"The text is excessively long, can be called an epic work, the setting of the Saint Heir is too superficial, overall simple and to the point, the description is not detailed enough, viewing it the narrative scale is grand..."
"Setting aside the flaws, this Bible is full of advantages."
Wayne finished his commentary, believing the first draft of this Bible wasn't satisfactory, and requested Michael and Risa to rewrite it.
The key is character setting, the female roles that appear seriously don't match the prototypes, the formula is singular and stereotyped, deleting any of them doesn't affect the plot progression, and they're neither necessary nor have any highlights.
You're so good at nitpicking, you must be great at eating fish!
Michael felt disdain in his heart, if it weren't for the fact that the new Bible concerned the glory of the entire Kingdom of Heaven, and would be a guideline for the followers for a long time, he would have already thrown in the towel.
