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Chapter 57 - REWRITE

Hey everyone, long time no see! 😊

I've been sitting with this story for a while now, and I've decided I want to give it a proper rewrite. There's a lot I still love about it, but there's also a lot I think I can do better the second time around, so I wanted to come to you all before I dive in.

A few things I'd love your help with:

What did you like? Was it the plot, a specific arc, certain characters, the dynamics, the pacing? I want to hold onto whatever worked and make sure it doesn't get lost in the rewrite.

What didn't work for you? Be honest! Pacing issues, plot holes, characters that fell flat, anything that pulled you out of the story- I genuinely want to know so I can fix it this time around.

Who do you want to see Orion end up with? This is the big one. I know some of you have been rooting for different pairings in the comments, and I want to make this decision with you rather than just picking on my own. Whoever comes up the most in the comments on this post will be the endgame love interest. Just to be clear, this will not be a harem. One pairing, chosen by you.

Drop your thoughts below; the more detail, the better. I'll be reading everything before I start writing, so nothing is too small to mention.

Thank you all for sticking around. I can't wait to bring this story back better than before. 💛

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