Greetings to all!
I'm sure this chapter is not a big surprise to people who have been following it for a while and have noticed how long it's been between releases.
The force that once pulled me to make this book is simply no longer there.
If I may give a word of advice to other writers,
Have a moral to your story, not just because it's nice, but because it gives you of an idea of what to write when you don't know what to write, and have an ending in mind.
Don't forget to give your character a flaw, while it's easy to write a story that 100% follows the plot about Mr. McGee, the guy who everyone loves and had no flaws, it's harder to write a story about that character.
After all, without flaws, where's the drama? The stakes?
It wouldn't be doomed yaoi without the doom.
(FYI this book had no doomed yaoi, it's just an example)
Some may wonder, where is Domnus now?
Well I'll tell you a little secret now that we're done here.
He travels between worlds, selling a buying some wears.
Everything that he has gotten is from a world he's been to, about four in total (I wonder where the number four has popped up before?)
What worlds has he been to? Now I can't be telling you everything can I?
So if you want more of Domnus, think of it your self, imagine him in a world you like, or of your making.
After all, a character is how you view it.
Signing off,
MagnetMan