He closed the script and said to me, "The writing still needs improvement, and the structure requires refinement."
I did not easily get discouraged because he didn't throw the script away. I discussed with the green-haired girl, sought opinions from the chubby guy and the cook, and submitted the revised version to the painter and the accountant for review. After five more revisions, I confidently handed over the script and received a smile from the troupe leader.
"Have you rehearsed?"
"Life doesn't need rehearsal."
He smiled expectantly and announced, "Then let's begin!"
