So, here's the thing guys: I love this story, and I have written a few chapters of it, but there were issues with the person I was collaborating with(basically been using someone's Patreon to post; we split the money. Patreon got a beef with me, can't create an account, and that person... let's say that Patreon is gonna be shut down soon enough, just waiting to complete the Marvel Shadow Monarch and then I am shifting to the other account.)
The Story will be republished on my other account. But while preparing the story for the other account, I noticed that there were quite a few things that I could have done differently.
E.g., the time MC was trying to get the codex. Could have expanded on those scenes, yk, glazing his army and Zod while showing the way Kryptonians fought without their powers, their tech and stuff.
And about Earth, I did create a bit of mess that I was planning to wrap up in the later chapters, but if I am going to do this, then I will make the world-building a bit better. Trust me, I have a pretty big outline prepared for this one; it ain't going down for a year or so.
Basically, in the new version, it'll have a much better world building than this one. I have restricted myself with this one by the info I have given till now.
So here's what I need your help with: I want you to tell me some of the problems you have felt with the story.
And any suggestions you might have for me are welcome too.
And another thing, I am also thinking of adding smut and harem to the plot. The vibe of the story will remain like this; just harem and smut will be added.
Harem makes sense for this story cause honestly, it's an empire-building novel, and we need to have alliances and stuff ya know?
Also, on the new account, I won't use patreon, but rather Ko-Fi, subscribestar and 2 other things, hope that works too.
Drop your suggestions please.