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Chapter 20 - chapter Seventeen

ONCE UPON THE PACIFIC

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Chapter Seventeen: Whispers Beneath the Wake

The wind had changed again.

It wasn't the sharp, wild kind that howled like a warning. No—this one was strange. Gentle. Circular. As if the air had turned in on itself. As if something unseen was watching, waiting, breathing.

Milo stood at the helm of the Eliora, hands resting lightly on the worn wheel, eyes fixed on the horizon—but there was no horizon anymore. Just an endless ripple of gray-blue, where the sea seemed to melt into the sky. Even the stars had taken on unfamiliar shapes, constellations he couldn't name. The compass spun aimlessly.

He was far from Echo Island now. Far from the maps and the rules of the world he once knew.

And still—Eliora's voice echoed.

"The ocean holds a secret, Milo. It always did."

Her words looped through him like a haunting lullaby. She had said them once, long ago, when they were young and wild and kissed by salt and laughter. But now those words felt like prophecy. Like the final thread of fate pulling him forward.

He reached into his coat and unfolded the map. The parchment shimmered again—still alive. Still guiding. The word etched beneath the coordinates still glowed faintly.

"Trust."

Suddenly, a soft thud echoed from below deck.

Milo tensed.

Another thud—followed by a low creak.

The ship was empty. Had been for days.

He descended the narrow stairs, every step echoing against the wooden frame. Lantern in hand, he moved toward the storage hull—but it wasn't the barrels or crates that drew his eye.

It was the mirror.

The small, tarnished mirror that once hung in the captain's quarters.

It wasn't there before.

And in it—he saw her.

Not Eliora.

Himself.

But not him, either.

A younger version. A boy standing at the docks, watching the Eliora sail for the first time. Alone. Lost. Before he met her. Before everything.

The mirror shimmered—and the image changed again.

Now he saw the storm. The Forgotten Tides. Himself, clawing the ropes, screaming her name as the waves devoured their world.

Then… the burial. The lilies. Her locket in his hand.

The mirror flickered once more.

And this time—Eliora's face.

Her eyes filled with something between sorrow and serenity.

"You followed the tide," she said. "But the tide is not the end."

The mirror cracked.

And the light went out.

Milo stumbled back, heart pounding.

Above deck, the air had changed again—he rushed up to find the sea still, but the sky above had turned a dark, impossible hue. Deep violet. A blood moon rising. The same moon from the antique shop's wall—now real, now watching.

Then—fog.

Thick. White. Whispers curling through it like fingers.

He turned sharply—someone was there.

A silhouette. Not a ghost, not a vision.

A woman. Alive. Breathing. Cloaked in the fog.

Eliora?

No. Not quite.

She looked like her. Moved like her. But there was something off. Her eyes… they shimmered like the sea.

"You've crossed into the Echo," she said softly.

"The what?"

She tilted her head. "The place between what was and what might be. This is where the ocean remembers."

Behind her, shadowy shapes danced in the fog—memories? Spirits? Fragments of Milo's mind?

The woman stepped closer.

"You carry more than sorrow, sailor. You carry questions. Regret. Hope. And the sea… the sea answers only when it is ready."

A silence settled.

Then—the woman raised her hand.

The sea below split.

Not violently—but slowly. Reverently. Like curtains pulled apart by unseen hands.

And beneath the water—a glimpse of something ancient. A stone path. Ruins swallowed by time. Echo Island's true face.

"You wanted truth," the woman whispered. "Here it is."

Milo stepped to the edge of the deck, trembling.

Behind him, the map flared to life—revealing the last line.

"Only those who remember can cross."

He took a breath.

One step.

Then another.

And as his foot touched the water—it held him.

Not sinking. Not swimming.

Standing.

And so—he walked forward.

Toward the truth.

Toward what waited.

Toward the heart of the mystery the ocean had hidden all along.

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