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Chapter 11 - "wait... he's five?"

The final note hung in the air like a ghost that didn't want to leave.

For a second, maybe two, the entire theater froze. I was just standing there on stage, microphone lowered, breathing evenly while hundreds of strangers stared at me as if they couldn't quite believe what had just happened.

And then, as if someone had hit the "unmute" button on the world, the room exploded.

People shot to their feet. Hands smacked together. Whistles pierced the air. I saw tears — actual tears — running down the cheeks of a woman in the front row. A man next to her had his phone up, clearly breaking the "no recording" rule, trying to capture the moment. The energy rolled across the theater like a wave crashing against the shore, loud and unstoppable.

I stood calmly in the middle of it all, not bowing, not waving, just… still.

The judges weren't as quick to move. They sat frozen for longer than the audience, their faces all doing different versions of the same thing: disbelief.

David Hasselhoff leaned forward first, elbows on the desk, squinting at me as though I might vanish if he blinked. "Okay," he said, raising a hand to quiet the audience. "Okay, hold on. I need to check something before we go any further. Adam… how old are you?"

"Five."

The laughter that rippled through the audience was different this time — lighter, amazed, almost disbelieving. Someone actually shouted, "NO WAY!" from the balcony.

Brandy nearly dropped her pen. "Wait, wait, wait. Five?" She turned her entire body to look at the audience, then back at me. "You're five years old and you just sang Je Suis Malade like—like…" She waved her arms helplessly. "Like that?"

The crowd clapped and cheered again, agreeing with her.

I nodded once. "Yes."

"See, that's the thing," Hasselhoff said, pointing at me with both hands. "Most five-year-olds are still figuring out how to color inside the lines, and you just… I mean, you just brought half the room to tears. What do you even eat for breakfast?"

I answered simply: "Cereal."

The audience erupted again, laughing so hard I heard stomping in the back rows. Even the camera crew couldn't hold steady; one cameraman shook with laughter, the lens bobbing up and down.

Brandy leaned forward, pressing her chin into her hands. Her eyes glistened like she might cry a second time. "Adam, sweetheart, do you even know what that song is about? It's about heartbreak, loneliness, pain… deep adult emotions."

I gave her a small shrug. "I just sing."

That simple answer nearly finished them off. The crowd melted, half of them laughing, the other half "aww"-ing so loudly it drowned the echoes of my own voice.

Piers Morgan, who had been unusually quiet, finally spoke. His voice was low, deliberate, and serious. "I've judged a lot of talent shows. I've heard a lot of singers. But Adam, I need to be very clear: this isn't about your age. If you were fifteen, twenty-five, even fifty-five, that performance would still be extraordinary. The fact that you're five only makes it more… more impossible."

He gestured at me with his pen. "Do you understand? That wasn't impressive for a five-year-old. That was impressive. Full stop."

Hasselhoff nodded hard, pointing like Piers had just nailed it. "Exactly!"

The audience cheered again, clapping and stomping their feet, making the whole floor rumble.

Brandy wiped at her eyes with the back of her hand. "Honestly, I'm trying so hard not to cry again. Adam, you just made an entire theater of strangers feel something real, and that's rare, even for grown-up professionals. You're a gift."

The crowd applauded softer now, like they agreed with every word.

"Alright," Hasselhoff said, sitting up straighter and clapping his hands together once. "I think it's time to vote. Brandy?"

Brandy didn't even hesitate. "That's a yes from me."

Piers smiled faintly, rare for him. "Yes. Absolutely."

"And you already know where I stand," Hasselhoff said, slapping the desk. "Adam, you're going to the next round!"

The crowd rose to their feet again, a wall of cheers and screams. It was deafening, almost drowning out the music sting the producers played whenever a contestant advanced.

I turned my head slightly, toward the wings of the stage. My mother was standing there. She had both hands pressed against her face, tears streaming between her fingers. Her shoulders shook with laughter and sobs all at once, like she couldn't reconcile what she'd just seen with the boy she raised.

When I walked off stage, the cheering still thundered behind me.

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Backstage was chaos. Crew members swarmed with clipboards, wires, cameras. Other contestants, kids and adults alike, stared as I passed. Some whispered, some just looked stunned. One older contestant, maybe in his twenties, muttered under his breath, "What the hell was that? He's five?"

The little girl I'd met earlier — Ellie, the ballerina — came bouncing toward me, still in her tutu, her cheeks flushed from performing. "Adam! Adam! You were amazing! You're my little brother forever now, okay?" She tried to hug me, but my mother swept in first, scooping me up like I was two instead of five.

She buried her face in my hair, muttering words too quiet for anyone else to hear.

A producer in a headset approached. "Adam, that was incredible. Stay close, we'll need you for an interview segment. And, uh—" He looked at my mom. "Ma'am, I just want to say… your son might've just created one of the most talked-about moments of the season."

My mother sniffled dramatically, nodding like she already knew.

I sat there quietly, legs dangling in her arms, listening to the chaos whirl around me. Contestants comparing notes, crew members running on deadlines, fans sneaking glances. Everyone buzzing like bees around a hive.

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