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Chapter 11 - Episode 9 The struggle to stay in the Phoenix realm

Feng Muyu stepped forward, carrying Shaoyang in his arms, her presence still faintly glowing with phoenix fire. As he turned to leave the hall, a figure quietly followed behind him.

Elder Shen's voice rang out, firm and commanding.

Elder Shen: Wait, Muyu… who is this young lad?

Feng Muyu paused, glancing back as if he had almost forgotten.

Feng Muyu: Ah… I nearly forgot to introduce him. This is Qianfan.

Elder Shen narrowed his eyes, studying the boy carefully.

Elder Shen: And where is he from? His aura… it does not belong to the Phoenix Realm.

A brief silence settled over the hall.

Feng Muyu: He isn't from here. He was brought back alongside Shaoyang from Mount Kunlun yesterday.

At the mention of Mount Kunlun, murmurs rippled among the elders.

Elder Liang's sharp gaze shifted directly to Qianfan.

Elder Liang: What is your name?

Qianfan straightened slightly, though uncertainty flickered in his eyes.

Qianfan: My name is… Qianfan.

Elder Liang: And which realm do you come from?

Qianfan froze.

His lips parted, but no words came out.

Qianfan: I… I'm from… which realm…?

Suddenly, his expression twisted in pain.

A sharp gasp escaped his lips as he clutched his head with both hands.

Qianfan: (voice trembling) It… hurts!

His body staggered, as if the very attempt to remember was tearing him apart.

Feng Muyu rushed to his side.

Feng Muyu: Don't force it! If you can't remember, then don't push yourself—it's alright.

Elder Shen frowned deeply.

Elder Shen: What is wrong with him?

Feng Muyu: He seems to have lost his memory. When we found him, he couldn't recall anything… not even his parents.

The hall fell into a heavier silence.

Elder Liang's expression hardened.

Elder Liang: Then you already know… we do not accept strangers into this realm.

Before anyone else could respond, Elder Han spoke up, her tone calm but firm.

Elder Han: If he remembers nothing, then he has nowhere to go. Are we to abandon him?

Elder Shen shook his head.

Elder Shen: No. The rules have existed since the creation of this realm. They cannot be broken in our time.

Elder Liang: The laws set by our ancestors are absolute.

Elder Han's eyes softened, yet her voice carried quiet defiance.

Elder Han: And yet… rules were made by people.

At the center of it all, Qianfan stood trembling.

His eyes glistened with unshed tears, his body weak as though he might collapse at any moment.

Just then—

A voice echoed from the entrance.

Feng Hua: I will keep him.

All heads turned.

Feng Hua stepped into the hall, her gaze fixed on Qianfan.

Elder Shen's brows furrowed.

Elder Shen: Do you understand what you are saying?

Feng Hua: I do.

Elder Liang's tone grew stern.

Elder Liang: This rule has stood for generations. If anything happens… can you bear the consequences?

Feng Hua glanced at Feng Muyu.

For a brief moment, silence passed between them—but in that silence, an understanding was reached.

She turned back, resolute.

Feng Hua: I will bear it.

Feng Muyu stepped forward and knelt beside her.

Feng Muyu: Then I will bear it with her.

Elder Han nodded.

Elder Han: I will assist them. I will keep watch over him… in case he is not what he seems.

The elders exchanged glances.

Finally—

Elder Shen exhaled slowly.

Elder Shen & Elder Liang (together): Very well. But if anything happens… you will be held responsible.

Feng Muyu and Feng Hua bowed their heads.

Feng Muyu & Feng Hua: We understand.

The tension in the hall eased slightly.

At that moment, Qianfan—already on the verge of breaking—fell to his knees.

Tears streamed down his face as his voice trembled with raw gratitude.

Qianfan: Thank you… for taking me in.

No one noticed—

For just a fleeting second—

A strange, unfamiliar flicker passed through his eyes.

As though something deep within him… had stirred.

The Phoenix Realm was unlike anything Qianfan had ever seen—

and yet… something about it felt strangely familiar.

Golden trees stretched toward the sky, their leaves flickering like living embers. Streams of light flowed through the air like gentle rivers, carrying warmth instead of water. In the distance, phoenix cries echoed—majestic, powerful, and ancient.

Qianfan stood quietly at the courtyard's edge, his eyes taking everything in.

Qianfan (softly): This place…

Feng Hua watched him from behind, her gaze thoughtful.

Feng Hua: Beautiful, isn't it?

Qianfan nodded, though uncertainty lingered in his expression.

Qianfan: It feels… warm. But also… unfamiliar.

Feng Hua stepped closer.

Feng Hua: That's because you don't belong here.

Her words were direct—but not unkind.

Qianfan lowered his gaze slightly.

Before the moment could grow heavy, a cheerful voice cut through the air.

Shaoyang: Qianfan!

He looked up just in time to see Shaoyang running toward him, her energy far more stable than before.

She stopped right in front of him, hands on her hips, smiling brightly.

Shaoyang: So you're officially staying now!

Qianfan hesitated, then gave a small nod.

Qianfan: …Yes. Thanks to your parents.

Shaoyang grinned

Shaoyang: Then that makes you my responsibility too.

Feng Hua raised an eyebrow

Feng Hua: Your responsibility?

Shaoyang: Of course! He doesn't know anything. I'll show him around.

Without waiting for permission, she grabbed Qianfan's wrist and pulled him along.

Shaoyang: Come on!

They moved through the realm, Shaoyang eagerly pointing things out.

Shaoyang: That's the Flame Garden—don't touch anything there, it might actually burn you.

Shaoyang: And over there is the training ground. That's where everyone learns to control their fire.

Qianfan listened carefully, absorbing every detail.

But as they passed a group of young phoenix disciples, the atmosphere shifted.

Whispers followed them like shadows.

Disciple 1: That's him… the outsider.

Disciple 2: I heard he doesn't even have a phoenix aura.

Disciple 3: Why is he even here?

Qianfan's steps slowed.

The warmth of the realm suddenly felt… distant.

Shaoyang noticed immediately.

Her expression hardened.

She turned sharply, glaring at them.

Shaoyang: If you have something to say, say it properly. He's not a phoenix—so why would he have a phoenix aura?

The group fell silent, clearly intimidated.

One of them scoffed.

Disciple 1: We're just saying the truth.

Before things could escalate, Qianfan gently pulled Shaoyang back.

Qianfan: It's okay.

His voice was calm—but carried quiet weight.

Qianfan: They're not wrong.

Shaoyang frowned.

Shaoyang: I don't care if they're right or wrong.

She crossed her arms, standing firmly beside him.

Shaoyang: You're here now. That's enough.

For a moment, Qianfan said nothing.

Then… a faint smile appeared on his face.

Later that day, Shaoyang dragged him to the training grounds.

Flames danced across the arena as disciples practiced, waves of heat rising and falling like breathing fire.

Qianfan stood at the edge, watching intently.

Shaoyang: Try it.

He blinked.

Qianfan: Try… what?

Shaoyang: Using your power.

Qianfan looked down at his hands.

Qianfan: I don't think it will come out.

Shaoyang tilted her head.

Shaoyang: Everyone has something.

She stepped closer, her voice softer now.

Shaoyang: Just focus.

Qianfan hesitated… then slowly raised his hand.

His fingers trembled slightly.

(I don't want to disappoint her…)

He closed his eyes.

The world around him faded into silence.

For a moment—

Nothing.

Then—

A flicker.

Not flame.

Not light.

Something… white and golden.

A strange energy pulsed faintly around his hand—pure, unfamiliar… and fleeting.

Then it vanished.

Qianfan's eyes snapped open.

Qianfan: Did you see that?

Shaoyang stared at him, her expression unreadable.

Shaoyang: …That wasn't an ordinary fire.

Suddenly—

A gust of wind tore through the training ground.

Flames around them flickered violently… then went out for a split second.

Silence fell.

The surrounding disciples froze.

From a distant pavilion, the elders watched.

Elder Han (low voice): That energy…

Elder Liang's gaze sharpened.

Elder Liang: Keep watching him.

Qianfan slowly lowered his hand, his heart pounding in his chest.

He didn't understand what he had just felt.

But deep inside—

Something had answered.

Something that did not belong to this realm.

Shaoyang looked at him again, this time more serious.

Not afraid.

But curious.

Shaoyang: Looks like… you're not as ordinary as you think.

Qianfan gave a weak, uncertain smile.

But within him—

That strange energy stirred again.

Quiet.

Waiting.

Watching.

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