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Important Notice Before You Start Reading

In the beginning, the quality of the writing isn't the best—I fully acknowledge that. The first chapters were written during a stage where I was still learning, experimenting with styles, and getting used to telling such a long story. That's why I ask for your patience. Yes, the writing at the start is quite weak, but I'm carefully revising everything, rewriting sections to correct mistakes, improve dialogues, and make the plot more cohesive.

This fanfic is based on a Chinese version. I want to make this very clear: it is not a copy. At the start, the two stories may seem quite similar since they share the same premise, but as the narrative progresses, the differences become obvious. I actually translated the Chinese version for a while, and I still have that material available on my profile for anyone curious enough to compare.

What you'll read here is my interpretation, my way of developing the characters and the universe. I use the original concept as a foundation, but I follow my own path. Over time, I've learned to give more depth to the scenes, to work better on character development, and to create more engaging situations.

To give you a clearer idea: my writing only started improving noticeably around the end of the Spider-Verse arc. From that point on, I began recognizing many of the mistakes I had been making and started putting real effort into making each chapter more consistent, more detailed, and above all, more enjoyable for the reader.

So, my request is simple: don't judge this fanfic by the first few chapters alone. Give the story a chance to evolve naturally. If possible, read at least 10 to 20 chapters before leaving an evaluation or review. Of course, I know those early chapters still need corrections and improvements—and I'm working on that—but I promise that the further you go, the more you'll notice the difference in pacing, quality, and depth.

This journey has grown alongside me as a writer. If you have the patience to push through the beginning, I'm confident the experience will become far more rewarding in the later chapters.

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