So hey I've been thinking about this and this has been on my mind but I'm planning to remake this story because honestly i feel like I'm not doing a good job narrative wise and i kinda made it too easy for max so I'm planning to remake this soon and probably go on a realistic way. So look forward to that at least and I know I basically went dark but I basically went on a remake streak so now I'm getting the urge to write again. so like I said look foward to the remake
