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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1: Xiao Xuan

One star Dou Disciple.

One star Dou Disciple it really is one star Dou disciple i can't believe it.

Hasn't young master Xiao Yan only start cultivating for a month. he really is the future of the xiao clan.

hahaha i always knew that young master Xiao Yan was gifted. with his talent he will definitely become the next clan head. 

Hearing the praise around him Xiao Yan couldn't help but raise his head higher. even if he was basically a adult who wouldn't like to be praised.

 Standing far from the commotion their was standing a young boy around 4 years old (same age as Xiao Yan) and his name was Xiao Xuan (same name as the ancestor of the Xiao Clan). 

Xiao Xuan just stood there indefinitely lost in thought. Xiao Yan the higher you fly right now the harder you'll fall in the future.

Even if you do get up and fly even harder but I'll make sure that never happens, after all it's either you or me and I'll make sure it's only me that will become a Dou Di. 

But since i'm a nice guy and i don't hate you I'll let you have Gu Xuner. 

After thinking that Xiao Xuan walked back to his run down shack in the back mountain that he built himself.

He didn't want to live in a place like this but he had no choice. he lived in a courtyard with multiple orphan kids and he didn't want to deal with them so he just left and built himself a shack in the back mountain. 

Xiao Xuan sat down in the middle of his shack and started cultivating. 

5 hours later. 

Finally after 3 months i become a 3 star Dou Disciple, Xiao Xuan said out loud.

Sigh if only i didn't have to worry about my small body i could have easily broke through to Dou Practitioner by now, well it's better to be safe then sorry, i don't know what will happen if i cultivate to fast or damage my Meridians Xiao Xuan thought.

Well enough of cultivating for today but i wonder what this ring is. Xiao Xuan grabbed the ring hanging around his neck hiding behind his clothes.

AN: I'm back guys i know i said i will release a new chapter but i got busy with school and i got lazy so i gave up. But after reading enough BTTH fan fics im back and i changed the story and made it better.

Please don't mind the writing it's only my second time writing a chapter and tell me what i should improve. Tell me if you guys want me to continue this fan fic. 

But remember updates will be slow since this is a original idea and i will need time to think plus i have school so i might update once every 3 days im not sure.

But if you guys really like it i will try to write more and improve so tell me what i should do better and tell me what i did wrong so i can make it better later.

Bye love you guys. 

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