Like I said in the abstract, I hated how the story was flowing. I've been struggling with writers block due to the changing point of view theme and the overall story didn't have enough meat and potatoes in the middle. (Just Coffee at the start and cake at the end)
I will be rewriting the story in Alexandra's point of view and making chapters at least twice as long (By combining and rearranging). Please stay tuned for the updates.
Chapter 1 is completely edited.
Chapters 2 and 3 are up, but might be a bit clunky yet.
Chapters 4 and 5 have been written, and should be edited and uploaded soon.
Thank you,
A. J.