Okay so I see from you all that you want me to rewrite this series, but my brother suggested I delete the entire one piece training arc chapters and choose a new world to do the training arc instead.
So I can still keep the original plot while getting rid of the thing that's destroying the story, and honestly I agree with my brother.
I will still keep Kiyohime(maybe as a shop purchase), but I will ask you this, what world would be best world for training(he can only enter worlds where the viewers are from, like that time I reincarnated as a slimesince rimeru is a viewer)
(Comment which world Yuuji should train in here)
(Optional)(comment which character should be added as a viewer)
And finally which (adult)Taimanin agent should live with Yuuji?
I will take a look next week on your comments and go from there, but I hope you all give me your thoughts.