound that defied physics—code clashing with purpose. Every strike between them caused pieces of the floor to flicker between arcs: Hokage office, Valley of the End, Ichiraku Ramen.

Kushina lunged toward Naruto, glitching mid-stride, screaming corrupted lullabies that echoed with subtext and loss.

Kai intercepted her mid-air, unleashing seals rewritten on the fly. "You're not his mother. Just a corrupted memory!"

Obidara floated above them all, weaving a rinnegan-based Genjutsu across the entire room—one designed to trap Naruto back into canon.

But Naruto was done being trapped.

He stood.

Golden chakra burst from his form—but not Nine-Tails chakra. It was different. Editor's chakra.

He wasn't drawing from Kurama.

He was drawing from potential.

And with a sweep of his hand, he rewrote the Genjutsu into a null-field—severing Obidara's control, line by line.

"You had your turn," he said, eyes burning with determination. "Now I write back."

He rushed forward—no jutsu, no clone.

Just raw narrative force in motion.

He drove his fist into Obidara's chest—not to destroy, but to rewrite.

Lines of code burst from his knuckles, spiraling into Obidara's form, reverting him not into a villain, but into what he could've been.

Obito, eyes filled with hope. Madara, at peace with Hashirama.

They crumbled into stardust.

The room shook again.

Kai and Sakura forced the remaining Beta Readers into containment seals. The rest fled, vanishing into broken storylines.

Silence returned.

Naruto dropped to his knees, panting.

"That was only the first wave," Kai whispered.

Sakura leaned against her blade. "They'll send stronger ones next."

Naruto looked down at the quill.

The words he'd written pulsed.

[Arc 1: Reclaimed. Narrative Resistance: Rising.]

He stood.

"We're not running."

Kai smiled faintly. "We never were."

Sakura wiped the blood from her cheek. "So what now?"

Naruto's voice was calm.

"We find the final Editor."

And then he added the words that would change everything:

[Request Override: Author Access.]

The sky above cracked.

The war had begun.

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