Hi everyone!! Author Here....
Like the title said, long time no see!! It's really long indeed. Like... months, right? Wkwkwkwkwk
First, I want to apologize to all of you for not updating the continuation of the story... I'm pretty much healthy, so don't worry. My PC work pretty well, so no excuse about that as well. The main reason for me to stop writing... well, I think it's about the language problem, motivation and laziness.
I'm not a native English speakers, so my English was really really poor and bad. I have a really hard time every time I write. Like Choose the correct words or use of the grammar etc. And for you, who read my story from the very start when I begin to write the story for the first time, will remember how horrible it was. I used Google Translate after all at that time...wkwkwk Though I try my best to edit them and make them readable.
But even so, sometime, the result was not satisfactory even for me after read it myself. Like something was missing in my writing and it feels different from what in my imagination.
All of it slowly frustrate me, until finally I lost my motivation to write. And because of my laziness, well, you know it yourself, I stop writing and continue the story...
Apart from the things above, the reason I stop writing was because somehow, I hate the Main Character as well. Strange isn't it?wkwkwk
Honestly from the start, I don't have a plan to make it a harem story. Suguha was the only one for MC. Why? Because I don't have a confidence to implement a harem route without make it a shallow romance story. Where the girls fall for the MC pretty easylly with something like -Blush no Jutsu- et cetera.
I build the story from monogamy, so when I implemented the harem route... Oh, boy... The plot that I already planned became a mess...
The plot can be fixed though, and I did. Create another plot and it would be fixed.
But the main problem was the MC. It's about his character and personality to be exact. Every time I re-read the story, only one word that always come to my head, Hypocrite.
Like, considering I build the story from a monogamy route -which make MC character and personality adjusted to that, make him faithful character and all-, it's pretty normal if the MC become somehow an asshole and hypocrite bastard because of the change of the route. But it's unbearable even for me.
I hate hypocrite MC in many works. I prefer the straightforward one. Admit straightforwardly, and said clearly if you want multiple lover without lame excuse and cheap reasoning. Said with determination and ask for the girl acceptance with natural words without make your words sounds like bullsh*t and cringe crap.
By the way, I also hate it when the woman or the MC himself said something like sisters bullsh*t. Like hell a woman want to share her man with another woman. _Well, just FYI_
It's not like I hate harem story though, I love them as well like another man of culture out there. But I hate it when it implemented poorly. Make the girl shallow, childish, stupid, retard and idiot.
That's also one of the reason I choose the monogamy route at the start. And when I change it into harem route, I try my best to make it natural and implement it to the story as best as I can. Make the girls accept but react with their natural personality and character that described from the original work. The result? Well, you guys could said it yourself, I am an amateur writer after all. :)
So that's it, my rambling about my own story...hahaha
I don't know if I will continue the story... I don't know if I will create a new story... Like I said earlier about language, my poor English make me had a very few choice with vocabularies. Not to mention the grammar aspect as well.
So... Until next time everyone... I hope all of you always safe and healthy...
Bye bye...