Hello my dear reader.
So I have been dedicated to this story for quite some time, wanting to make it good enough that I could get it published and sold in actual book stores.
I had planned... am still planning on creating this whole universe of stories that would get people dragged into the stories. For example let me give you a sneak peak.
King of the Gods would follow a 5 book series
King of the Gods the Titanomachy
King of the Gods the Father of Monsters
King of the Gods the Rise of the King
King of the Gods the War of Mythos
King of the Gods the Great Devourer
Age of Heroes (stories focused on different historical heroes throughout the world)
-> Greek Age
Age of Heroes: Hercules
Age of Heroes: Perseus
Age of Heroes: Odysseus
Age of Heroes: Atalanta
-> Eastern Age
Age of Heroes: Hua Mulan
Age of Heroes: Sun Wukong
Age of Heroes: (undecided)
-> Norse Age
Age of Heroes: Sigurd the Dragonslayer
Age of Heroes: (undecided)
-> African Age
Age of Heroes: Anansi
-> Middle Eastern Age
Age of Heroes: (undecided)
Age of Heroes: (undecided)
->Celtic Age
Age of Heroes: (undecided)
Age of Heroes: (undecided)
->Arthurian Age
Age of Heroes: King Arthur
Now returning to the main story line I planned a following series of how the world would turn out after the events of the war with the Great Devourer. This would be a series followed about several centuries after the final book in King of the Gods and about several decades after the story of Age of Heroes: King Arthur.
This is a story that takes place in a modernistic/future setting where many references would be made from my other books where the very antagonist of the story would aim to plunge the world in destruction and transform humans into blood devouring monsters. This being who was once a mortal scientist would become a false god and it would be the task of the mc who is the descendant of the Pendragon line, a mere branch family to stop him while being titled a traitor by the family he didn't even know he had, to deal with the constant nagging of the God of Destruction and Goddess of Creation.
Anyways, what I wanted to ask is if the story I am writing even that good? If I should go and fix anything that ruins the story? I am already half-way done with the second book and tbh I was worried as I hadn't gotten much interaction with my book
So please, notify me if there is anything at all that has been bugging you.
What had I done that had completely ruined the story for everyone?
Anyways, thanks for your time. I will try rereading the story now that I had taken a break from it and had focused on work. So my mind should be clear and I should be able to see whatever mess I made.