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Chapter 31 - Apologies for the chapter

So, in the last chapter (the one corresponded to 30) felt weird. I didn't know why, when I found a video about hard and soft magic. Then it clicked, the "Uchiha legion" and all that were absolutely unnecesarry for the plot and are of no use (not yet). I have been using (and abusing) the soft magic trope (basically making a lot of stuff by spiritual power and singing). But I messed up, because at least in that chapter, it did not make sense, it felt cheap, and stupid. I could have gotten the same results using what I already had (using Sakumo or momo by giving them more interactions after his whole mini arc and explanations). So yeah. I am sorry for whoever that reads this, I'll rewrite the chapter (my choice for song still stands, but i'll try to use different choices the next time), fill in the blanks, and continue the story.

Just like when I first started, this is the first time I write ff (or anything in particular with such a lenght), I made a mistake and I hope to learn from it.

So yeah, hope that if you are reading this you can have a great day.

(Sends lots of love <3)

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