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Chapter 21 - return home and creating a new technique

We finally came upon those red gates that belonged to konoha after giving the guards our pass we made our mission report.

After which I went to see how my little brother was doing

Turns out mizuki sensei had tried to convince my brother to let him into our clan library but as I had taught Naruto nobody but our clan members were allowed into our clan library mizuki found that out the hard way as wehrn he tried to sneak into the clan library he was hit by a paralysis seal that prevented the theif from stealing anything whentsunade found him she took him to ibiki who interrogated him and found out he was a spy for Oorochimaru.

After which she had him executed for treason and attempt at stealing a clans techniques.

On the bright side Naruto and Hinata had officially started dating and Hinata had earned the right to be the hyuga heir as she had managed to create a few techniques including the Fūton: jiu-po ( wind release gentle step.) A technique that creates a void around the performer via applying wind pressure into one's foot, the eight trigram's six steps ( hakke-rokupo) a powerful combination where Hinata lands a heel palm to her users collarbone,a knife slash palm to the jugular, a back turn palm to the back of the neck, slap to the jaw, a cross oveer into an elbow spik to the chin then she channels chakra into her palms as she uses a double palm spike releasing a chakra pulse burst.

The final technique was her gentle fist water needle strike a defensive technique in which she creates invisible sensory needles and uses them to land intercepting palms and gentle fist strikes to incoming strikes Hinata's father admitted that Hinata was a genius in her own right dispite the seemingly lack of affection he loved his daughter and would do anything to protect her.

Naruto was top of his class being fallowed by Sasuke dispite the boys lack of humility he knew that Sasuke saw Naruto as a friendly rivals and he hated the fact he couldn't change things in the timeline other than dealing with the Akatsuki and pein he'd be damned sure to make Akihiko fall once he learned how to harness cursed energy reversal red and domain expansion and once he created his own original Jutsu which he was currently thinking of he thought since I have a natural affinity for water release and a sub affinity for wind and lightning release I should focus on creating a technique that can use each of them regardless the move as I thought about it I figured maybe I should focus on combining them with my denjin-senko bloodline I thought about it sure the hiraishin was useful in mass aptitude fights but for one via one a certain technique should be used I thought about it then remembered a move from a fighting game I had one played called King of fighters a character named kyo kusunagi had a move called 182: shiki where kyo gathers flames into his fist and delivers a powerful hook punch to the user with explosions.

" If I can apply wind and denjin-senko to that I can create my own special Jutsu." I thought to myself.

I Focused on using my bloodline and wind release gathering the chakra for wind release and then combining it with my bloodline the hard part was molding it into a gauntlet around my arm and then I thought up the name " Fūton: Fūjin-dusutā!" I shouted and teleported delivering a hook punch that sent the practice dummy I was using spiraling in a powerful gale.

" I did it but the downside is since it's still new it'll take some time to strengthen I should make a lightning and water variant." I bemused.

So I began to try it again this time I molded my chakra into lightning and delivered a spinning hook punch.

" Raitōn: raijin-hado-geki.". ( Lightning release: thunder God surge strike.)

" Now for a water variant." I said.

I molded my chakra into water around my hand this time I made my hand into a fist where the knuckles of my index and middle fingers were protruding the fingers were resting on my thumb.

" Sūiton: suiryuu-senken." I shouted and teleported as I delivered a knuckle swipe to the dummy this one cutting across the dummies neck before I turned around and the head slid off.

" Okay now to get a hang of molding my chakra faster." I said.

Kakashi had taught me some chakra control exercises first was the leaf dancing exercise then there was the water walking exercise and the trees walking exercise.

When I thought of how I should focus my chakra control I began by using the leaf dancing exercise since it took the most concentration.

This was difficult at first since most of the time I've been relying on the use of either my bloodlines or my summons and though I did have the kagé būnshin and the Rasengan those were mainly built of large chakra stores and though the Rasengan did require concentration of didn't require constant concentration like the leaf dancing exercise.

To make it even more diyi was doing it while standing on a pole on one foot.

So while I did this I was juggling the leaf and my weight

Eventually my controll doubled and I had learned to mold chakra easily so now I could use my three Jutsu in a matter of seconds.

Even without hand seals.

After which I noticed that Jin was training with kakashi again kakashi helped Jin develop his own personal Jutsu as well called the " Shinmei-ken." ( God shout fist.) This was a powerful lightning release that was similar to the raikage's lightning straight.

But the difference was that it used a knuckle punch To shatter the bones of an enemy.

( like the silver bullet from Cobra Kai.)

This was a deadly move and kakashi warned Jin to only use it in a real fight.

Naruto and Sasuke were sparring in the dojo at the academy.

Sasuke threw a body hook aimed at naruto's midsection but Naruto caught it pulled him into a joint lock and used a sweeping low kick to take out Sasuke's legs.

Sasuke getting angry used the shishi-rensen ( lions combination.) To attack Naruto although the blows hit him Naruto used his breathing to soften the blows then Naruto used a back spin kick straight to sasuke's nuts which caused him to cry out before Naruto used a leaping double front kick to knock Sasuke into the air before using a huge rising dragon Uppercut " shun-soaten-ryuuken!!" ( Instant blue sky dragon fist.) The move was a variant of the Soaten-ryuuken that Naruto invented during his altercation with an assassin when his brother wasn't home fortunately the boy was strong enough to take out the killer.

Naruto had softened the blow by making sure that Sasuke only got hit via opened handed fist then Naruto ended the blow with a powerful rolling roundhouse kick.

" Kamikaze-geri!!!" He shouted.

Sasuke lay on the ground he knew Naruto was stronger than him he admitted that but he wouldn't go down without a fight using what strength he had left he dashed Naruto and threw a straight at Naruto's face Naruto guarded but then he was hit in the temple with a smash punch.

Naruto fell to the ground bleeding from his temple.

The fight had to be stopped Sasuke had won finally but only by resorting to dirty tactics however for a Shinobi this was normally done.

After being treated for his injury Naruto met up with me and we began to talk.

" So he used the older silver fang combo on you." I said.

" Yeah." He said.

" You should know there is a secret way to defend against it." I said.

" Really." Asked Naruto.

" When he goes for the first punch you weave right then when he goes for the smash you duck down and come up with a flying smash." I said.

He thought about it and it did seem that the maneuver would work.

Naruto and I spent an hour helping him predict the combo evade and counter I taught him to watch the shoulders and predect where the punch would come from.

After which Naruto was prepared for a rematch against Sasuke

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