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Chapter 17 - Episode 17

A deep rumble echoed through the battlefield.

The legendary Shenron's eyes burned red, signaling the completion of the first wish.

The power granted to Frieza was undeniable.

But amidst the moment of triumph—

Something unexpected happened.

Something no one foresaw.

Raziel's Uncontrollable Reaction

Raziel's body tensed violently.

His hands twitched uncontrollably, opening and closing as if reacting to an unseen force.

His head leaned forward, chin nearly pressing against his chest.

Yet—his eyes remained clenched shut, as if fighting against an unbearable pressure.

Then—

His hands shot to his head.

His fingers dug into his scalp, gripping tightly.

A tremor ran through his body.

And then—

His voice, strained, filled with something beyond pain.

Raziel Speaks Through the Pain

Raziel:"I can feel… my chest burning…"

His breath hitched, shallow, uneven.

"My flame… it became… endlessly worse."

He gritted his teeth, shaking violently.

"And now… it's in my head…!"

Then—

RIP.

A sudden tearing sound.

From beneath his Frieza Force uniform, something broke free.

Raziel's Saiyan Tail Emerges

A long, dark-furred Saiyan tail violently burst from the confines of his clothing.

It twitched erratically, as if adjusting to its new existence.

Raziel gasped sharply, the sensation unfamiliar, unnatural.

Yet—

Before he could even process what was happening…

Shenron's eyes glowed once more.

The Second Wish is Granted

The divine dragon's voice echoed through the sky.

"Your second wish has been granted."

The moment those words left Shenron's mouth—

Raziel's head jerked forward once again.

This time—his arms crossed tightly over his chest, gripping at his own body.

A new wave of power surged within him.

An eruption waiting to happen.

Raziel's Ki Awakens – The Transformation Begins

Then—

He let go.

In an instant, a deep crimson aura exploded outward from his body.

It started as a soft glow, flickering like a dying flame.

But then—

It grew.

Bigger.

Brighter.

The heat increased exponentially.

The energy did not settle—it escalated.

A pressure unlike anything before filled the air.

And then—

BOOM.

A violent explosion of ki engulfed the battlefield.

The sheer force of the blast was unimaginable.

The Overwhelming Shockwave

The shockwave rushed outward, overpowering everything in its wake.

Goku—forced back mid-air, gritting his teeth.

Vegeta—bracing against the energy, barely standing his ground.

Frieza's entire army—sent flying like mere insects.

Even Frieza himself, in his Golden Form, tensed at the raw pressure.

And most shockingly—

Even Whis, the Angel himself, reacted.

His normally calm expression faltered, his eyes sharpening in intrigue.

Whatever had just been unleashed…

Was beyond anything they had anticipated.

The Sky Turns Crimson – A Shift in Reality

Then—

The world changed.

The sky itself was now tinted in an eerie red hue.

Everything—the air, the ground, their vision—was coated in a deep crimson tone.

It was as if the laws of reality had been rewritten.

And standing in the center of it all—

Was Raziel.

Transformed.

Raziel's New Form – The Birth of Red Carnage

His entire body was engulfed in a crimson ki, unlike anything seen before.

Yet—this was not just an aura.

It was alive.

The energy itself twisted, flickered like liquid flame, constantly shifting in an unstable yet terrifyingly controlled form.

Purple outlines and streaks of lightning crackled around him, mixing into the deep red energy.

His red-lined eyes had changed.

Now—

They glowed a deeper, more piercing shade of crimson.

His expression?

Emotionless.

Unmoving.

As if a new presence had awakened within him.

The True Nature of This Transformation

This was not a mere power-up.

This was not just ki.

This was the fusion of magic and raw battle instinct.

A transformation that had never existed before.

It was unfiltered chaos.

Unpredictable.

Unstable.

Yet absolutely deadly.

It was not fueled by Saiyan rage.

Nor was it driven by pure magic.

This power—

Was something entirely new.

A form that existed outside the boundaries of both ki and magic.

It was fueled and driven by Determination.

The Battlefield Stands in Shock

No one spoke.

No one moved.

Even Frieza, in his Golden form, narrowed his eyes.

Goku and Vegeta—tense, uncertain.

Whis—silent, observing.

The air itself felt wrong.

Something had changed.

And at the center of it all—

Raziel, standing still.

Unmoving.

Yet radiating an unmatched presence.

A storm of raw, unstable energy filled the air.

Raziel stood at the center of it all, his entire body trembling, his breath heavy and uneven.

His hands clenched and unclenched repeatedly, his muscles twitching violently.

It was clear—

He was barely holding himself together.

His red and purple aura flickered wildly, its unstable flames licking at the air around him.

Then—

His eyes locked onto Vegeta.

And something… changed.

Raziel's Face Glitches – A Sinister Transformation

In an instant, Raziel's expression flickered.

For a brief moment—his face distorted.

His features darkened, shadowed, consumed by a twisted, sinister form.

His eyes—two vertical red slits.

His mouth—a single red line, stretching unnaturally.

Then—

That red line split open, wide, unnatural—melting, shifting, forming a grotesque, twisted grin.

And from the depths of that twisted face—

A deep, demonic, sinister laugh echoed through the battlefield.

It was a sound that sent shivers down the spine of every warrior present.

A sound that felt inhuman.

Then—

Everything flickered black.

And in an instant—

Raziel was right in front of Vegeta.

The First Attack – The Battle Truly Begins

Before Vegeta could react—

BOOM.

A powerful punch to the gut.

Vegeta's body bent forward, his breath stolen from his lungs.

The sheer impact launched him backward, sending him flying through the air.

But Raziel wasn't done.

His body surged with red energy, and in a burst of insane speed—

He blasted forward, charging his ki.

This wasn't magic.

This wasn't calculated combat.

This was something entirely different.

A Battle of Pure Power – No Techniques Needed

Raziel didn't know any ki techniques.

But he didn't need any.

The flame inside him—his determination, his instinct, his very existence—was all he needed.

Vegeta, gritting his teeth, launched multiple ki blasts toward Raziel.

But—

Every single one was deflected.

His blasts meant nothing.

The battle became purely physical—fist against fist.

Vegeta's punches connected—

But Raziel barely reacted.

And when Raziel attacked—

Vegeta felt everything.

Raziel was stronger.

Raziel was faster.

For all of Vegeta's training, his evolution, his mastery of destruction—

He was being overpowered.

Raziel Loses Control – Instinct Overtakes Him

But then—

Something shifted.

Raziel's attacks became wild.

Uncontrolled.

Unpredictable.

His punches came endlessly, without pause, without strategy.

He was attacking on pure instinct, pure emotion, pure flame.

And that—

Made him even more dangerous.

Vegeta could no longer keep up.

One final strike.

A powerful kick to the ground.

Vegeta's body slammed into the earth with crushing force.

And when the dust settled—

His Super Saiyan Blue Evolution faded.

Vegeta was back to base form.

He was done.

Frieza vs. Goku – Interrupted by Raziel

Frieza, still engaged in battle with Goku, barely had time to process Vegeta's defeat before—

A red ki blast surged through the air.

It struck Goku directly, sending him crashing to the ground, his Super Saiyan Blue fading instantly.

Frieza's eyes narrowed.

Then—he looked up.

And there, descending from the sky—

Was Raziel.

Still transformed.

Still uncontrollable.

Still unstoppable.

His power was beyond madness.

He was like a Legendary Super Saiyan—

But worse.

Frieza's Final Wish – Raziel's Salvation

Frieza gritted his teeth.

For all his amusement, for all his calculations—this was getting out of hand.

Even he could see it now.

Raziel's power was endless.

But without control—he was a disaster waiting to happen.

Frieza glanced toward Shenron.

His golden eyes gleamed.

He had already considered this possibility.

And so—he made his final wish.

Shenron's Power – Raziel Regains Control

"Shenron, I wish for Raziel to have the ability to calm himself, to never let his own flame consume him!"

The dragon's eyes flashed red one final time.

"Your wish has been granted."

Then—

A wave of divine energy washed over Raziel.

His body tensed violently.

His pupils returned.

His breathing slowed.

His aura began to shrink, fading from its overwhelming chaos.

And finally—

He relaxed.

He remained transformed.

But he was no longer lost to instinct.

His mind was his own again.

Shenron Departs – The Dragon Balls Scatter

Shenron's form began to glow.

His body unraveled into golden light, spiraling toward the heavens.

And then—

He vanished.

The Dragon Balls rose into the air, glowing one final time before scattering across the planet.

The summoning was over.

They would not be used again for a long time.

The Aftermath – A New Power Has Emerged

A deep silence filled the battlefield.

Vegeta was on the ground, barely conscious.

Goku was struggling to stand.

Frieza was watching with careful eyes, his mind calculating everything.

And Raziel—

He stood motionless, his new power still radiating from his body, but now…

Controlled.

His red-lined eyes scanned the battlefield.

He had felt everything.

The rage.

The power.

The flame.

And now—he understood it.

For the first time, he had tasted what true power felt like.

And it felt—

Perfect.

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