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Chapter 9 - I return and better rework

Hello all!

I live!

I do greatly apologise, but a lot had happened and I almost went homeless because of a greedy customer refusing to not pay me for the Worl i had done. Fortunately I have been able sort it out.

As for my fic, I reviewed the contents of what I had planned and I dislike the start of this fic, and that I had made him quite strong and OP.

I did have a way to balence this very easily, but it would have felt forced and dumb.

So a rework of the start is better and I will make him not as strongly Force Sensitive as I had made him.

I do plan to have him be Force Sensitive, but I also want this to feel like a actual Star Wars type story. And when I had returned to WebNovel I had seen a rise in Star Wars fics so a full reboot was better to revive the reader interests.

The story will feature the mc being born as a Hybrid race and kicking it off straight into the Clone Wars with the Mc being created in a laboratory.

I had the idea similar to the fic that inspired me to write the now unfortunately dropped Rise of Mandalore fic due to drop in popularity and no support.

Seeing reader comments and receiving power stones serve as great motivational factors that what a writer writes is being valued and wanted by readers.

The mc being a hybrid race was inspired by a AI picture I had been able to craft for a Cultivation mc and is now my profile picture on other apps cause it's cool, so I was like fuc k it and I am using it here for this fic cause he looked cool. The mc is created by a Seperatist Scientist like Dr Nuvo Vindi, that crazy guy who created an Airborne Blue Shadow Virus in Naboo episode.

Mc image

The fic will be called the same as this one but with (Rework) added to the end of it. The first chapter will get posted in a few hours. See you there and may the Force be with you!

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